VIRMAN OS:You r mine..only mine[UPDATED PT 2 PG 5]

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys u must be surprised to see my os after a long long time...i was getting super bored today so thought of writing this one hope u enjoy reading it...

its the part after manvi confesses to virat...

PART 1:PAGE 1

PART 2:PAGE 5


You r Mine Only Mine...

After 7 days...


She was sitting in front of the mirror'..talking to herself she said "akir chep tum ne mere muh se bhulwahi liya na'..tumeh mein kuch kehe bhi nahi sakthi.itne cute jo ho tum" and starts blushing as she sees the refection of her man in the mirror'.virat comes close to her she gets nervous'..she remembers the previous night wer she cudnt control herself she hugged him so tightly and blurted out that she loves him''and the kisses he gave her''the kisses she gave him wernt that ease to run away from her mind''.she was remembering the passionate moment still blushing''

He comes near her'..embraces her from back she closes her eyes'he slowly goes near her ears and says "manvi jaise mene wada kiya tha tumare I Love u sunne ke baad mein yaha se chal jaonga'."

"Toh mein abhi nikal raha hoon"''..manvi is shocked she opens her eyes and tears start flowing''''till yesterday evening she wanted him to go but after the last night spend with him those beautiful moments.she never wanted him to go out of her sight''.she sits down on the floor in shock virat also sits and asks her "kya hua tum bhi toh yehi chahthi thin a mein yahan se chala jaon"

She is still weeping'.he cudnt see her crying anymore.he says"arey mein toh mazak kar raha tha paagal hoon kya apne pyar ko chodke jaane ke liye"

"Jab mein jaoonga tumeh lekar hi jaoonga"

She hits him naughtily and hugs him and says"agli baar aisa mazak kiya tho"

Virat:tho

Manvi:tho

Virat:tho kya????

Manvi:she blushes and holds him even more tighter''.

Virat holds her face and makes her comfortable''she lys on his lap he makes her sleep in lap after sometime he carries her to the bed and makes her sleep there'.he sits next to her for sometime and leaves the room as he gets the call from viren''.

Viren:mere bhai kaise ho sab teek hain maanvi ne'.

Virat:haan bhai maanvi ne aakir mein accept kar liya ki wo bhi mujse pyaar karthi hain.

Viren:*smiles * he is happy'mein bahut kush hoon virat tumareliye'saali saibha se fon dena zara'.

Virat goes inside the room to see if she is awake'.as he enters he sees manvi drooling over his pic in her hand.as he enter she hides it.virat naughtily smiles and gives her the fon''

Maanvi:jiju kiase ho aap'

Viren:mein teek hoon'aapka haal kaisa hain

Maanvi:*blushing* jiju'.

Viren:thank u manvi tumne virat ko uske zindagi ki sabse badi khushi de di'..tuje nahipata tumari haan se who kitna khush hain'

Manvi:pata hain jiju uski khushi ko mein mehesus kar sakthi hoon''.aur mene use haan bhi isliye kaha kyunki mein samaj chuki thi mujse door rehekar who kabhi khush nahi reh pata'''

Viren:badi samajdaar ho gayi hain meri saali sahebha'.

Manvi:teek hain jiju baat mein baat karthi hoon'

Viren:haan haan ab humareliye toh time nahi rehega aapko'.jaye apne partner urf life partner ke pass

Manvi:plzz jiju aap bhi'

*fon call ends*

All the wile she was on fon virat was looking at her smiling'..she goes near him and encloses him with her both hands she goes near his ears and says I love u and kisses his cheeks'''..

Virat is surprised to see such a behavior from manvi'..but he wasn't bothered he jus wanted to enjoy that moment''he too brings her closer and kisses her forehead'cheeks and slowly comes down to her neck'wen he hears the knock on the door he stops...



DO COMMENT GUYS...

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Adenah.NiShal thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AMAZING!!!! Do Continue and pls pm me when u do😃
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brilliant job

very very wrong timing to stop plz continue and pm me
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loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adenah

AMAZING!!!! Do Continue and pls pm me when u do😃


sure yaar i had no idea of continuing but now will do once i get some free time...
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it's gr8...👍🏼
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Amazing!!! PM me when you update!
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Great work...continue soon & pm me if u can😊
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As always great work...all ur writings are amazing...Totally loved it...Do continue and PM me...
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wowww very nice... loved it...

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