*Poems*|nams|| our love story pg22 jun'27 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys im back !!! just look at my guts kal xam hai and me updating here 😆🥱

anyways this time i have something new in the store 😆

this time its a POEM / STRIP of few parts with 2 povs 😳

each part has two povs 1. Rey's 2. Kria 😛

fair enough isnt it ?😃

dont worry il post next three updates will b up soon tab tak enjoy ermmm read dis..😉😆


.:: OUR LOVE STORY ::.

PART ONE : The Incomplete Breathing


[rey's pov]


Nights seem long.. the days seemed empty..

'wait for her' my heart yelled

'she is a cheater' my mind retorted

Quarrels quarrels all over!

Living without u is difficult I knew

But breathing would be this heavy least did I know

Never was I this disgraced in my life

Never was I in distress

What have u done to me ?

Whay have u left me ?

Its dark everywhere.. no source of light

Its hard to live .. no source of hope

Why did u come to my life when u had to leave me

All alone all disheartened

Your name is just like breathing for me

Your presence is that sweet fragrance wich I want to inhale forever

Your innocence is that pleasure my heart satisfies to have

But now night seems long days seems empty

Being dead is much easier than living a dead life..

Without you even breathing is incomplete..


i know its sad.. but pls do leave ur reviews.. promise its not as sad as u think as the story proceeds its ermm ermm.. wait nd read 😳


Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
kkoi toh reply karo itni mushkil se time nikalke updt kia hai 😔😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
main padhte hi bolne wali thi sad hai...

tune niche likh diya...

u chose the least fav topic of mine...

but then also u portrayed beautifully...

u know the heart break the sufferings the agony and everything... aptly described...

loved it...

bas just don't go into these topics a lot okay??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di its amazing👏👏👏
the way u portray reys feeling is like wow!
koi palki ko yeh bhejo ki voh rey ko aisa hi banae!😡😡😡
Sad sad sad!
poem sad thi nd mai happy!
saddist :P
chalo will be waiting for ur next work!
and go to passion of love and check my comment!
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really amazing...beautifully portray rey's feeling... I was feeling the pain through out...
Great work... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome poem...
you are awesome girl...👏you write poem also..
love the way you describe rey's emotion...
love it...i had tears in my eyes...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is the 1st time I read ur poems
It was amazing
U r a brilliant writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ya true it's a little on the sad part... But really liked it... :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one!!!
Well potrayed rey's feelings n pain...!!!
Waiting for next part...
All d best for xams...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
heart touching poem nams..
luved it,..

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