war of love: Chapter 4 part 1 page 3 updated!!!

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CHARACTER SKETCH''.

Manyata: she is the future yuvraani of devgarh. She is a very lively and friendly girl, having an honest heart but careless. Her aunt took her along with her sister when she was 5. She is living with her Aunt Anita in Mumbai.

Jaynandini: she is the youngest sister of manyata. A very out-going person yet a bit shy. Loves to hang out with her sister. Both sisters love each other desperately.

Maharanai komal: mother of manyata and jay. She was shot when manyata was five and is dead now.

Dadi sahib: Grand mother of both sisters. She is the queen of devgarh and is waiting for her grand daughter's return.

Brijraj: maharaja of devgarh. A very confused person, who always gambles and has blind trust on his best friend, girriraj.

Udayveer: a very hot and charming prince. He is the to be yuvraaj of jaigarh. He is a total flirt. He has no place for emotions in his life. According 2 him everything is politics. But when manyata comes in his life everything changes'.

Unnati: A vey sweet and kind-hearted girl. Loves her dada and want him and manyata 2 be together.

Girriraj: A man who only knows one thing in his life 'politics'. Loves his wife and both children. He wants everything in his control.

Vijay: Son of menaka bua and cousin of manyata and jay. He is always confused and has no idea what he wants to do with his life.

Menaka bua: She is living in her mayka. She wants Vijay to be the next yuvraj of devgarh.

Akash: He is manyata's college fellow. He is a spoiled rich boy, who always get's what he wants. Always is after manyata.

Arnav: a very good looking guy. Son of Anita kapoor. He and manyata are very close to each other.

Aunt Anita: sister of maharani komal. Is living with her niece and son. A very caring person and she love her family.

Chapter 1

She felt as someone was waking her up. She tried to open her eyes but failed. She was still sleepy.

"Wake up manyata!" someone called her name.

"Let me sleep" she mumbled.

"You've been sleeping like hell! Now wake up or I have other ways to wake you" she ignored the warning in his words.

"Do what you can! I am not getting up!" she said turning over.

She felt like she was hitted by a heavy load. She abruptly opened her eyes and got up. She looked around herself, she was all wet. She looked at the door, where he was standing peacefully with a bucket in one hand.

"You wished for it" he smirked.

"You are so dead" she said clenching her teeth.

"We'll see!"

She picked up her slipper and aimed for him. It fell on the nearby vase. He laughed and manyata ran after him.

Soon, the house was filled with Arnav's 'bachao! Bachao!' and manyata's curses.

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Everyone was on the dining table waiting for manyata to come and join them. After 5 minutes or so she appeared, still in her night dress and yawning.

"Good morning Maasi!" she greeted her maasi Anita.

Maasi Anita smiled looking at her. She was beautiful just like her mother. She adored her both nieces.

"Good evening sleepy head!" jay said to her. "Jiji, have you been taking pills?" she asked suspiciously.

"What time is it?" she asked ignoring her previous question.

"It's 9 p.m." She got her answer from Arnav.

"What? I've been sleeping for a whole day? Why didn't any of you woke me up?" she was startled.

"Haye! hamari yeh majal? Keh hum rajkumari manyata ki neend kharab kar sake? Hume apni jaan pyari ha" Arnav said pretending to be scared.

Jay and Anita laughed. Manyata knew he was clearly making fun of her.

"Tumhe to mein zinda nai choro gi, ek bar mere hath to lag jao!" she said showing him her fists.

This kind of arguing was common between both of them. Jay was enjoying their little fight. And as usual it ended by manyata and Arnav cursing each other.

"maasi ap ka is langoor ki shadi ke bare me kia khayal ha?" manyata suddenly asked pointing at Arnav.

Arnav who was drinking water spitted it on jay.

She gave him a glare. "sorry" he mumbled to her.

"beta in ke bare me mere khayal to bohat e naik ha bus koi larki to mil jaye jo in ke sath adjust kar sake" maasi smiled looking at her son with affection.

"tumhe meri shaadi ka khayal kese a gaya? Shaadi ki umer to tumhari ho gaye ha! Ha na maa?" Arnav ne baat us ki taraf palat di.

"tumhe meri shaadi ki fikar karne ki koi zaraorat nai ha, waise b mein maasi ko chor kar kahin nai jane wali. Or jab tak tumhe yaha se rafa dafa na kar du tab tak to kai bi nai" manayata laughed as she wrapped her arms around maasii anita and jay joined in. in this way they completed their dinner. Jay was stressed out so she went to sleep. On the other hand manyata had no plan of sleeping tonight, her target was Arnav.

hope u guys like it and please do comment...

i'll be glad if u guys suggest a title for this story coz i really can't get my hand on it...😳

nice one:) i kinda hav a feeling that this Arnav is gonna b a villain in upcoming parts..i hope im wrong..continue soon:)

i loved it...but ver is uv...nyways umm mayb ven u procedd v vil ge an idea for ur title wat say?

Loved it... Sounds intresting!!! So many new relation and twists to ur story...waiting for next part eagerly...please update soon...and please PM me...

it was very nice i am dying to read what will happen when the 2 come face to face because whether it is in SS or FF or the actual story manveer always have a weird and very interesting meeting please update soon and please pm me if u can u really write well

Hi, Nice one yaar. I like the character sketch. Good start.

so here's chapter 2...thanx alot for the amazing replies

i hope u guys like it please do comment...


Chapter 2

Manyata had come back from London after completing her studies. Jay was busy with her classes and Arnav was out of city. Manyata was getting bored at home so she decided to call her friends. That was her habit. She couldn't stay in the home without getting bored, so she always made plans with her friends. After telling Maasi Anita about her plans, she went to the mall. She wanted to buy something for jay, as her birthday was coming near. She knew she'd forget her birthday on due date so decided to pick her a gift in advance, but she couldn't decide what to pick. She looked outside the shop, but still no sign of her friends.

She looked thoroughly at each dress.

"this one will look good on jay" she thought to herself as she chose a long red maxi.

"no! this one is good" she again thought picking up a purple gown.

Finally, she saw what she was looking for.

"This dress is only made for my sister" she mumbled to herself. She totally admired that dress.

"Pack this dress I'll pick it up in five minutes" manyata told the sales man and went to the next shop to buy some accessories.

It took her half an hour to buy the matching jewelry for the dress.

Her cell phone rang then. She picked it up and went in the shop. It was one of her friend, telling her that she can't make it. Manyata paid the bill, still talking on the phone and walked out. She collided with some one in the lot. Her bags fell. Before she could pick them two hands brought those bags to her. She abruptly looked up.

"oh my god! Aaj subha aubha kis ka chehra dekh liya jo aj itne haseen log dekhne ko mil rae ha?" he looked at her getting up. "hume nai pata tha ke humare liye shopping ki ja rai ha?" he smirked.

"kuch logon ko bohat khush fehmi hoti ha!" manyata said with hatred and walked towards her car.

"itni jaldi bhi kia ha jane ki princess? Abhi abhi to mile ha!" he grabbed her hand.

"leave my hand!" she said pushing him back.

He was going to say something but someone called his name from behind. He looked behind to see who it was. Manyata silently walked towards her car and drove out.

It was his girlfriend. "tum yaha kia kar rahe ho? I was looking for you all over the place" she told him.

He looked at the lot which was now empty.

Hum se baach kar jao gi kha manyata. We'll meet again soon. He thought and the turned towards his gf who was waiting for his reply.

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"Guys! Please do something! I am getting bored" Tania said looking at manyata.

They were all sitting in the coffee shop.

"So what do you want to do?" manyata asked her sipping her soft drink.

"Let's play 'Truth or Dare'!" Aisha suggested.

"It's a child's play yaar!" Manyata said

"Don't worry we'll make it fun! No truth's only dares and the dares are not going to be simple they are going to be tricky" Aisha said with a grin.

"I am in" manisha said. Everyone looked at manyata.

"Let's do this then" manyata smiled.

They got their turns only manyata was remaining. After a lot of suggestions they finally gave her the dare. Aisha excused herself to take a call, before the dare was decided.

"Manyata you'll have to go and slap the first person coming out of that way" Tania said pointing her towards the way.

"What? Are you guys out of your mind?" Manyata exclaimed.

"c'mon Manyata its just a game don't take it seriously! Besides if u are scared then u may quit" Tania was making her move.

"I am not scared all rite! Kis ko thapar marna ha?" Manyata asked getting up.

"that's like my girl!"tania praised her.

They looked around to find a guy and spotted one near them.

"yar do u se that guy over there!" Tania pointed towards him.

Manyata looked over there and saw a guy in black shirt talking on the phone.

"The one talking on the phone?" Manyata inquired.

"Yeah that's ur dare!"

Just then the guy looked around and Manyata recognized his face.

"So u r gonna slap him?" they confirmed.

"With pleasure" Manyata said with a mischievous grin.

When she left Aisha came back and tania told her about the dare and pointed towards the guy.

"Stop her!" she immediately told them recognizing the guy

"Why?" they both asked startled

Meanwhile, Manyata reached him ignoring the calls of her friends from behind.

"Hey" she called him.

The guy looked back and seeing her, an impious grin covered his face.

"I'll call u back!" he said on the phone and turned towards her.

"aj to koi ajoba e hoa ha jo ap kud humare pas ai" he smirked.

"tum jase logo ko bohat xiada khush fehmia hoti ha. Bus un mein se ek ko dor karne ai hu" and just then manyata's hand reached his face and a loud sound came.

This slap took him by surprise and it took him a minute to understand what had happened. Anger was flushing through him. He looked at the spot where she was standing but she was nowhere in sight by then.

Manyata reached her friends all were worried by then.

"Manyata what have you done?" aisha was the first one to question her.

"I just completed my dare" Manyata was relaxed now.

"firstly we should just get out of here before anything else happens" Tania told them getting up.

"but guys abhi to maza ana shuru hoa tha-" Aisha's glare made her stop

she followed her friends quietly and they left the mall's caf.

"now will anyone tell me why we left?" manyata's patience had expired

"Manyata do u have any idea who that guy was?" Aisha questioned her.

"I don't know and I don't care!" she passed a hand through her hair.

"Manyata that was no ordinary guy" Tania told her quietly.

"you just slapped the most powerful person"

Manyata looked at her friends confused.

"You slapped YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH!" Tania exclaimed.