*Poems*|nams|| our love story pg22 jun'27 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
To ye h kamal 6 mins ka..ek din dhamal mt karna lolz as usual vadiya poem hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwieee...its so beautiful poem...
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing poem but still i m not good at solving things so just waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
havent been updated dis since ages!! i will re do this whole thread soon wid new updates πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys im back !!! just look at my guts kal xam hai and me updating here πŸ˜†πŸ₯±

anyways this time i have something new in the store πŸ˜†

this time its a POEM / STRIP of few parts with 2 povs 😳

each part has two povs 1. Rey's 2. Kria πŸ˜›

fair enough isnt it ?πŸ˜ƒ

dont worry il post next three updates will b up soon tab tak enjoy ermmm read dis..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


.:: OUR LOVE STORY ::.

 

PART ONE : The Incomplete Breathing


[rey's pov]


Nights seem long.. the days seemed empty..

'wait for her' my heart yelled

'she is a cheater' my mind retorted

Quarrels quarrels all over!

Living without u is difficult I knew

But breathing would be this heavy least did I know

Never was I this disgraced in my life

Never was I in distress

What have u done to me ?

Whay have u left me ?

 

Its dark everywhere.. no source of light

Its hard to live .. no source of hope

Why did u come to my life when u had to leave me

All alone all disheartened

Your name is just like breathing for me

Your presence is that sweet fragrance wich I want to inhale forever

Your innocence is that pleasure my heart satisfies to have

But now night seems long days seems empty

Being dead is much easier than living a dead life..

Without you even breathing is incomplete..


i know its sad.. but pls do leave ur reviews.. promise its not as sad as u think as the story proceeds its ermm ermm.. wait nd read 😳


Edited by nams_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
kkoi toh reply karo itni mushkil se time nikalke updt kia hai πŸ˜”πŸ˜­
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Posted: 11 years ago
main padhte hi bolne wali thi sad hai...

tune niche likh diya...

u chose the least fav topic of mine...

but then also u portrayed beautifully...

u know the heart break the sufferings the agony and everything... aptly described...

loved it...

bas just don't go into these topics a lot okay??
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Posted: 11 years ago
di its amazing...loved it...beautiful!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
res comments 2morrow even..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Di its amazingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
the way u portray reys feeling is like wow!
koi palki ko yeh bhejo ki voh rey ko aisa hi banae!😑😑😑
Sad sad sad!
poem sad thi nd mai happy!
saddist :P
chalo will be waiting for ur next work!
and go to passion of love and check my comment!