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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aarya-

Dilon me tum apni betabiyan leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum
Nazar me khwaabon ki bijliyan leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum
Hwa ke jhokon ke jaise aazad rehno sekho
Tum ek dariya ke jaise lehron mein behna sekho
Hr ek lamhe se tum milo khole apni baahein
Hr ek pal ek nya sama dekhe nigahein
Jo apni ankhon mein hairanian leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum
Dilon mein tum apni betabian leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum
~Javed Akhtar


Jab tum likh rahe ho, to zinda ho tum...

This is one thing in the movie which sweeps whole of my attention, it is better than any of the scenes, all the characters and not to forget the songs ofcourse. The way Farhan recites it , makes it more beautiful and meaningful.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you! That was really moving...

All of you guys have sincerely been trying to get me to write and I do appreciate the efforts. I'm stuck in a rut, but that is no reason not to write.
(As Aarya quotes, Dilon me tum apni betabiyan leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum) Since the urges to write remain, that still makes me alive...😊

Writing...Sure, tonight I will give my best to finish off that update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Thank you! That was really moving...

All of you guys have sincerely been trying to get me to write and I do appreciate the efforts. I'm stuck in a rut, but that is no reason not to write.
(As Aarya quotes, Dilon me tum apni betabiyan leke chal rahe ho,to zinda ho tum) Since the urges to write remain, that still makes me alive...😊

Writing...Sure, tonight I will give my best to finish off that update.

Na Karoge Hame Maayoos Tum, Iss Ummeed Se Zinda Hai Hum .
Take your own time dear.
Love
Mayukha
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh!!!! you are here atlast . Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Everything that is new or uncommon raises a pleasure in the imagination, because it fills the soul with an agreeable surprise, gratifies its curiosity, and gives it an idea of which it was not before possessed.

Joseph Addison

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Posted: 13 years ago
can we have an update here tooo? 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hasini! I am so so so happy you're writing New York Times again! I just have four or five pages left to play catch up with and then I'll be done :)

A piercing! I certainly did not expect that but touche on the impulsiveness of NYT Geet.

I was completely thrown off when I started reading the rewrite of the story - well, I say rewrite but that does some discredit to you because this is no rewrite, my friend! There's more depth and development here than there was in the original run of the story. I was very much in love with the first NYT and so my stubborn nature made me a little apprehensive of the changes. However, I've found that I actually like the fresh insights into the characters. The revised airport meeting makes Maan seem more...hmm, human somehow. Getting a look at his thoughts, seeing him look at other women and all that.

Also, while I was reading through, I kept thinking 'she better not have gotten rid of all those gorgeous pictures!'. I'm happy you didn't and glad to see that the visuals still appear to be very much a part of your writing process. Honestly, it is solely your story and everything encapsulated within it that sometimes induces within me a lust for New York.

Anyways, I wish you all the best with NYT and wish for it to be even more successful than before. I know it'll be a while until their entry (well, I hope there still is an entry in this version) but I really can't contain my excitement for N&R. I'm interested to see if you have any new developments for their characters.
Edited by kaamchorni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you Kaamchorni...

Yeah! there will be changes as you said, but only to give more clarity on their thoughts and their general outlook on life, which I felt was lacking in the last version.

N&R, need their own story. That will be in Part 2 of NYT times, which I'm calling the Twin Tales of New York.

Hopefully we will get there soon :)

Edit:

There is a reason I chose New York...It seems to do it own share of seducing besides the obvious M&G leads in the story. The credit goes to the city than anything else.
Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10: Coffee-o-mancy

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There was always much to be told about a man's coffee order and that had what spiked their later afternoon chat. The group of five women waited eagerly at their table by the entryway for the blond hulk to place his order, their ears keenly tuned to his hoarse voice as he spoke at the counter, "A grande, extra hot, decaf soy latte with extra foam, please..."

Jassi, their office admin, gagged and Tanya the IT intern twisted her face with unforgivable disgust as Meera said, "Awh! So gay...Wrong city Blondie..."

"I just hope he doesn't put his pinkie up when he sips from his cup" Jassi added and that triggered a fresh bout of laughter from the women.

Geet sat with her back to both the door and the counter and so she relied on the other women to do justice to their prime view seating by giving her a fair description of the customers who came in for their late afternoon caffeine fix.

"It's really hard these days to find a coffee order that stands for a man's man..." She said adjusting her ring and wincing at once, "But I still say going out on a coffee date is rather a revelation that most women dismiss and instead shoot for the big disappointment dinners. Only to feel embarrassed and alone at the end of it..."

"Who are you and what did you do with my friend?" Meera chimed, shaking her head with disbelief.

Tanya hooted low, "Well, we have the date doctor in the house..."

"Please!" Geet took another sip and waved off the attention that she didn't expect to gather.

"I think Geet is right" Jaasi agreed, "Small things about a coffee order can surely speak a lot about the person"

"Notice if they add honey or sugar or Organic brown sugar and that should tell you if he is a tree hugger, casual about his food or..." Geet quoted with her left hand and added, "your own neighborhood lobbyist for Organic foods"

"And if the guy orders soy, then run the other side out the door...You can never tell which side those men are batting for" Meera contributed holding her stomach as a deep tickle of a laughter started in her belly.

"Have you folks checked out this 'What does your coffee say about you' poster?" Geet, pulled up the webpage on Meera's phone and passed it around for their next course of amusement.

The others giggled and tittered too when Geet felt partly drawn to the silly humor in the conversation, a small smile on her lips, when another side of her still felt lost, immersed in a losing battle with the part of her body that had turned red as a tomato by then.

She'd perhaps always known that no zing could take away what had come to be in that moment. It was surprising her body would come alive with a simple touch and how mutinous it can be over her sanity and reclaim all of her slavish senses to have them all chanting with a maddening need. That it wasn't all dead and needless as a scattered twig she had once thought it to be.

There had been no guilt whatsoever. Even as she had rummaged every moral fiber that she was made of, she couldn't find one that would wipe away her contentment that her body could react in ways she hadn't known before.

It felt darker that it was brought about by a man who wasn't her husband. Perhaps, this was the dark side of her soul that she hadn't acknowledged yet. As long as she didn't put words to define what or why or by whom, she was safe in the dismissal of that formless presence she felt deep inside. It was only a matter of time, she told herself, before she would bring those proscribed feelings down to their knees. New York was to blame; there was a strange impulse in its air. Or perhaps in the water, that made her into this other woman she couldn't bring herself to identify with.

"Shush..." Meera hushed their laughs and Jassi's face flushed. "Oh! Shit" Tanya muttered as they all collectively brought her back from the reveries she often slipped into off late. It took her a moment to notice a man in a familiar green shirt walk up, from two tables away from their own, to the counter with a coffee mug in his hands.

Even as she was turning, she heard him order, "I will have a large black coffee, please..." It struck her that same instant that he didn't bother with the fancy coffee shop diction and she knew he wasn't feigning ignorance to that part either.

Just then she remembered another article she'd read about coffee order predictions.

Large black: You are a boss. You probably ride to work on a tiger. Nobody knows your middle name.

How true...She wondered as her hand shot up to the ring, but in a moment of deliberation she brought it back to hug her coffee cup on the table. The aching persisted and now it had morphed into something she failed to recognize and so, she instead focused on figuring if he had been in the shop before them and heard their ruckus of a conversation. She racked her brains and couldn't come up with an image of him following them or entering through the door. Turning her head back to the women at her table, she met their caught-in-the-act looks, when Meera prompted again, "Let's get going..."

Heels cluttered on the tiles and they scuttled towards the door without a word. But once they had reached the last crossing that took them to the side of their office building, her hand felt reasonably empty with the exception of the coffee cup in the other hand. She'd not carried her purse and had instead tucked her lone credit card into the pocket of her grey skirt with which she'd paid at both Zing and the coffee shop. That left the mobile phone which she was aware was safely left on her office desk, next to desk phone. It could have been the wind on her face that felt heavy and coercive, secretly forcing her to go the other way than the one she was taking. But she was certain it wasn't the wind, though she also knew she couldn't be honest and acknowledge there was something more meaningful at play. She saw the lights switch from amber to the green walking man symbol and that split second was all she needed to make up her mind.

"Umm! Meera..." She held onto Meera's arm before she could take a step onto the road, "I think I might have left my mobile phone back in the shop. I will have to go check just in case..."

"I have a meeting in another 10 mts. I have to go...Sorry" Meera spoke in a hurry as she sped back to cross in time before she lost the signal. She didn't bother explaining that she didn't need Meera's company in that daunting task of wanting to strike up a conversation with him. As annoyingly shy as she was, she was sure she would never bring up the topic she wanted to broach in Meera's presence.

There wasn't a plan so to speak, but her heels tapped on the hard concrete of the side walk with an equal measure of reluctance and an eerie anticipation, she couldn't fully understand. And so when her eyes caught him striding towards her in the opposite direction, she didn't know what or how she was going to chat him up and she nearly let him pass her. But it was just her luck when he looked up from his mobile phone when they were about to cross each other and after a short beat of a knowing look at her, he began coughing loudly. Clearly, the hot liquid had gone down the wrong tube and that was as good enough a reason as any to reach out when he'd stopped right beside her from the discomfort he was feeling then.

All her relief from not having to come up with a lame excuse for a talk was short lived when she studied that his gaze flew somewhere to the left of her face. He was still coughing when she saw the beginnings of a faint smile kick up his lips.

Shit! Her cheeks heated up with a flush.

Why hadn't she thought about the part that may be he was more perceptive and not so indifferent as he seemed?

"Nice ring..." She heard him say even as her heart dropped all the way from the 63rd floor.

Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Jyoti: Thanks for the motivational quotes. They do help! 😊

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