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Nia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow! I really enjoyed reading the 4th chapter!! Thanks for the PM, waiting for your next update!! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 5 : Reflections

Maha update (part-1, part-2)

Reflections, Part-1

Mumbai, (Arnav at Kushi's house)

Arnav: Kushi, what are you hiding from me? Is he our...?

Kushi: She roared, "yeh mera bacha hain aur sirf mera, samjhe aap"
(Translation: He is my child, just mine. Did you get that?)

Arnav: this is a big thing in our life and you didn't care to inform me Kushi? How could you do this to me? Who are you to separate me from my kid Daamit?

Kushi: " Aapko himmat kaise huye humse yeh baat puchne ki" , Do you still think that you deserve to ask this question after what happened between us.
(Translation: How dare you to ask me)

I will never forget that fateless day, that last look given my baby, expecting a glimpse of faith from me to help him in reducing his pain. "

"Humein abhi bhi yaad hein vo pal, jab mera bacha mauth khe muh mein tadap rahatha, dard se cheek rahata, chillarahata, (she became all lost and in a slow voice) Aur phir hume chod khar chalae gayatha (with tears in her eyes)".
(Translation: I still remember that second, that second of by child's last look, his pain and is death)

(Then she put on a brave face and said)
"Chap gaya hein mera dimaag me vo pal...abh nahi mitsaktha".
(Translation: The death of child is printed in my mind, now i cannot erase them)

(then in a piercing voice she said)
Nafrat karthey hai hum Aapse, Nafrat...,Kyunki aap srif Nafrat ki laayak hain Mr. Raaizada"
(Translation: I hate you, because you are just meant to hate)

"The minute my son dead, our bonding is also lasted. There's nothing left between you and me for you to expect any explanations from me.

And now you don't dare to come near me or my child" (with aggressive eyes, hatred filled face and in a sharp piercing voice)

Arnav: Her each word is a dagger to his heart; her each tear drop made his heart bleed, her each accusation made him feel guilty, and her pain killed him inside. He felt he deserves this, he felt he is meant to be hated for giving her pain which she never deserved.

He wanted to heal her pain, he wanted to wipe her tears, he wanted to calm her turmoil, He wanted to give her an explanation, he wanted to ask her for forgiveness, but what all he could do is stand still and watch her helplessly waiting for one moment where he can intrude her saying "Kushi', Kushi'" in between, but she did not let him speak.

After venting out all her venom, he tried to calm her by saying, "Kuhsi'. Listen to me once' (In a concerned and painful voice) and tried to hold her shoulders when she is about to leave. But he missed his hold only to get his finger stuck in neck ID card holder which made him to take a glance of the ID card.

He is shocked with an unbelievable expression on looking at it and he looked at her with a small smile on his lips and about to ask something

" Kushi Tum, yeh'"(could'nt complete as she cuts him abruptly)
(Translation: Kushi is this true? are you a...)

Kushi: "Humein aapka koi bhi bhaat nai sunni hein, aur aapke Shakhal bhi nahi dhekni hai.

"Dhoor rahiyeh humsein, Sumjeh aap", and quickly skipped into her house, shutting the door on his face.
(Translation: Just go away from me, did you get that)

Avi: He had seen the whole ArHi confrontation from the glass windows, but he couldn't hear a bit of sound. He has seen his mother shoving Arnav and her expressions during the whole conversation. With all bits and pieces of information he sensed, he came to a conclusion that Arnav is troubling his mother.

Arnav: He is all disappointed and devastated listening to her accusations. But there is no semblance of anger on his face. He knows her very well and what she is going through now. He can feel her pain. He wanted to buy time to heal her wounds and kill her past demons. He did not want to give her any more stress.

He wanted to give her space so that she can calm down and relax. He wanted to buy time, make things work and let her rethink about her judgment. He left that place not before making a resolution of getting her back.

Kushi: She was highly disturbed, like a big tornado has hit her, she was fuming with anger, breathing heavily and stood at a silent place not knowing what to do. Suddenly two little hands has hugged her legs from back side..

Akki: Amma, are you Ok? Who is that man? (in a concern voice)

Kushi: She took a second to collect herself and said "Forget about him and you come here into my arms" and then she hugged him tightly and said

"Beta, today you can go and play in the park and i will make you do your Home work this night", to divert his attention.

then she went to Devi Mayya. closed her eyes and started speaking to her.

Hey Devi mayya, Why did you bring him back? this time i will not allow anything happen to my son and not allow him to break my heart once again. You very well know what is good for me and how to help me, so please Raksha Karna Devi mayya"

Raizada Mansion, Delhi

Naani, Payal, Ananya(Anjali's Daughter) sat on the dining table, while Naani is having tea, Paayal is applying oil to Ananya.

Naani: Ananya, did you finished your homework.

Ananya: Yes Maami, Payal Bua helped me and Naani from next week if Bua is going to work then who is going to help me out.

Payal: (with a sad and confused expression)

Naani: Hum hein na, also your Naani and Arnav maama will also come by next week. so we all will help you out.
(Translation: I am there here)

Naani to Payal: Payal bittiya, when is the next appointment for Anjali's check up.

Payal: Ji, kal hein, I will take her to hospital, do you have anything to say Naaniji.
(Translation: It is 2 mmrw)

Naani: I am thinking to come along with you. I wanted to talk with doctor about Anjali.

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Shravani_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

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(scroll up for Reflections, part-1)

Reflections, Part-2

Back to Mumbai: (Arnav in his Hotel room)

Arnav came back to his hotel room and silently took a resting position on a recliner, closed his eyes, all relaxing while thinking about Kushi. He was very happy to see Kushi doing well. Every second he used to worry about her well being. All his fears are gone now and then he thought about what he has seen in the ID card and voiced himself in his mind"

So, Mrs.Kushi Kumari Gupta Mallik, is working for Micro Soft as a JAVA programmer, holy sh*t, How is this possible, Unbelievable." Forming a small grin on his face which is noticed my Maami and is reflected on her face.

Maami: She was very happy to see him taking rest after many days. She did not want to disturb him and was eagerly waiting for him to open his eyes. As soon as he woke up she attacked him with chain of questions.

Arnav Bittuva, Bhaat is happening? Bhere have you gone? Phati saadi ki konu patha chalae kaa?
(Translation: Arnav, what is happening? where have you gone and did you find anything about Kushi)

Arnav: Maamji, I met Kushi today. (with a happy face)

Maami: Bhaat ? Bhere ? How? Kaha hein pathi saadi ? wo tumre saath aaye kaahi nayi ? (With all worried expression and a concerned voice)
(Translation: What ? where ? how ? Where did you find Kushi? why she did not come with you)

Arnav: He explained everything to Maami about what happened at Kushi's place (expect that passionate hug😉 )

Maami: She got bit emotional knowing about her grandson and was very angry on Kushi for not informing them about her grandson. They she told

Arnav bittuva, tum don't worry "Hum humrey grandson kho laibaivey, jaroor laibyevey, tum abhi ke abhi lawyerva kho Phone lagaaileo?"
(Translation: Arnav, you dont worry, we will get back our grandson, just call a lawyer)

Arnav: Maami No, you are not going to do that. I will do everything, I will try to make better and bring them home. Maami now you Relax.

Maami: teek hai, agar tum kaha tho mein aisa kuch nahi karenge, and she started calling again.
(Transation: Ok, if you are saying then i will not do anything like that)

Arnav: Maami, what are you doing, i told you not to call

Maami: Nahi Arnav bittuva, I am calling to Phatisaadi's maternity home, uka bhi thodi shaanthi mileygi na phati saadi ke barey mein sunkein"
(Translation: no Arnav, I am not calling lawyer, but i am calling Kushi's parents as they are very much worried about Kushi, since when she left us, so that they will leave in peace)

Arnav: No Maami, let me mend things first, then we will inform it to everyone. I don't want to take any risk which is going to hurt Kushi's feelings.

Maami: Teek hain, but atleast show me my grandson from a distance.

Arnav: Maami you have already met him in the park.

Maami: Already met him...? In the park...? is it the one who asked us whether he could hide at the back of us?

Arnav: Haan Maami (with a smile)

Maami: Hello hai bye bye, Arnav Bittuva unka tho hum abhi abhi park mein dekhath rahein" (in an exciting voice)
(Translation: I have just seen him in the park)

Arnav and maami went to park to see Akshay. and there he is, they saw him, he looked like a little Angel, with all innocence, giggling like sunshine, with bright eyes, charming looks, fair complexion playing with a ball

Maami: she got emotional with tears of happiness, dying to take him in her arms and feel his touch.

Akshay: He is running towards the ball and suddenly fell down because of a small stone on the ground.

Arnav: He rushed to help him and gave his hand.

Akshay: He remembered what he has seen at his house and he refused to take his hand and got up himself making a fuming face with piercing looks. (He was thinking that Arnav is trying to woo him so that he could get to his mother.)

" I know what you are up-to😡😡. Do you think my mother has no one? I am there for my mother. I will show you hell if you dare to flirt my mother once again,Dhoor raho ussey, did you get that"😡😡 (giving Arnav and Maami a mento's moment)
(translation: Stay away from her)

Arnav:😲 he was shocked and started smiling.😆😆😆

Maami: 😲😲Arnav bittuva, yeh tho thumarey baal se nikal aaya🤣🤣
(Translation: Arnav, He is just like you)

Note: Silent readers please do like and comment.

P18) Chapter 4: Paths Crossed
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59627835

P48) Chapter 6: Sita sings the blues (Part-1, Part-2)
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60684704

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asumaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

waw ... u re one hell of a writtter 👏👏👏
can t wait for more

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Zari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Love your writing. Great job

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

awesome update loved it she has made her self strong loved khushi rant on him he totally deserved it loved how his son warned him about coming close to his mother and mami thinking about getting a lawyer khushi is not the pushover she was she is stronger loved the update thanks for the pm and the translations

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago