New AarYa FF; K@$hm@k@$h IMP NOTE pg 79 - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
just finished reading your fff...and fell in love with it continue soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
absolutely lovely update..👏
really loved how Yash was showing concern towards Aartis daughters 😳 and when he said that how could he eat when his best friend was hungry.. 😳
Poor Ansh missing his mumma and Yash so sad when he talks to Arpitas picture.. 😭
Gayatri and Mr. Scindia are soon gonna do something for their son 😉
thanks for an amazing update 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved d update dear!!!!!
Wow..Loved Yashs care towards Aartis daughters... Hmm so Old Aarti is back...
Precap is nyc...plzzz cont soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanku So very much for the encouragement and support u guys gave me for this FF...I will surely try and make it an interesting story...!!
I am really sorry i could not reply to your comments individually but ur comments and appreciation means a lot to me...please keep giving me the same support in the future too...!!

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Posted: 13 years ago


The English translations of the update are in the brackets...sorry for the mistakes if committed'..But a request if you are comfortable with Hindi please read the update in Hindi only...''

I dedicate this update to my friend maansee...thanks a ton for waiting dear...❤️❤️❤️❤️

Part 13


It was Annual Day function at Ansh, Payal and Palak's school….Both Yash and Aarti went and were sitting together and were enjoying Ansh's performance.. Payal and Palak being new to the school did not participate in the function…

It was a rocking performance by Ansh as the entire crowd loved it to the core…more than that the way he was dressed made him more presentable in front of the public…

Aarti: kitna pyara dance kia na Ansh ne…[how cutely Ansh performed…I so loved the performance…]

Yash: ye sab ansh ki mehnat hai aarti….school se jaate hi prateek ke saath practice mein lag jaata tha….[Its all his efforts aarti…after returning from school he got himself busy in practices with Prateek..]

Aarti: waise muje yaad hai tum bhi to aise hi functions mein part lia karte the na yash…[I remember you even participated in these functions Yash..]

Yash: haan aarti kya din the na vo…[Yes aarti whal old good those were they…]

Aarti: yaad hai yash ek baar tum fancy dress competition mein bhikhari bane the or vo main thi jisne tumhe apni pocket money mein se 10 Rupees diye the…[You remember yash once u acted a s a beggar and I was the first person who gave you Rs. 10 and that too from my own pocket money…]

Yash: haan bana lo mera mazak apna time to bhul gayi na tum…[Aarti ur mocking at me but have you forgotten your own time…]

Aarti : please yash tum bhul rahein ho maine kabhi bhi aise competitions mein part nahin lia…main to hamesha debates or seminars mein hi part leti thi…[Please yash…you have forgotten that I never took part in such competitions…I use to participate in seminars and debates..]

Yash: haan haan tabhi to unn competitions se pehle tumhe meri help ki zarurat padti thi… [yeaahh…that is why u always needed me before all those competitions…]

Payal: mumma aap or yash uncle agar apni fight bad karenge to hum please function enjoy kar le….[Mom if you and Yash uncle will stop your fight so can we please enjoy the functions…]

Yash and Aarti both felt embarrassed with those words of the little girl…they sat quietly with no other option than to enjoy the rest of function….It was now interval of the competition…Ansh came in running to Yash but he was in very sad mood…

Yash: kya baat hai Ansh aapne aisi shakal kyu banayi hui hai…? Aaj to apka performance bhi sabse acha tha…[What happened ansh…why are u so sad?? Today ur performance was even very good…]

Ansh starts crying hugging yash and that too badly….neither Yash is able to understand nor is Aarti….he keeps crying which makes Yash worried…

Yash: kya baat hai ansh batao muje…[what happened Ansh tell me?]

Ansh: papa muje meri mumma wapis laake do….[Dad bring my mom back..]

Yash feels so heartbroken….he doesnot know what to say…..he himself is shattered…..

Yash: baat kya hai ansh aaj se pehle to kabhi bhi aapne aise behave ni kia….[What is the matter Ansh…u never spoke like that before…]

Ansh: papa mere sab friends ki mummy aaj competition mein part le rahi hai or vo sab muje chida rahein hai….[dad all my friends and their mom are taking part in competition and all of them are teasing me..]

Yash: kaisa competition? [Which competition?]

Ansh: aaj ek competition hai jimse hum sab ko apne mothers ka saath painting competition mein part lena hai [there is a competition in which we have to take part with our mothers in a painting competition]

Aarti: ansh agar aaj apki aunty apke saath participate karein to? [Ansh what if your aunt participates with you?]

Yash is speechless by this now….

Aarti: haan yash agar tumhe sahi lagein to kya main ansh ke saath iss competition mein part le lu?[Yes Yash if you think so can I take part in the competition with Ansh?]

Yash: par aarti tum?[but aarti you?]

Aarti: its okay yash ab main or ansh ye competition jeet ke hi ayenge….[its okay yash now me and Ansh will come after winning the competition…]

Yash did not say anything looking at a smiling face of his son….he supports aarti with her decision….he sits back with payal and palak and waits for both of them to return…Here Aarti registers her name as Ansh's relative, the school administration even lets her participate in the competition…

Both Ansh and Aarti finally come out winning the competition that makes the little kid really happy…

Ansh: papa hum jeet gaye….dekho hamari painting….[dad we won…look at the painting….]

Yash is really pleased with this effort of his best friend…he thanks aarti for all he did for him and Ansh

Yash: thanks aarti…tumne aaj jo kuch bhi kia…[Thanks Aarti for everything you have done..]

Aarti: please yash aise mat kaho….Ansh ke liye main kuch kar payi …or haan ab kafi der ho gayi hum bhi chalte hai mummy papa hamara intezaar kar rahein honge…{Please yash don't say like that….im glad I could do something for Ansh…And its too late …we shud leave mom dad must be waiting for us..]

Yash: thik hai Aarti main tumhe drop kar deta hu…[alright I will drop you…]

Both of them leave from the school…here at Schindhiya Mansion all are happy to see Ansh with a trophy he had bagged..

Ansh: daadi dekho aaj maine painting competition bhi jeeta…aarti aunty ne mere saath part lia tha…[Grandma I even won the painting competition…Aarti aunty took part with me..]

Gayatri: mere bacha…kisiki nazaar na lagein….ja ab jakar aarm kar le…[my child…I hope god protects u from all evil's eye….go and have some rest…]

He goes and here yash even follows him but Mr schindia stops him..

Mr. Schindia: to yash kya socha tumne? [so yash what have u decided?]

Yash: kiss baarein mein? [about what?]

Mr. Schindia: tum ache se jaante ho yash hum kya baat kar rahein hai…apne liye nahin to ansh ki khushi ke liye hi kuch socho yash…aaj ek chotte se competition ne uss massom bache ke chehre par kitni khushi di …maine faisla kar lia hai Yash or tumhe bhi usse manna hi hoga…[you know what am I talking about? If not about you think for Ansh…a small competition has brought smile on that innocent face..i have made a decision..]

Precap: Shobha: Aarti waqt aa gaya hai ki tum apne liye bhi kuch socho…[Aarti its time now to think for yourself..]

Do tell how did you find today's update?? And if you liked that please hit the like button and do comment...it really means a lot to me...😳😳😳

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Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Golu di..
Wht an adorable update...
I loved it..

I loved hw Yash n Aarti were making fun of each other..
N i cant believe.. Yash became a bhikari...
🤣 omg dis ws hilarious..

I loved hw Aarti came front n tuk part wd Ansh..
She does considers Ansh a lot more dan wht she says...

Aahhh.. Mr. Scindia finally takes a step ahead..
N i love it..

Waitin for d nxt update..
Love u Golu di..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hilarious update...😆😆😆

loved it so much...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update waiting for aarya love track !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was an adorable update. Loved that Aarti took part in the competition with Ansh. Great job as usual and do continue soon.

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