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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

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.Kryptonite.

@.Kryptonite.

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Posted: 13 years ago

WHY WhY Why did it have to End Sona!! I could have read this forever!!😍

Can i say this is one of your best works! The writing is Flawless, i mean it!

Ah, each memory he remembered was so real and convincing!

Both Arnav and Khushi had their equal contribution to the memories, making them Damn Interesting and lovable!

Arnav,a Nerd! Actually its easily imaginable and worth hooting for!😉 The Payal scene was Awww-worthy! The Engineering background totally worked for me, being a fellow engineer myself :P

Replacing Rose by Payal in books is innovative eh?😆

The accident, Khushi being scared! Could get Arnav's plight there!

Damn, if only i could convey how Good it felt reading this OS and how much Praise worthy this is!!

Highly weird, unusual, some might have said, but, the way the fake anger swam across her eyes, that tried to spit fire, the silver jhumkis dangling from somewhere beneath the thick curtain of her hair had attached her to him, in ways, no one could describe in sufficient words.

^^See, this is where my level of admiration increases exponentially!!

PS:Are there any memories of yours involved in this OS? Im asking 'cause it felt so real! 😉

Paru🤗 You're the best😃

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Surbhi

@..Surbhi..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

AWWWEEEsome OS :)

aamazing job dear :D

keep it up :D

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

res :D

lovely OS. i love it whenever arnav goes into the past and starts remembering his time with khushi, good bad and funny. all of it :D and the title is so apt with the way the story was kind of progressing :D

and jealous arnav is adorable! the cuter thing was that khushi enjoyed seeing him like that😆

the transition from one incident to another was really awesomly written :D :D loved it :D i'm all wierd mushy mushy now ^_^

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

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The unknown errors of our life...sigh.

I am feeling strange after reading this but then your updates always make me feel something...beautiful, unexplained sometimes but beautiful.

The story started off on a note where I didnt know which period or universe we were in as in was it present day story line, future events or an alternate universe and when it did turn out to be AU, you used one update to give an entire journey and that is so amazing.

All the parts, the feelings, the little things like Khushi's observation of Arnav's silent laughter, her gratitude that he found her funny (that was breathtaking btw), his sorry...everything was perfect.

I so wanted it to just continue and let me tell you this - even though we know the story, I would still love it if you turned it into a FF and give us a detailed part about each of their moments which made them this exquisite couple and maybe teach us to give these moments a chance while you write it...

Amazing, Sona, just exquisite.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Mistyrains madam!

An OS!! When I got a PM.. I thought why is the subject HEY.. It should be FFs name!! An OS.. I'm surprised..!

Well late.. Cos ur PM arrived at the show timing! Sorry I gave importance to show! U know obvious reason, i wanted to see the slap.. But shit it was not there. I wish I could have concentrated here now 😊😭

This is awesome with a touch of rain! U r now turning good girl. Giving me what I need in almost all the updates. SO I love u baby🤗

Damn good! It was initially as though appeared as something related to show, Arnav repenting!

But Awww.! Damn, it was damn cute! she sneaked into his room and fought up, an argument! I loved imagining it using my virtual characters!!

Unknown errors - Here it is an argument that making their bond strong!

Sure a diamond in ur collections!

Good one, Sona dear!

Thanks for the pm

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

So Sweet

thnx for the pm

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow, this is like a short story weaved into a one shot. I mean the flashbacks, the key pieces of their memories from their actual show, you changed the meaning of every item, and so beautifully, the key, the anklet...

The way how their sweet college romance progressed into being together for life, just amazing. Your words are like giving life to their amazing journey, how their small mistakes lead to bigger happier memories that they would cherish forever. Love the title, and how you have made it relevant here. Very Nice Idea, You could have written an entire FF on this...LOL!

Sona, time and again I keep telling you, your words are poetic, not just because your diction is good, but because you know how to use them beautifully and to make them sound like magical, straight out of heart or in fact a dreamer's movie...where there is nothing beyond words, nothing beyond feelings, nothing beyond the magic that is your writing!!!

Thanks for the pm

MMuuuaaahh for such an awesome OS :)

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing!!

Loved everything about this OS..their memories,college life,romance ,the note book ,the way she sneaked into his room...Beautiful!!

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

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This story might have been inspired by Chitra Divakaruni, but you have painted it with your own hues. Brilliant...I am repeating myself but the love-making scenes are sheer poetry...its like watching poetry in motion, too beautiful.

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