OS : At First Sight...(last part @ pg 29) 15 July - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Would we get an update today
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Posted: 13 years ago
not today... mayb tomorrow...if not then definitely on 14th...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
lvd it alot...

lvd ur song choice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5: (Last part)




They say Love at First Sight is not possible, they say how can you just fall for someone by just looking at them, they say it is just attraction at First Sight, but only the ones who have fallen in love will be able to answer this.




It was Love At First Sight for them. The moment they laid eyes on each other, they knew they could never look anywhere else. Their eyes spoke volumes, their words fail to describe their feelings. And they knew they were in love.




People gathered in the Khurana Mansion for the engagement of the beloved couple, Maan & Geet.




After Meera's wedding, the next day Savitri Devi, when went to her Muh Dikhai, the first thing she asked was, whether she can introduce her to Geet's parents.




It was more than Meera even imagined. She thought that once she goes her home for Pag phere, she will go to Geet's house, will ask her, talk to her parents, but here Savitri Devi solved all her problems.




While Savitri Devi knew that Meera is the only one who had seen what she had in the eyes of Maan and Geet. And she wanted them to be together. After meeting with Geet's mother, they talked about meeting with each other's family. Savitri Devi happily obliged telling her that they will come on the weekend.




Maan and Geet both were upset when told that their family has selected their better half for them, and they will be meeting soon. Both did ot know how to refuse, they tried, but could not argue. Finally, they thought that once they meet, they will tell the other person that they are not ready and already committed to someone else.




Shock would be a small word to describe their feeling, when they saw each other. While Maan was grinning and even gave a hug to his dadi maa, who just winked on his gesture, while Geet was all the time blushing.




Finally their engagement date was selected after one week, to which Maan was more than upset. But he can never ignore his Mishti's plead when she asked him to agree, with of course their little eye talking session. The only relief he got was that they will be married after two weeks of engagement.




So, here they are, together, waiting to be bound to each other forever.




"Ladies and Gentleman, I, Yash Singh Khurana, welcome you tothe engagement ceremony of my big brother with his love. I want to tell you their love story, but I will not, since my big bro is glaring at me for saying all this. But I will not leave him today, as Maan Singh Khurana ko satane ka mauka baar baar thodi na milta hai."




While he was saying all this, Maan was embarrassed but hid it but Geet was all red hearing this.




"So here I present to you all, Rahat Fateh Ali Khan Saab, who is one important person in their life, without whom they would not have met, or actually got lost in each other."




All were surprised to hear this, especially Maan and Geet, that Yash actually invited him to their engagement.




Rahat Fateh Ali Khan sahab, took the small stage prepared for him and spoke in the mike, "First of all, I would like to Congratulate the couple on this auspicious occasion. Mr. Yash told me they fell in love when they met for the first time, and I was there. So, he asked me to be here also on their special occasion. The song which I am going to sing is not originally sung by me, but my uncle, Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan sahab, but I think this situation calls for that song only. This is dedicated to the them," indicating to Maan and Geet.




Koi jaane koi na jaane ye parwaane hote hain deewane
Koi jaane koi na jaane ye parwaane hote hain deewane
Dekho ye do parwaane hain dono hi deewane
Jab se mili hai aankhein hosh hain dono hi ke gum
Kaisa khumaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah





It was true, nobody knew how love changes them, only the ones who have fallen know.




Maan and Geet were just not able to take their eyes off each other. It seemed to them that the whole world faded, and they were the only ones there.





Dekho ye do parwaane hain dono hi deewane
Jab se mili hai aankhein hosh hain dono hi ke gum
Kaisa ghumaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah




It was true, ever since their eyes met, they were not able to look anywhere else, but just see themselves in the eyes of each other. It was their love which was conveyed through their eyes.


Their love was not understood by many people, but they knew what they felt,, and they need not explain it to the world.




Since Yash knew, that Maan and Geet would be too lost in their world to concentrate on anything else, so he had planned with Meera and Dev to perform and tell the feelings of Maan and Geet in the form of this song.





Duniya ko humne bhulaaya jo tumko hai paaya
Pyaar ka naazuk dhaaga humein kahan le aaya
Pyaar ka naazuk dhaaga humein kahan le aaya





It was true Maan had forgotten everything when it came to his Mishti, and their love had made it all possible.





Lekin suno to duniya mein ye kya afsaane hain
Kehte hain duniya waale ki hum deewane hain
Kehte hain duniya waale ki hum deewane hain




Everybody was amazed to see the changes in them, whether it be Maan or Geet. They were not the same individuals as they were before they met each other.





Dil ki baatein ye dil hi jaane
Kab samjhi hain ye baatein duniya ne


To phir mashoor hai jo
Humko manzoor hai vo
Jab se mili hai aankhein hosh hain dono hi ke gum


Kaisa ikraar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah




The Almighty and only their hearts knew what they feel for each other.




Maan anf Geet joined their hands together, standing side by side, with their hands hidden in her dupatta, away from the prying eyes of the world.



Aa...





Dekho to ye lagta hai ki aasaan hai manzil
Socho to dil kehta hai ki aayegi mushkil
Socho to dil kehta hai ki aayegi mushkil




People thought that it was easy for them, but only they knew how difficult it was.




First their meeting, where Maan knew where he would meet his Mishti, and Geet trying to understnad her feeling. Then the separation after the engagement and wedding ceremony of Meera and Dev. The thought that how will they meet each other now.




Though they knew they belong to each other, but the fear of anyone separating them, And when they were told about the marriage proposal, only they knew how they survived in those days. Their heart knew how it felt lifeless without the heartbeat.





Ho dekhne sochna kaisa jo dil hi de daala
Jogi ne to hai pehen li prem ki ye maala
Jogi ne to hai pehen li prem ki ye maala





But they had confidence in their love, that nothing will happen until they are together. And it the end, their Love made it all possible when their family knew how they are meant to be together.






Dil ki baatein ye dil hi jaane
Kab samjhi hain ye baatein duniya ne
To phir mashoor hai jo
Humko manzoor hai vo
Jab se mili hai aankhein hosh hain dono hi ke gum


Kaisa dildaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ghumaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah





Their love is what gives them strength, to be with each other, to not let anything come between them.






Sun le zameen sun le aasmaan
Dono ki pyaar ki ye daastaan
Dono mein hain kaisi deewangi
Dono dilon ne kahe hain kahaan
Sun le zameen sun le aasmaan
Dono ki pyaar ki ye daastaan
Man mein umang leke tan mein tarang leke
Chhod chale dono duniya ki galiyaan





Their love is true portrayal that people do fall in love at first sight, that there still resides the feeling of discovering your true love.




Anyone who sees them can see the love shining in their eyes. They are no more individuals, but one entity.





Inko junoon hai inki sukoon hai
Jab se mili hai aankhein hosh hain dono hi ke gum
Kaisa karaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah




Maan and Geet looked at each other, while their family and friends surrounded them. They had only eyes for each other. Other had to nudge them to break their eye lock, but they did not.




Maan took her hand, slid the engagement ring in her finger, took it to his lips and kissed it gently.




Geet took his hand shyly but maintaining a firm grip, and slid the finger.




Before anyone could congratulate them, Maan took Geet in his embrace and kissed her forehand.



Kaisa ikraar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ikraar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ghumaar hai allah allah
Kaisa ye pyaar hai allah allah





All people present there were spellbound to see their love, their togetherness, their unspoken bond, their inner feelings can be seen in their eyes. They were amazed by looking at the couple in front of them.




It is true, it was LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT, for Maan and Geet, as well as the people present there. They also fell in LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT with the couple standing there, it was like they defined what is LOVE.






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If u liked it, please press the like button and leave me comments...I know this was short and there were very less Maaneet moments...n I am truly sorry for that....but I do hope you enjoyed reading this OS...😳

So, this OS ends now...thnx for all the support you all gave me throughout the 5 parts...🤗

I gave only one part...but with your love, support and demand...I wrote the further parts...😳

Please don't ask me for an epilogue as I have not thought about it......I am leaving IF for a month or more than that...don't know when I will be back...that is why I am not giving u ant false hope...

If you all r still interested if n when I come back..then I will think about it...😊

Thanks to all of you for pressing the like button and commenting on my work...love u all so much...🤗


love
Jyoti


Edited by Tyro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
moi conphused... i only see 1 line
Part 5: (Last part)




And one was confused, but then realized what it was all about.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyro


Part 5: (Last part)

And one was confused, but then realized what it was all about.


I am hell confused where has update gone.
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Posted: 13 years ago
did u reserved the place for updating later ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry sorry..had to rush...just came back...

i reserved the place for update only...

will update soon...give me one hour...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyro

sorry sorry..had to rush...just came back...

i reserved the place for update only...

will update soon...give me one hour...


okay dear we will wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Maaneet moments were Fab

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