my 1st poem 4 nimmo

hi guys here's my first poem for nimmo...........

actually i wrote it when i was a bit low but i think it suis nimmo...............

na jaane kyon

baarish ki chham chham bhi dil ko ek shor lagi aaj na jane kyon.................

sabke mann ko shant karne wali barkha ki boondon ne kiya dil ko bechain hai na jane kyon...............

saawan ka suhana mausam bhi man ke aangan mein hariyali na la paya na jaane kyon..........

barsaat ki phuhaaron ke beech mann ki shabnam jalti hai na jaane kyon.........

kisi ke lautne ki aas na hote hue bhi dil ko usi ki talaash hai na jane kyon..............

dil mein ek ajab si pyass hai na jane kyon .............

phool to kai aaj bhi khile hain magar unki khushboo kuch adhoori si hai na jane kyon..........

din to aaj bhi hua hai par mann mein ek andhera sa hai na jane kyon............

saara din guzar gaya phir bhi waqt lagta hai thehra sa na jaane kyon.............

itni badi mehfil mein hai dil akela sa na jaane kyon............

koi nahi hai phir bhi hai mujhko kisi ka intezaar na jaane kyon.................

is kyon ka jawaab mere paas nahin hai par dil ko isi jawaab ki talaash hai na jaane kyon..............

-nidhi...

hope u'll give ur comments to this.............

plzzz plzz tell me ur views abt it............

wow nidhi its beautiful yaar
so innovative really liked it jaan

Luv,

Shagun

awesome yaar 👏 👏 👏

thnx all plzzzzzzz tell me wether i shud post my other creation.......

Wow..tht's really beautiful hun 😃
i love how each line ends in 'na jane kyon' 😳
please post ur next one 😊

i'll post my next one only if u all will lyk this one so plz....... do tell me ur views

F A B poem nidhi 👏
I love the words and it is awesome!! 👏👏👏

Great job 👏

Naina

wow dats peom iz awesome !!!

ohhh it's really wonderful and awesome 👏

devi