|*KriYaansh SS: I Was Never Away*|Ch2Pg39*2/4/13||

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Hello guyz... well, after reading comments on my first ArSha OS" So Far Yet So Close I thought to write one SS on public demand 😉 (kitna demand krte ho tum log 😆)... It may turn into an FF if i get loads of comments or if it will take me more chaps to finish the story... so what i wanna say before goving u all the outline of this SS is that my OS was a pretty deep one and its language was luk gud gud jo sbko pasand ayi thi 😆..but ye SS bhot simple language me hai so agar u are expecteing it to be a very deep one then am sorry it isnt 😃..read the concept ... hope you guys like it ... 😊

CONCEPT:

Kria had left St.Louis because of her mother... (we all kow what had happened )... After so many months she has returned to St.Louis college where she most excitedly wants to meet Rey to apologize to him... Also this tym sheis in Mumbai NOT woth her mom ... and has come here for some mission which will be revealed in the first two chaps 😃...
The SS depicts KriYaansh love stry and the various stands through which it goes ... sadly u all will have to face Taani but i assure you dat she ll be negative so u ll enjoy along wit me coz i love doing her burai... 😆

Chap 1 coming thodi der me 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER -1

(Kria's POV in purple and narrator paragraphs in pink 😊)

Oh how cool !!!! I m back here !!!! I missed this place soo much... Not exactly Mumbai... But its PEOPLE ... and the person I missed the most was HIM ... Would Rey forgive me?? Does he even remember me??...I was too bad to him that day ... But all I did was for him... For HIS welfare .. I didn't want him to be stuck !!!! I wanted him to MOVE ON !!!! He couldn't wait for me all life when even I wasn't sure that I'm going to come back or not... But what all I said to him ... I shouldn't have done that ... I was very bad !!!! ... I don't think he would ever want to see my face again !!! I'm so bad...Yes of course .. I AM bad... mayb the BADDEST person in the world? Yes, I AM the baddest person in the world ... Argh..why am I speaking to myself again??!!!! M a jhallii !!!!! 😡

Kria was standing on the gat of St.Louis College stilll nervous to enter into her passion once more ... She knew that once she enters, she couldn't stay away from dnce even if she wanted to ... Dance along woth St.Louis was way too addictive !!! She had inherited her addiction to dance from her Dad whom she hadn't met ever in her life ... But sooner or later she ll find him ... and once she would find him , she wouldn't be able to stop herself from asking him this question ... " Why did he do this to her mom? Why did he do this to her? Why did he do this to her sister whom she never saw?!! "
Though finding him would be difficult but somehow she'll do it no matter whatit takes...That bloody man was the reason she wasn't allowed to follow her dreams !!! such a selfish man that he didn't even care for his daughter !!!! Today because of him her mom was not letting her dance ... he had to be found... and she would find him

She opened the gate and entered the college ... the college was same as usual with chaos all around ...As usual the students were having fun ... some bunking ... sone enjoying there free tymings ... some couples sitting together ... some playing basketball (sadly not Rey ) and everything was normal as it used to be ... just one difference ... this time there was no divide among the people ... no one cared whether the person he is alking to is rich or poor .. in simple words ... a Weakling or a Dazzling ... everyone in the college were Louisans and seeing this I relaised positive vibes all around me ... touchwood !!

A sudden rush of excitement escaped through me ... Finally i was going to meet them !!! My friends !!!! Swayaam, Neha, Vishakha, Amar, Bharath ... How much i missed them only i know !!!! it would b a treat to watch them again after so long !!! and the Dazzlers too ... We all had become such good friends ... i missed Sharon very much ... i missed her arroganct attitude towards me ...
the way we used to taunt each other ... oh i missed her so much !!!! haha..we used to fight soo much ... and rinni too... her stupidoness !!!! always worth a laugh (not insultive laugh 😉)...e=never met anyone as innocent as her in my life ... and how can i forget about nil?! the kkrraazzyyy rapper !!! a comedian though ... haha had a crush on Nicole ma'am dint he? 😆..but according to sources Nicole ma'am married RDX Sir ... ohhh ... poor nil !!! but m sure now he would have realised how much Simi used to care for him ... or maybe dey were a couple now?!! was that possible?!!or was still Nil in tanhai mode...hehe wateva 😆... hmm i forgot abt dat vicky ... so irritating he was in the beginning ... but later i thought of him as a nutcase ... 😆 ... usse khud bhi samajh nhi ata hga ki kyabolta rehta he vo... ab neha ke sath rehkar dbl filmy bhi ho gaya hoga ... ViHa 🤣 🤣 sounds so funny ...

I soo missed them all ... did they miss me ?? do dey still consider me as their friend... i ll come to know abt when i ll meet them in awhile ... i never talked about the person i missed the most ... but why didnt i? was i too afraid? yes maybe i am... m too afraid to face the consequences ... m too afraid to face you Rey !!!!!

so this is all for the update... for PMs next time add AshFFPMz to ur buddy list or u ll nt get PMs sorry 😃...

pls giv long cments and like the update if u liked it 😊

P.S. Medha font ke sath emos bhi banned hain 😆
Edited by swaron502 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It short but it's ok I really liked it
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really nice intro please pm me when you continue :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue and PM me also Ash 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye ash, public demand! tu toh badi hit ho gayi!😉 im sure yeh bhi mast hoga😃 jaldi jaldi likho beta, mera aashirwaad tumhaare saath hai😆
Edited by medhasainanee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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btw, isko toh mein ff bana hi doongi, beware tons of spamming coming up after update, bas koi mil jaye chat karne ke liye😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@medha: 😆 😆 update likhne ke baad i ll join 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seems interesting 😊...
Continue soon 😊.

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