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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys i m Moeen. This is the 1st thing i m writing. My ksaj id can be baned any time so thats why new id i m uploding story with my new id . Hope u dont mind
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part 2 : page 1
part 3 : page1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1
A girl was sleeping in room her mom came there here mom was (PADMA) (pad) get up ridhima[its the girls name] beta. U r stil sleping?
Rid) no maa . May jag rahe hu. Bus aisay he layti they. Ap di ko jaga do.
Pad) ok[she goes 2 her sisters room] anjali [name of ridz di] utho beta. Sanjevani jana hay.
Anji) mom 2 min plz
pad) koe 2 min nahe. 1st day he late jao ge to sub kya kahay gay k doc sheshank ki bayte late.
Anji) k mom . Uth gae . Fresh ho k ate hu.
Padma aunty kitchen may ja k breakfast banati hay. Ridz come down.
Rid) ma papa kaha hay?
Pad) wo to chalay gaay , Emergency.
Rid) ok . Or di
Anji) here i m .
Pad) chalo may breakfast la rahe hu
. Go and sit [they both eat and there nani joins them]
Rid and anji) good mornin nani.
Nani)morning beta. [shishank comes back 2]
shi) so my doctors r u ready.
Rid ) ji pap
anji) u bet dad. Shi) acha ridhima beta listen dr arman aj late ho gay. He met me 2day. May nay doc kerti ko bta dea hay pur agar wo pochay to dobara bta dayna. Un k d dost ka acident hua tha to wo bhe raat bhur jag rahay thay may nay un ko ghar bhayja hay.
Rid) ji papa.
Nani) beta tu ja k aram kur lay soya nahe thek say tu.
Pad) ma bilkul thek keh rahe hay ap 3 bajay say jag rahay hay.
Shi) padma u know na duty cals.
Pad) ab ap kuch kha k so jana . May abhe banati hu bta to daytay k a rahay hay
Shi) ok but plz juldi bhok bohat lage hay
Anji) k guys i m done . Ridz chalay. Rid) chalo di.
Shishank cals anji
Shi) anjali. Apni behan ka khayal rukhna.
Anji) ofcourse dad.
Shi) kitni jaldi time guzra pata he nahe chala abhe kul tuk yeh schol jate the.
Nani) thek kaha.
Pad) ye lay ap ka breakfast.
Shi) thanks.
anji and ridz reach sanjevani. [In the interns room there is a guy.]
guy) hi i m atul.
Rid) ridhima or yeh mayre di anjali.
Another girl enters
girl) yeh interns ka room hay rite.
Atul) yes or may hu atul yeh hay ridhima or woh hay anjali.
Girl) i m Muskan. Helo every1.
Atul) sub a gay?
Rid) nahe woh dr Arman late hay wo bhe a rahay hay.
Anji) acha ridz tujhay kya lagta hay k yeh woh Arman hay jis nay MBBS may puray Mumbai may top kea tha.
Mus) ha oye. May nay suna tha k MBBS ka toper bhe yaha hay.
Atul) chalo mujhay to laga tha k yaha may akayla boy hu pur aisa hay nahe. Atul looks at anji and sing roop tayra mastana pyar mayra divana bhol koe hum say na ho jaay. He looks at anji he is giving him i'l-eat-u look so he stop singing that song and sings 1 hazaro may mayre behna hay.
Edited by Kakashi_sensai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2
Mus) acha guys tumhay kya lagta hay wo arman dikhta kaisa ho ga?
Anji) humay kya jaisa bhe ho.
Rid) kafi chumpu type ho ga. Balo pay dhayr sara tayl(oil) ho ga. On the other side a bike stops a guy with short hair siting on it
*intern room*
mus) dhele se body ho ge.
*Other side* guy has a great body and a tatto on arm.
He enters the room after parking the bike all others r laufghing and imagining k arman koe book worm ho ga . But all r shocked when they look at him. He comes in Arman)hey guys.
At) yeh raha hamara book worm.
Arm) yo dude care ful. Arman goes near him . Atul gets scared and goes away.
Arm) yar yeh hospital hay ya beauty contest . Atul)why?
Arm) jitni bhe girls yaha hay they r beter then models. Ridz roled her eyes on this dilogue Except our aunty ge here[pointing towards ridz]

ridz was thinking that he is a flirt but how can he say that about her. She gets angry and he is lost in her . He thinks that he is so wrong she is gorgeous . But he comes back 2 planet earth when anji says helo.
Anji) helo Arman.
Mus) aaay ridz k baray may tamez say bol.
Ridz) behave ur self plz. She said this controling her anger.
Arman) ohhh nari shukti . I m afraid. (He starts laufghing and turns 2wards anji.)
Arm) helo beautiful. I m arman. And u?
Atul) jali (burnt)
anji gives him a look of now-u-r-gone but avoids him again[she thinks that atul is not worth it]
anji) anjali. Nice 2 meet u.
Arm) pleasure is al mime . He was about 2 say something but Kerti enters.
Ke) helo interns. I m kerti. U al wil report 2 me. I m glad k ap sub time say pehlay yaha thay. Good . Now folow me. All of them folow her .


She gives them there pagers and tel them about rules and now she tels them their duties.
Ke) Atul and muskan general ward, anjali ent ward , arman and ridhima childrens ward. Now go. Al of them leave 2 do there duties.
Edited by Kakashi_sensai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3.
*general ward muskan is checking a guy*
Mu) u fel from the bike rite.
Guy) yup.
Mu) how?
Guy) breaks fail ho gya. I think ap ko mujhay 1 tetnus ka injection dayna chaeay abhe 24 hours nahe hua u can inject me .
Mu) i know but ap ko kaisay pata.
Guy) may bhe yaha intern bun k ana tha but patient bun k a gya.
Mu) may bhe intern he hu. Muskan chada.
Guy) may rahul hu.
Arman enters
ar) hey muski break ho gya. Tum yaha kyu ho?
Mus) kuch nahe bus in ko injection day k ja rahe hu. But tu yaha kya kur raha hay? Ar)apnay dost say milnay aya tha he's rahul.
Ra) we just met.
After injecting rahul muskan leaves..

Ar)yar 1 bat puchu?
Arman said this very seriously Ar) yar tu mura kyu nahe.
Ra) kyu bay. Tayra to ful plan tha mujhay marnay ka.


Ar) mayra plan fail kaisay ho gya next time nahe ho ga.
Ra) bukwas bund bhe kur na.
Ar) now u fine ?
Ra) ha yar . Tu bol kaisa ja raha hay 1st day sub k sath 1st meting.
arman ko 1st day say sirf 1 bat yad aye or woh the when he 1st met ridhima Arman is starts thinking about ridhima again.
Ra) punches him hard on his shoulder and say Tujhay kya ho gya?
Ar) kuch nahe yar may ja raha hu i m very hungry . Tujhay kuch khana hay?
Ra) no dude. Bye
ar) take care. Arman runs 2wards the canten thinking may bhag kyu raha hu? mujhay us say milnay ke juldi kyu hay? Yar but itna beautiful face kon bar bar daykhna nahe chahta?
*canten*
arman is standing at the door looking at ridz back. He sudenly says
ar) palat.
No reaction
ar) palat.
Stil no reaction he gets angry and is about 2 leave when anji cals
anji) Arman. Ja kaha rahay ho . Join us .
Ar) may na... He couldnt complete he was angry but his anger vanished whe he saw ridz . He just went there and sat.
Anji) we r going 2 a party wana come.
Ar) yeah sure. Kub hay party.
Mus) aj rat ko at 9.
At) aj to bohat maza aay ga. Ridz u wil come na. Tum kuch bol nahe rahe.
Arman spoke b4 ridz.
Ar) dude rehnay day aunty ge parties may nahe jati
ridz get iritated again. Arman is thinking "how much i mised ur angry face. U look so cute."
ri) i wil come.
Ar) he is now back on earth so he talks " acha hay tumharay ghar walay tum say tung ho gay thora un ke jan choro"
ri) u stupid.
At) ay ridz stop na Arman plz yar usay tung na kur.
Mus) tujhay bola tha na tamez say baat kur.
Ar) k guys. Itna gusa thek nahe hota . I m going meet u at the party. U guys should also go break is over. Every 1 goes back 2 there duties
Edited by Kakashi_sensai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Guys i m updating late i know. Sory. Kafe long part hay i know aram say read karo 2, 3 din laga do. Phir i'l update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part!
Bahot short hai though...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: basket_101

Nice part!

Bahot short hai though...

thanks alot . I know aj kul busy hu. Or rahu ga bhe . Clases start ho gae
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear
great part
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shonadesire

hey dear
great part
plz update soon

wil update kul ya purso.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4
Arman recieved a mesage. "party is at club zodia be there till 9" this mesage was sent by Anji to every1 to tel them the time and the place of the party. Every1 went home and got ready all girls came there together Arman and Atul were already there .all girls were looking very beautiful but atul was looking at anji only and his mouth was wide open ( guys may lazmi btata k kis nay kya pehna pur mujhay girls k dreses ka kuch pata he nahe. So dmg ke koe party walay dress imagine kur lo. Sory)
Ar) beta atul mu bund kur lay. Is say pehlay koi makhi andar apna ghar bna lay.
Atul closed his mouth. Anji muski and ridz boys k pas pohanchti hay. Atul) hum say pyar kur lay tu. Hum say pyar kur lay tu. He said this while looking at anji .
An) atul! She was realy angry this time.
Is say pehlay k anji atul ka murder kurti Arman spoke.
Ar) chalo guys andar nahe jana kya yaha he sub kurna hay? Woh daykho woh dono chali bhe gaey.
Atul took advantage of the conversation betwen anji and arman and ran away. Arman, Atul, Anji also went in and joined Rids and Muskan. All of them had drinks (not alchohol normal drinks)
Anji) Arman wanna dance?
Ar) sure come on. U guys come 2 na.
Muski) nahe yar Arman! mujhay dance nahe ata. Or na he Rid or Atul ko ata hay.
Anji) ur wish. Come Arman.
Arman and Anji were dancing . It was almost 10 when Anji , Atul and Muski got a mesage from doc.kerti .
Anji) "emergency report now" sory Arman jana paray ga.
They went back to tel this to others and soon Anji , Muski , Atul left Ridz wanted 2 go to but muski asked her to stay and flirt with Arman.
Ar) to ridhima sub chalay gay. u want 2 dance .
Ri) no! Arman mujhay dance nahe ata.
Ar) is may ana kya hay! Just co . . . .

Arman was about to say something more but he stoped because he saw that 3 guys were dancing around a girl she was realy uncomfertable, trying to get away but she failed
* in Atuls car *
Atul) guys what u think kya hua ho ga?
Mus) jo bhe hua ho ga kuch acha nahe ho ga akhir emergency hay yar.
Anji) abhe ja k daykh layna waha he ja rahay hay.
Mus) oye anji tujhay itna gusa kyu rehta hay.
At) she looks cute when she's angry.
Muski looked at atul in surprice but anji was again furious.
An) u trying to flirt?
At) maybe.
Mus) kya bat hay atul aj kya hua . Us din jub nurse nay tujhay hi bola tha tu to lal(red) ho gya tha or aj.
At) guys may to such bola tum flirt sumjho ya kuch or woh tum pay hay.
* at the club *
[yad rukhna woh 3 guys thay guy1 guy2 guy3]
Ar) ridhima u stay here i'l be rite back.
Rid) arman tumhay waha janay ki koe jarurat nahe hay.
Arman just ignored what she said and went there.
Ar) hey guys. Leave her alone ok.
He puled the girl out .
Guy1) oye tayre behan hay kya jo tu yeh bol raha hay chul nikul yaha say.
Ar) i m not here 2 fight . U guys leave her alone i'l go.
Guy1) tu kon hay jo itna bol raha hay.
He said this and pushed armi.Arman pushed him 2. Then he punched arman rite on his face. Armi punched him back.
Edited by krazykiller - 13 years ago

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