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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice write up Bidzu dear.👏... You are a genius dear, when it come to expressing... I can imagine every scene clearly due to the way you have explained them.

Loved, loved, loved, loved, loved every scene.🤗 Its Interesting to see Megha walking straight into the park unaware of where she is going... so, her heart kept her promise and took her to the park without making her realize😆 I am loving this Megha who has left with no choice but to surrender to Mohan... how sweet.☺️



Originally posted by: -Bidzie-


Megha was walking on the street numbly, totally unaware of where her feet was taking her subconsciously, and when she came back in senses, she found herself in the park and just a mile away, she saw Mohan sitting on the bench, waiting for her.

She was shocked. Before she could turn around and leave, Mohan spotted her, yet she wanted to leave. Her mind was continuously ordering her to go back to home but it seemed as if her heart forced her feet to freeze on the spot. She felt helpless.

Mohan came to her and was surprised to see her so weak. Her eyes were red. He could see the dried tears on her cheeks. "Kya hua?" He concernedly asked.

Megha didn't respond. She just look in his eyes and became teary again. Mohan could see the pain in her eyes. He really felt defeated. He knew what was paining her, yet he couldn't bring her out of it and that was hurting him the most.

"Megha!" He softly uttered her name and the next moment, he was astonished to see her on her knees and crying her heart out with all her energy.

Mohan immediately knelt down and cupped her face. He made her look in his eyes and his heart ached to see her so vulnerable. There was a sudden silence.

Megha was calm. Though tears continued to flow down, there was a peacefulness in her eyes as she was with the man who taught her to live again and whom she loved the most.

Mohan wiped off her tears gently as if she was so delicate to break down any moment and just then, Megha surrendered herself in his arms. She hugged him as tightly as she could, making him shocked out of his wits. (😆)

"Ab aur bardasht nahi hota. Tumse dur nahi jaa sakti, Mohan. Nahi chod sakti tumhe. Kitni koshish ki khud ko tumse alag karne ki lekin har bar main haar gayi." Megha spoke her heart out in one go. Her words, the tone of her voice - everything screamed out her love for him. Her arms around him tightened as if the fear of loosing him was breaking her heart each and every nanosecond.

Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaki thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Yeh lamha kahaan tha mera

Mohan's eyes were teary. He was speechless. He moved his lips to say something but looked like his heart wasn't supporting him at all.

Ab hai saamne
Ishe chhuu loon zara
Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraaa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loon zara

Marr jaaun ya jee loon zaraa...

All he managed to do was hugging his lady love securely to ensure that they would never be apart, no matter how hard the situations were.

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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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I am in total awe of this scene😍... Kab se taras gayi thi iss tarah ke scene dek ne ke liye ... chalo ab ke liye pad liya and imagine kar liya😆... Hope to see this kind of scene in the show yaar.🤔

You granted my wish of sweet MM scene😍. Thanks dear.🤗🤗
I am reading this part again and again😆
Edited by mohan-sun-na - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this part too...too good dear...:)
will be waiting 4 the last one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Bidzie i guess i could speak for everyone in the forum that in the next part even if you just write that MM were hugging in the park till the dawn breaks... we won't mind...
Love your writing...
Edited by sim_ran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tooo goood Simply awesum. Lovedd It =D
Edited by Adil14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ bidzie :
Again her mind went back to her golden past...

"Suniye!"
"Kya hai?"
"Mera byah hai!" (🤣
yeh kya yaad dila diya yaar tune !!*sighs and gets nostalgic*😊
Mohan wiped off her tears gently as if she was so delicate to break down any moment and just then, Megha surrendered herself in his arms. She hugged him as tightly as she could, making him shocked out of his wits. (😆)

"Ab aur bardasht nahi hota. Tumse dur nahi jaa sakti, Mohan. Nahi chod sakti tumhe. Kitni koshish ki khud ko tumse alag karne ki lekin har bar main haar gayi." Megha spoke her heart out in one go. Her words, the tone of her voice - everything screamed out her love for him. Her arms around him tightened as if the fear of loosing him was breaking her heart each and every nanosecond.

Mohan's eyes were teary. He was speechless. He moved his lips to say something but looked like his heart wasn't supporting him at all.


All he managed to do was hugging his lady love securely to ensure that they would never be apart, no matter how hard the situations were.
now this would be a scene worth watching, if akku is comfy doing it😊 !! i'm sure there will celebrations in the forum on that day⭐️. keep updating and pming !!😊
ps : i have sent you friend request on fb. do accept it.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
too goood yaa Bidzie :):)
loved it to the bit :):)

thankiesss about the PM

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