Streets of KOTA ( EXCERPT REAL EXPERIENCE )

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

Streets of KOTA ( EXCERPT REAL EXPERIENCE )

Whenever i thought that i will be safe, i have always reminded of fear...😲

fear to being alone..fear of being hidden😲

far from my house i'm living to fullfill my dreams...😛

no body here known😕 , nobody here came...😕

i was searching my destination😊 and came to know the only

thing which can give me space is Steerts of this city😳 where students came and go...

life changes...in a moment or so...😳

in every street, u can find students...😳

learning..studieng...doing fun..😳.

in every house u can find a PG there in...😳

in those small rooms...big big dreams live 😃

and to overcome lonely fear strangers meet and giggles...😳

situations make it hard but they dont make frienship slip...😳

the noise...crowd u find ,only in the streets of Kota...(Rajasthan)😳

my experience is shown here and My friend Achin requested me to make this poem...or exerpt...

regards dev😳

Edited by DevvivekAshNI - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Clever.Foxxy
i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.

thnx 4 appreciation! Clever foxxy. Yup ,wil take care dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI
thnx 4 appreciation! Clever foxxy. Yup ,wil take care dear.

u r welcome :)

and pls write more poems

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Clever.Foxxy

u r welcome :)
and pls write more poems

okie pls give me a subject pls

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI
okie pls give me a subject pls

friendship, love, hate, betrayal, loneliness, loyalty ... choose anything 😛

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

Realy? Is it necesary 2 write on them? Anything else pls

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI
Realy? Is it necesary 2 write on them? Anything else pls

actually, write on anything that ur heart tells u 2.. if i give u some topic, then its gonna get hard for u.. so its best to write on what ur real feelings are onnn .. like whatever u r feeling, write on it..

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Atharva Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Clever.Foxxy

actually, write on anything that ur heart tells u 2.. if i give u some topic, then its gonna get hard for u.. so its best to write on what ur real feelings are onnn .. like whatever u r feeling, write on it..

hmm thnx u again,u r realy appreciation for me! Yup sure write my feelings r u also writer?