ff:intezaar updated PT.53 PG122 13/9 - Page 58

Created

Last reply

Replies

805

Views

149.1k

Users

63

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

harianjana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
thank u dear. Thaks a lot ...😊
harianjana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: masumasrilanka

THANK YOU HARRY FOR LOVELY UPDATE.NOW AM IN SRI LANKA FOR HOLIDAYS N MAYBE WONT BE ABLE TO COMMENT IT DOENT MEAN I WILL NOT COME HERE I WILL DROP BY WHENEVER POSSILBE

Thanks a lot dear...

Its okay dear..

I am so happy that u were taking time from ur busy schedule and was coming here to read my FF,

thats enough for me dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
harianjana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

PART 37- kiss and fun

Radhika was abt to scream when some one kept their hand on her mouth. Radhika opened her eyes and found the room dark. Radhika then heard a voice "Radhika Main hu Dev"(Radhika, its me Dev)

Radhika tried to get the mouth on her hand off and Dev realizing it took his hands back. Radhika whispered and said "Dev ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho"(Dev, what are u doing?)

Dev smiled and said "Bakwaas nahi Love"(Its not Bakwaas, its love)

Radhika:Kya, u are mad, and was abt to go when she realized that she was got hold by two strong arms

Radhika:Dev chodo na(Dev Leave me)

Dev:Nahi, jab tak tum mujhe kiss nahi dogi tab tak nahi chidunga(I won't leave u, till u kiss me )

Radhiak:Koi dekhega(Some one will see)

Dev:Koi nahi dekhega(None will see)

Radhiak:Koi aagaya toh??(If ever any one comes?)

Dev:Sab upar aur neeche busy hain(Every one were busy in up and down stairs), now we are in middle. No one had time to see us./

Radhiak:Servants will come to clean

Dev:This room was already cleaned by them

Radhika: Please Dev

Dev: I am also saying Please Radhika

Radhika: Acha Close ur eyes

Dev:Okay.

Dev closed his eyes and Radhika hesitatingly gave him a peck on his head

Dev:Whats this

Radhika:U asked me kiss na

Dev: I doesn't want it there,I want it on correct place.

Radhiak:No way

Dev:Yes way

Radhika got her released form his arms and was moving back.

Dev was moving towards her and she was moving back, at a point Radhika touched the wall and Dev leaned front on to her,Dev said "Mng ki kiss abhi le raha hun. "

Radhika tried to move side, but Dev blocked the route with his arms and said "Every time same trick won't apply my dear..."

Radhika giving up closed her eyes and her lips were shivering. Dev leaned forward and touched his lips to hers. At first Radhika didn't react but with in no matter she too gave up and started to kiss him. Dev and Radhika was forgetting the whole word between them. They were in a state like they were in a vacuum and were completely forgetting themselves feeling the nectar of love. Radhika now having her arms around Dev and were holding his shirt tight. Dev too was hugging Radhika tightly. The time seemed to be stopped between them. They remained like that for the time unknown

The first to regain senses was Dev. He stopped kissing and released her, but Radhika was still closing her eyes, taking all that warmth and feel in. She was still hugging him keeping her head on his chest. Dev smiled stroking her hair and said "Radhika, Doesn't u wanna leave"

Radhika: No

Dev: Some one may see

Radhika: Let them

Dev: Okay fine then, Radhika aren't u angry on me for teasing u this way

Radhika now took back her head form his chest and was standing straight said "Nahi Dev Koi apni chaya se yaa apni aatma se naaraj ho sakhta hain kya"(Not at all Dev, how can any one be angry on her soul or shadow?)

Dev smiled and said :Radhika, U asked me for six months but i fear May be I can't.

Radhika:U can yaar. I am sure, Because my Kanha will help u.

Dev:Kanha ka naam aaya toh, I got remembrance of Khana(Food), now chalo, I am really hungry

Radhika:Lets go, may be all are worrying where I am

Dev:Okay then U go first I will follow u

Radhika : Wait a minute. she went near the mirror and checked her self if ever every thing is alright and then moved out.

Radhika saw down and find Rick leaving.

Radhika went up and Shalini asked "Radhika, Kaha ho"(Radhika, where are u?)

Radhika:I went down yaar, I am in study room

Aanchal:That only I checked in Kitchen U weren't there, and those kitchen people, they were like some chefs form a five star hotel


Radhika smiled.

Ria:Its Right Radhu, every thing was like I am in some palace. really. Its so good , if ever I know that leaving house can make some one come into here, I would have done it long back

Radhika:Nahi Ria, never think like that, even enemy should have the pain of being away from their family.

Ria: Chill darling

Radhika smiled. and then Dev came

Armesh:Dev where are u man

Dev:Oh Oh I was just relaxing a bit, doesn't know why but My head was aching

Soniya:It will be when u didn't have good amnt of rest from two days./ But Dev ur face looks fresh now. good

Dev who was behind Radhika said in low voice "suna Na, they were saying that I am looking fresh"

Radhika remained silent but pinched him on his back

Dev:oUchhh

Shalini:What happened bhaiyya

Dev:Nothing looks like some mosquito caught my back

Radhika:Machar hain na, khatne par problem hi hoga(They are mosquitoes na when they come and injure u, there will be problem) . Any way Shalini neeche aajayiye, we can be free now. Wo angrezi chal gaya(Any way, Shalini, come down, we will be free now as that english man went off)

Varun:Vo china wala chal gaya, warna aur kitni kharab kar diya hoga humaara language ko.(Finally that china wala went off, other wise don't know, how much did he destroy our language)

"Varun Spare it off yaar"

Radhika saw back to find Eshwar and nickie.

Radhika was surprised " Eshu"

Eshwar:Yes dear, mere bina aap sab enjoy kar rahe hain, not fair(U are enjoying with out me, its not fair)

Asmi came from their back and "Haan eshu, monkeys ke bina kahi bhi enjoyment kaise hota hain"(How can there be any enjoyement, without monkeys)

All busted into laugh

Nickie:Asu I will kill u rey for sure..

Asmi:Acha. toh kill karo yaar

Nickie:Kya

Asmi:Just kidding

Radhika ab bas bas, mujhe bhuk lag rahe ho, chalo(Now enough, I am hungry, lets go)

Dev:Haan haan mujhe bhi.(Yeah yeah, even me too)

When ever Radhika heard Dev's voice she was getting remembrance of the kiss which make her hard to control her blush

They all came down and by then Shankar was abt to come up "Arey u people came down already"

Radhika:Yeah, I saw him going so called them. we are hungry

Shankar:Chalo. chalo, I am also hungry

Radhika:What U didn't eat

Shankar:Nope, How can I eat with out u all, I invited u all and now leave u

Manoj:Wow Uncle its so sweet of u.

shankar smiled and they all went for dining. All were eating and praising the taste and Shankar was observing them all and getting remembrance of their child hood. Shankar suddenly see every thing around him changing into the house in Vrindavan including dining table. He saw around and saw his child form sitting there.His mother was running behind him to make him eat and at one side, Raj and Mohan was fighting for some thing

His father was laughing for some joke cracked by Sharada ji. Ranjiv was keeping is book at end of table and was studying and he went to him and took of his book. Ranjiv started to run behind him and Ammaji stopped him. Stopping him she started to taunt him for making me problematic. Sheetal was taunting savitri, for giving much lineance to him. He went behind her pallu and hiding there teased her mother
Savitri was smiling and then Sharada came form back and kept a morsel in his mouth. He ate it and Sharada only continued to feed him along with savitri,Susheel came there complaining that sharada wasn't feeding him and Sheetal smiled and started to feed him.

Shankar looked at jerk as Asmitha called him.

Shankar:Huh

Asmitha:Where are u.

Shankar:Nothing. Bolo

Asmitha;Wo kal aap bhi Vrindavan aa rahe hain na(U are coming to Vrindavan tomorrow, right)

Shankar:Haan Main aa raha hun, aur maine Maan-geet ko bhi inform kiya(I am coming, and i informed Maaneet too)

Asmitha:Thik hain chachaji, (Fine uncle)

Radhiak was smiling eating with them. Shankar smiled as she saw her smiling and thought to himself "She was smiling truly not faking as she used to do in these three months. But why did u come from there Radhika. U love them this much but u came out why. May be destiny wanna make u feel sad for some time. But that pain which I found in college, that too wasn't there in ur eyes now. U are behaving like a free bird. What's this change. Some thing is different but what."

Dev was looking at Radhika at same time "Thanks Kanha, u got Radhika her family, and now she was happy. I can never forgive my self for paining her, but it can't be done anything now. But I promise myself that I will try to give her all the happiness in the world Kanha. I promise my self"

After they had some good time and then Radhika asked "Baavji, actually Kal ek pooja kiya jaa raha tha Vrindavan mein, ghar ki achai ke liye, is ke liye, Papa ne Maan aur geet ka nakshtra lene ke liye kaha"(Actually tomorrow, in Vrindavan, we are keeping a pooja for the good sake of home. papa asked me to take the Nakshatra of Maan and Geet)

Shankar:Maan's is Bharani nakshatra and Geet's can u ask her I ain't sure.

Radhiak nodded and asked "Bhai's"

Shankar:Vuska, Vishaka nakshatra

Dev:Wow. Vishaka nakshatr, ye toh mera bhi hain(Vishaka Nakshtra, its mine)

Shankar smield and said "Rohan ka hain"

Dev:Ohhh

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

They all chatted and after getting bored...

Varun:I have an idea, why won't we play Music chairs, we will have full mazaa

Eshwar:Good idea. what say uncle

Shankar smiled and said "You people play, I will be near music"

Dev:Uncle, aap bhi khelo na(Uncle u too play)


Shankar: U are kids, u play

Radhika:Okay baavuji, we will play. Chalo yaar, ...

Asmi:One minute I will bring the chairs

Arshad:Chalo. I will help u in bringing them

Asmi and Arshad have a eye lock and Radhika cleared her throat to say then that Shankar was there...

Asmi and Arshad are startled and Radhika smiled and said :Jo bhi ho, jaldi laao"(What ever, come soon)

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

The chairs were arranged in a round way and Shankar was at the music section...

Asmi took a chair and stood on it all laughed asmi mentioned the rules after discussing with Shankar..

All started to laugh to see asmi on chair

Eswar:What rey ... became rowdy rani?

Asmi:Shut up, and now I will announce the rules

Manoj:Are we any kids to get the rules... we should have played Music chairs a lot of times right

Asmi:Right point Manoj, but indeed its not the normal Musical chair but its the musical chairs of couples

Armesh:Means...

Asmi:Means..., the deletion will be inform of couples and every time when music offs and at last the couple that remains is done to do the final round as single participants and from those both we will get the winner

Rickie:Arey what if two men or two women are out in a round

Asmi:Then that round will be canceled

Soniya:Its good. uncle well formulated

Shankar smiled and they started the game...


First round...

The song "Pehla pehla pyaar hain " was being played and all are clapping and dancing and moving around the chairs...

Radhika was looking at Dev on the way and Dev too and were smiling and dancing...

The song continued...

Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai
Pehli Pehli Baar Hai
Jaan Ke Bhi Anjaana
Kaisa Mera Yaar Hai..

Uski Nazar, Palkon Ki Chilman Se Mujhe Dekhti, Uski Nazar
Uski Haya, Apni Hi Chaahat Ka Raaz Kholti, Uski Haya
Chhup Ke Kare Jo Wafa, Aisa Mera Yaar Hai
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai ...


and it had a small jerk and some tried to sit...

but the song continued...

Wo Hai Nisha, Wo Hi Meri Zindagi Ki Bhor Hai, Wo Hai Nisha
Use Hai Pata, Uske Hi Haathon Mein Meri Dor Hai, Use Hai Pata
Saare Jahan Se Juda, Aisa Mera Pyaar Hai
Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai

the song stopepd and all rushed to the seats. First was Radev to sit and later...

Finally Manoj and Pia were out...

they came out and sat with Shankar again two chairs were removed...

Asmi looked at them and said "Its not that easy"

Pia:Matlab

Asmi:U both have to dance

Manoj:What????

Pia:Ye dance wance I won't do

Asmi looked at Shankar... Shankar smiled and said "Manj-Pia please..."

Manoj finally nodded and they were on to...

"The song repeated and they were dancing in waults. repeatedly..."

As song compleetd every one clapped them and they went and sat

Now the second round...


Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake
Ho ho ho...

again the same reptition all are moving around and trying to hide their feelings for their partners as Shankar was there...

Radhika was smiling imagining her self and Dev

Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake
Tumse gila nahin mujhe kismat se hai gile
Karta hai aasmaan kyoon yeh dil ke faisle
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake

The song stopped and this time Ria and rickie were out...

Ria:I am not out, hey asmi u should be out...

Shankar: Ria dear, don't cheat. take it sportive yaar

Third round continued...

Mehandi lagake rakhna...
dholi sajake rakhna...
Lene tujhe yakhori
aayenge tere sajna

Dev winked to Radhika at this song and Radhika smile.

...

The song stopped and this time Eswar and Nickie were out

fourth round - the song continued with sil silaa ye chahat ka and in this round Birju-Shalini were out

Fifth round - kuch kuch hota hain title song - this time armesh and arshad were out, so again the round continued with the same song and finally armesh and soniya were out

sixth round - finally asmi and Arshad were out.

the final couple remained were Radev. All clapped for them and Radev had individual competition The song humesha tum ko chaha was playing. Soniya whishpered to Pia "Arey this song, how much it suits them na"

Pia:Haan

Radhika and Dev are moving. Radhika was getting remembrance of every instance when she remembered him...

Dev whishpered to Radhika "What happened"

Radhika back into her game mood "Kuch nahi D.P apni game par concentrate karo"(Nothing D.P Concentrate on ur game)

Dev:Really!! I don't know. same to u maam

Radhika: I will win

Dev:D.P doesn't know the meaning of loose too

Radhika;All the best

Dev:Hey what say what is the bet of win

Radhika:Bolo

Dev: Okay fine If I win today night we both will spend time together, if u win we both will eat together

Radhika: Whats this, donomm imppossible hain

Dev:U has to select one of the both, u select

Radhika:I will win

Dev winked to her whishpering and said "Lets see"

The music was going on and. Radhika was trying to move faster

Finally the music came to a halt and Radhika and Dev both sat on the bean bag at a time...

Asmi said "Oh shit, now its a tie"

Shankar got a phone and he attended it

He came there and said 'Radhika, Dev aap donom ko R.P Hospital aane ka kaha(RP, said u both to come to hospital)

Radhika concerned "Its not serious right

Shankar:No, it isn't serious, but u people go there...

Radhika we will leave

Dev too nodded and they left...

Dev wasa tensed regarding Daadima , Radhika observed his hands shaking during he was driving. Radhika asured him "Daadima ko kuch nahi hoga"(Nothing will happen to her)

Dev:Aisa nah Radhika, jab bhi hum donom bahut kush hota hain tabhi kuch na kuch hote hain. Isliye mujhe bahut tension ho raha hain(When ever, we both will be very happy, some thing happens. that's why I am worried)

Radhika:Aisa nahi, shayad, Daadi ko humein dekhne ka man kar raha hoga.(Nothing like that, may be she wants to see us)

Dev:If so they can call us right

Radhika:Hey I chekced my phone there are 10 missed calls. all are from Papa only. what will he do say

Dev:I am really worried Radhika

Radhika:Kanha hain na, he will never do some thing bad for us

The car stopped at the hospital and Radhika rushed in...

Radhika directly proceeded to I.C.U but she was stopped and was asked for the visitor pass.

Radhika:What the hell is it, I am here to see R.P's mother. I am his daughter, let me in

R.P:Radhika what happpened

Radhika:See papa, he is asking me for a pass

R.P:Guard I provided u a pass earlier in name of Radhika sharma and Dev purohith right.. here is Radhika sharma, please send Dev purohith too.

Guard:Okay sir, but its I.C.U only two members can stay a time, u and ur wife has to step out

R.P:I know , we are coming out let them in

Radhika:Papa, kuch serious toh nahi hain na(Nothing is serious right)

R.P:Not at all. Maa wanna see u both so...

Radhika:U said u will talk abt discharge dates today

R.P:Yeah, its most probably tomorrow

Radhika:Really so good, means Daadi can atted the pooja tomorrow/

R.P smiled and said "Yes"

Radhika:Papa, please call shalini too, she was tensed

R.P:Wo sab aagaye(Did they all came?)

Radhika:Haan, wo sab humaare saath baavuji ki ghar mein hain(Yeah they all are with me in baavuji's house)

R.P:Cool then

Radhika:Why not u people leave to home for some time, me and Dev will manage here


R.P:Okay beta


Vaishali:Radhika, u came!!!. Go in... where;s Dev

Radhika:Maa, he's parking car.

Vaishali:Fine u leave, I will send him in.

Radhika:Okay maa, I hope u people get food, Vishaka didi sent them here

Vaishali:Khana kis ne banaya(Who did food)

Radhika:Ammaji and Vishaka cooked them,

Vaishali :Mrinalini?

Radhika:Maa, actually didi ko kaam hain na, isliye maine hi vusko jaane ke liye kaha. Kyun Khana acha nahi hain(Di had some work, so I only sent her. why food wasn't good?)

Vaishali:Nothing like that, ammaji cooks well I know it. But they were doing work

Radhika winking whishpered "Kya karro, they both are gaining cholestrol na, for that they are feeling a lot. so I only asked them to cook"

Vaishali slapping her lightly "Chal pagal. Go make daadima laugh. she will be relieved a bit"

Radhika:For sure.

Radhika left in she saw Daaima there sitting on the bed leaning to the head board and hugged her from side. "How are u"

Daadima:Mere Radharnai mujhe waapas milgayi na(I got my radharani Back na), I will be fine

Radhika now was having tears from her eyes "U na... I said that I will come back right. why u kept this much pain for sake of me"


Daadima smiled and said "When my Dev left me and went then also I am cool, becoz u are there with me. But the day u went off na, I felt like I lost one of the parts from my body. Never even think of going away from me"

Radhika:I promise, I will never leave u

Dev:What is the emotional drama going on here

Radhika wiping off her tears... "Is it any saas bahu drama to have Emotional drama"

Dev getting a stool near to Daadima's bed and serving her feet "Hey Radhu, some times u will become that rona dhona heroines of those soaps."

Radhika:Acha... then u are what, that use less hero of the saas bau serial

Dev:No rey I am the very handsome Dev Purohith

Radhika:Yeah yeah, that was only said by every one...

Dev:Yeah atleast famous than u na

Radhika:Really Dev once remember whose famous in our college

Dev:Haan daadima I forgot to say u , u know what happened once a junior came to her and gave her love letter...

Daadima:Really

Radhika:haan vus rascal ko mujhse do chaar tappad bhi milaa(yeah that rascal got, two slaps from me)

Dev:wo toh hain(Yeah)

Radhika:Dev bhi kuch kam nahi, tum jaante ho isko P.H.D karne waali ek sister ne aakar directly I love u bola tha. Ladkiyaan iss par marte hain(Dev was also nothing less, u kwo what, one sister who does PHD came to Dev and proposed him. Girls die for him)

Daadima:Dev!!!!!

Dev:Nahi nahi daadima, I never even used to see one

Radhika:Wo sister ka kya hain

Dev:She's really beautiful

Radhika pinched him secretly

Dev:Ouch...

daadima:Kya hua

Radhika:Machar laga dadima

Daadima:I thought there were no mosquitoes in room

Radhika:Haan daadima but when we are coming na, a mosquito entered his Pant pocket which bited him now. Hain na Dev

Dev:Haan,

daadima:Wo ladki ka kya hua(What happened to that girl)

Dev:Kis ladki(Whom)

Daadima:Wah tera senior(Ur senior)

Dev:Wo, I said her "Didi, aap ne kya bola?"(I said her, "sister, what did u say?")

Daadima bursted into laugh

Radhika and Dev continued to tease each other in that way and made Daadima laughed, laughing themselves

Daadima thought to her self "Kanha, please make them live togethe for ever. Please make my this wish come true."



---------------------------------------------------------------------------

Thanks to every one for ur beautiful comments 🤗

I am trying my best to bring the romance between radev, but I am really poor in those parts, so bare my ones. and please please don't throw chappals at me.

I hope u love the fun parts too.

and please feel free to click like button and comment, if ever u like the part 😊😊😊😊😊😊

😊Hari Anjana😊





Strawbella thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update need to read from first:)
im_suchithra thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update yar!! keep doing..
Myra.nelly thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Hari, i'll b having sm free time these day ,so i am eager to catch up with this story 😊
harianjana thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Hari, i'll b having sm free time these day ,so i am eager to catch up with this story 😊

wow. so finally after a long time u got some time.

How are ur studies and every thing dear...

Read read, and after reading don't throw chappals at me 😉
DAIRY25 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
THANKS HARI 👍🏼 !!!
fatssrilanka thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update & enjoyed RaDev moments.They were awesome.
ushasri thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update hari thanks for the pm

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".