Greatest cure for her-His Love(VirMan)Part2 Pg5

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Hi guys! 😊I'm an old member on this forum.. I made my very first post by writing part one of my FF : Kuch Love Jaisa here.😊

VirMaan are the reason I joined the forum. I know, I still haven't updated my other FFs. Plzz don't throw chappal on me. 😆So I'm starting another piece here. College is keeping me super busy, but I love Virmaan & so this is dedicated to them.😳

Hope ya all like this.



The greatest cure for her... His Love❤️

Virat was sad. His bhabhi had called him, that night after they left for Hrishikesh. She told him that her sister is sad. He didn't know why he was saddened even more by the fact that Maanvi is sad. How he wished he would keep her happy, at least for the few years- NO!!

He slapped himself nearly. Was he about to say that Maanvi would live only for a few years?? Angry tears filled his eyes. No! Maanvi mere saath hi rahegi.. Zindgi bhar!

He picked up his phone, dialed up Maanvi's number but disconnected the call abruptly. What if she became even more sad upon his calling?

Brushing his tears, he slowly sat on his bed, examining the photograph of himself & Maanvi. They were smiling brilliantly in that photograph which was taken during his bhai's wedding. He chuckled sadly, Kithna kuch badal gaya hai..

"Tumhari hasi, tumhari khushi kahaan gaayab hogayi hai Maanvi...? "


Simultaneously, Maanvi in Hrishikesh was gazing at the brothers photograph, particularly focussing her eyes on the younger one.

"Meri Khushi toh tum ho... Sirf Tum... "

In Chandigarh, Virat sighed, "Man kartha hai.. Main udta hua chale aaoon tumhare pas.. Aur yeh sunoo ki tum bhi mujhse pyar karthi ho... "

In Hrishikesh, Maanvi went on speaking, glancing at the starlit sky from her room, "Tum meri khushi hi nahi Virat.. Meri Zindgi.. Par.. Humari kismat yaheen hai... "

Tears gathered in her eyes as she teared her eyes away from the photograph. She brushed them quickly, before joining others in the hall.

Chandigarh~

"Humare pyar har mushkil ka saamna karega.. Dekhna Tum.. " Virat's thoughts were interupted as his bhai walked in.

"Chote.. Upset ho kya?" Viren asked cautiously.

"Thoda.. Kya baat hai bhai?"

"Woh.. neeche-"

"Mujhe dinner nahi khaana hai!"

"Theek hai Virat.. Aaj main force nahi karoonga.. Do specialists aaye hue hai.. Maine aaj hi unhe contact kiya.. Maanvi ke baare mein baat karne keliye.. "


Virat nodded.

"Tu reports lekar study room mein aaja.."


Viren left the room. Virat got up, with a heavy heart, grabbed the reports & walked out of the room.


*Study room*




"Namasthe.. Good evening Dr. Riddhima and Dr.Abhishek, baithiye plzz.. This is my bhai - Virat!"
Viren greeted them with a smile.

The doctors smiled back before taking their seats.

Virat handed over the reports. Dr. Abhi examined it for quite a while before speaking.

"Viren ji & Virat ji.. I dunno kya kahoon main.. Yeh case dekhkar aisa nahi lagtha ki Miss Maanvi-"


"Bas! Wohi ruk jaayiye.. Aap doctor hai bhi ya nahi? Are aapko zindgi dena chahiye.. Is tarah patients ke confidence ke saath khelna achha nahi hai!"

"But Mr. Virat- "

Virat was fuming, "par kya.. aap yahi kehnewaale hai na... that she won't sustain. Bhai! Kaise faaltu doctors ko le aaye ho.. Plz... Inse kaho ki yeh yaha se jaaye.. "

"Inki baat toh suniye na plzzz?" Ridhima requested him, Viren too pulled him into a sitting position.

Virat huffed.

"I'm sorry Virat, but sach yahi hai.. Bahut critical case hai! Koi bhi specialist yahi kahega.. Agar unka cure hua toh.. woh miracle hi hoga.." Abhishek grimaced, "but as a doctor we will give our best.. Humare hospital mein kuch log hai jinka ilaaj jaari hai.. You can contact us.. Humara Hrishikesh mein bhi branch hai.. "


"Hogaya?" Virat got up, " thanks.. You may leave now!"

"Jee?" Abhi was confused.

"virat- plzz calm down!" Viren tried, but in vain.

Virat already dragged Abhi by his collar. Riddhima just smiled.

~

Viren glared at him, before cordially taking the senor doctor away from the spot.
Virat was about to leave the room when he heard Ridhima speaking. Viren was outside the study, apologising to the doctor.

"Bahut pyar karte ho na aap unse?" She asked him.

Virat's eyes widened. He considered her for a moment, before nodding. Fresh tears gathered in his eyes.

"Aap ko kehne ki zaroorat nahi.. Aapki ankhein bataati hai, aap unhe kitna chahte hai.."

Virat sighed, shaking his head. He didn't know what to speak. Dr.Ridhima touched his soft topic. He didn't know why he behaved this way.. so out of control, when it was about Maanvi.

"Aapne unhe bataaya.. apni dil ki baat?"
Ridhima went on.

His eyes were focussed on Viren & Abhi but his mind was elsewhere.

"Woh jaanti hai.. "
He replied weekly.

"Aur kya woh aapse pyar karthi hai.. "
she asked him.

He frowned. He didn't expect it coming. Did Maanvi love him back? Why did he ever try asking her out? He blurted out to Dadaji rather than to her! He was a fool!

"Sabse pehle yeh jaaniye.. Kya woh aapse pyar karthi hai ya nahi.. " Ridhima urged him, giving him a sad smile.

"Aap yeh.. Kya.. "
Virat was confused. So many emotions were running through his veins. He was a mess.

"Toh unhe baataao.. Dikhaao ki aap kis had tak jaa sakthe hai unki mohabbat mein.. Aaj tak ek cheez jo kabhi nahi haari hai.. Woh mohabbat hai.. I know you might have done so much.. But kuch khaas karna hoga.. Bas karthe jaana hoga.. Patha hai yeh sab kyun keh rahi hoon?" She paused, "Kyun ki Love is the greatest cure..."

"Agar use koi baat khush karsakti hai.. Koi baat use jeene ki ummeed de sakti hai.. Woh hai- Tumhara Pyar!" She finished.

"Dr. Ridhima! Aayiye plzzz.. Main aapko drop kardoonga.. " Viren called her from the door.

"Jee nahi... Main chali jaaoongi, thanks." She replied him.

"Toh phir jaayiye.. Love can do miracles! Maine kahi lovestories dekha hai.. And yours is so unique.. Kisi bhi madad keliye mujhe contact karna.. Mera card .. "

And she left placing her card on the table.

Virat stood lost in thoughts. Can his love heal her? Is it true that love can make miracles happen?


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End


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That's the end for now.. I'll write a part two if you guys want me to continue. Plzz comment guys.

Thanks for reading:)



Part two :


The meeting : Tere Ishq ne mohe rang daala

Maanvi was speaking while sitting in front of her dressing table. She can see him, his image.. She was shocked for a moment.

"Tumhari parchayi mere dil mein humesha se hai.. aur ab har jagah dikhai de rahi hai.. "

Virat smiled from the mirror. Little did she know, it was the real him!

P.S. I hope this is worth continuing.. Part one is so short, sorry😳



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-Serene.Rose- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Index

Part : 1 :
https://httwww.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3080502

Part : 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60611870
Edited by Priyamvada - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow too good...awesome..plz continue and ya can yu plz pm me your previous FF's links??wanna read them too...and ya thanks for the pm and pm when you update..
Edited by shrav_virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzz continue it was amazing 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please please do continue...It was just marvellous...Very well written...and please do pm me when you update the next part...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it was awesome👏 😃 Plz do continue asap i am eager to read more😊 Can u plz pm me wen u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya dis was awesome u should continue dis
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start 👏 can't wait for the second part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Priya of course you have to continue this
And as soon as possible...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz continue it was gud... N if u want to leav it as an os den atleast write till Manvi's confession... Plzzz!! Thanx 4 da pm:)

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