BadtameezDil. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#1

Heloo-sheloo all the lovely people. So this is my first Jeeman FF. Not many know that I had started to watch the shows just because of The behenas. And this will be my favorite story till now.

This story is adapted from the book "My Sister Jodie" . I am reading this book and will be updating it to. I have updated the character sketch. Please Like, Comment etc etc. Also pl mention if u want a Pm.

.

Manvi - the main character and narrator of the story.Manvi is shy and quiet, and adores her older sister. She turns 11 in the book. She makes friends with Virat and Mrs Wilberforce, who is a bookworm like Manvi. She may have a crush on Virat.

Jeevika - Manvi's rebellious older sister and the daughter of Sharvari and Jay. She is about 13 years old. Jeevika's hair is naturally mousy coloured but has dyed it orange with gold streaks and later on in the book tries to dye it black but it comes out purple. She clashes with her mother a lot but her dad adores her and always sticks up for her. She was always the popular one but when she goes to Melchester college, its Manvi thats the popular one and Jodie gets bullied. She has an affair with 18 year old gardener Jed but she dumps him after he kills one of the bagers.

Virat - A tall friend of Manvi's and is in the same class as Jeevika. He boards over the Summer holidays and watches badgers, and though Jed wants to kill them Virat is against that. He may have a crush on Manvi.

Sharvari' Maanvi and Jeevika's mother. She and Jeevika have frequent clashes throughout the book. She worked at a tea-shop before moving to Melchester and is the loving but sometimes up-tight wife of Joe. She is the school cook.

Jay - Maanvi and Jeevika's father. Jay adores Jeevika and can never say no to her. He is the school caretaker.

Zeph, Dan and Sakura - Three children who board over the Summer. Sakura is a delicate, shy Japanese girl who Mnvi befriends. Zeph (Real name Zephaniah) is a boy whose greatest love is food. Dan has a man from a biology kit which he carries around with him

Harriet, Sheba, Freya, and Clarissa - Manvi's friends. Manvil is closer to Harriet than the rest

Mr and Mrs Wilberforce - Mrs Wilberforce's family owned the whole college and her father turned it into a school. She is in a wheelchair after slipping down the stairs in the secret tower and snapping her spine, losing the use of one arm and both her legs. Her husband runs the school under a strict balance.

Jed - The gardener, who looks like a pirate and Jeevika fancies him. They both flirt with each other.

Maya - Jay and Sharvari's third daughter

Miss French - the assistant head, who has a soft spot for Mr Wilberforce. She owns a big dog called Shep, and is obsessed with Elvis Presley. Sharon dislikes Miss French because she bosses people around.

I know, that's too bad to name Jeeman's third sister "Maya". But I could not think of something else. You will come to know the reason behind it soon. Thanks again Pooja fr the title!


Edited by __Shivani__ - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

35

Views

4.1k

Users

24

Likes

42

Frequent Posters

BadtameezDil. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#2


Index

Part 1- Page 4
Edited by __Shivani__ - 13 years ago
missmystic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
omg! I have read My Sister Jodie and its an amazing book!!! Great character outlines and im really interested in knowing how your going to write the story so please do me pm because it sounds interesting! :D :D
...Jes... thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
interesting 👍🏼
cont soon 😊
Radharaday thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
THank for pm and update soon .. it sounds interesting
MTBT_12071316 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Its intresting...cntinue soon nd thanx 4 d pm
BadtameezDil. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: missmystic

omg! I have read My Sister Jodie and its an amazing book!!! Great character outlines and im really interested in knowing how your going to write the story so please do me pm because it sounds interesting! :D :D

Wow!! Thats grat to know that you have read that book!!
Thanks a lot!😊😉
PyaasiChudail69 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
wow its interesting thanks for the pm continue soon
shaimah thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
interesting!!
continue soon and do pm me for the next update!!
NidhaA thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
This is the first work based on JeeMan that I am going to read...
Impressive character sketch, though the names kind of clash being a mixture of Indian and Western...
It's not unpleasant, but I just feel that Indian names would've suited better for the girls parents.
Please don't be offended, this is just a suggestion.
The names aren't bad or anything, and your wish as a writer comes first!
Do send me a pm when you update next!
Love
Nidha

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".