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Saviour...




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Prologue


Mumbai sapnon ki nagari...jahan har kisi ke sapne sakar hote hain...har koi apni hi duniya mein masroof (busy) hai...kisi ko kisi ki koi fikar nahin...koi jiye mare kisi ko is se koi lena dena nahin...har samay har waqt har koi bas apni manzil tak pohnche ki jaldi mein hai... [Mumbai the city of dreams where everyone's dream get fulfilled...but everyone is busy in their own tasks and dont have time for others..everyone just want to reach their destination]

isse shahir Mumbai mein hai ek jagah...jahan har koi tayar hai dosre ki madad ke liye...ap bhi chal kar dekhna chahiyen gae...tu lets go... [In this city, there is a place where everyone is ready to help the others...come lets go n see it]

We can a beautifully architecture building...the area around is fully covered wid flowers n grass...on one side their is parking area...n the other has basketball court...

the main entrance of the building is beautifully build making it more exotic with its huge n large glass...main people are running here n there...men n women are going in n coming out...a completely different atmosphere is there...

the lobby n reception area is furnished wid orange shaded couches n the gal behind the desk on reception is busy guiding people were to go n also taking phone calls...

men n women wearing white coats r running here n there dealing wid people helping them...the pungent smell of medicine is making the atmosphere more that of the hospital...

that's wat it is...hospital...SANJEEVANI...

the men n women in white coat are the doctors who r running to help ppl...n to give them proper medicine...

today the climate is bit cloudy...n seems like its gonna rain soon...all the doctors busy going their duties n soon its tym for them to leave as it already 8 pm n they should go home to come again next day for their dutoes...we can see someone standing near the entrance of Sanjeevani...wearing black long shoes n pants...wid black overcoat and a hat...he is looking for someone...but when he see four ppl coming out of Sanjeevani...he hid himself behind the car n keep his eye on them...

the four ppl came out...3 gals n 1 boy...they exchanged pleasantries...biding gudbye...move to their respective cars to go home...2 in one car n the boy n gal in another...

After the left the man come out n took his cell fone calling someone...

the bell ringed n someone picked the fone...

its completely dark n nothing can be seen...the person was sitting on a rocking chair n was rocking it back n forth...

Man in black at Sanjeevani : Sir gals just left from here may be going home...

Boss: ok gr88...keep ur eyes on them...i want them at any cost...did u get that "he shouted...

Man: y...ye...yes Sir 'he answered afraid from his masters anger...

Boss: Shashi Gupta now i will see who is gonna save ur daughters from my clutches "n laugh an evil laugh"



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Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii
awesome start
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW Awesome FF...👏
Update Soon n Thnx 4 d PM...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Prologue. Please continue and Pm me.
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👏wowww
very interesting dear
loved it😊
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Very very nice start👏!!
Con soon..
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really interesting darling..
superrb prologue.. update it soon..OKK
awesome work !!
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loved the prologue can't wait for more please english translation for hindi used thanks

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