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Posted: 13 years ago
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REALIZATION


"I Love him, wow ranbir is so so so cute, wenever i see him i always go gaga over him, his smile, his style everything is jst so grt about him, he is d mst hansome guy present in d world, wish i was with him"❤️ ..Yuvraj was passing frm there wen he heard those harsh words which litrally stabbed his heart.😭Inside the clsrum only Suvreen, Annie and Naro were present giggling nd njyng.. ol dese words were said by Suvreen, his topper about some kk ranbir, pangs of jealousy hit him.. does she actly loves sum idiot??💔

he thought to listen to their conversation further, Annie said " OMG, Suvi tune to mere aneesh k lie pagalpan ko b peche chod dia", Suvreen : " ha to, mera ranbir h hi itna jyada sweet, pata h wo na roj mere sapno me ata h" .. Yuvi thought (" acha to wo iske sapno me ata h, mjhse to harwaqt irritate hoti rehti h")😭 naro said " ye na uske pyar me pagal ho chuki h, ese to in sb me intrest ni h par jb ranvir ki bt ati h to.. " suvreen cut her in midway" are yr mere ranbir ki to bt hi kuch aur h" bs dat was it, mera ranvir.. yuvi could nt stand it any longer.. he went away.. suvreen further said" uski acting dkhi thi rockstar me, rabvir kapoor is the bestesttt.." annie nd naro smiled at her cute antics " ha baba ha, tera ranbir kapoor is d best, ab khush".. suvreen nodded her head cutely saying bahut...:)😳

yuvraj went straight to the jim nd began exercising. flashbacks of ol their moments together was goin through his mind... their first meeting, their first fight, swimming pool incident, india gate, their first dhaba date... her thoughts entirely captured his mind.. nd den her words abour ranvir, who was dis villain who was trying to snatch ol his happiness, his every blow was aimed at him.. nd finally he fell, exhausted🤢.. why why why am i bothered, let her go with sum loser, why does she effects me so much.. what is happening to me.. tears made thier way out. his heart was aching... jst 1 name was hovering over him topper, suvreen...

mannu nd rathi came running to him, what happened bhai, they voiced thier concern.. go away, shouted yuvi, let me stay alone..

pata ni yr bhaiko kya ho gya, ese to ajtk kbhi behave ni kia.. mannu nd rathi were discussing wen suvreen heard dem.. she askd dem " kya hua, yuvi ko kuch hua h?? Wo thik to h na??" she was extremely cncrnd nd dat was obvious on her face😃. dey thought bhai wud b mre angry if they'll tell nythng so they surpassed it with sum lame joke..

later on in the evening, yuvi was standing beside the window lukin at d moon thinking about his topper, she luks so cute wen she smiles.. nd watever he dosent want to think bout d mrning incident.. he has 1 thing clear in his mind dat he is affected by her.. mannu nd rathi came frm behind nd stood their silently, he noticed their presence nd instantly realised his mistake, he was doin dat again.. he himself said once dat ladki ki wajah se kbhi dosto me ladai ni honi chahie.. he turned back nd smiled nd a group hug much awaited🤗.. he said sry.. they said "its ok bhai par apko hua kya tha? Pata h suvreen b puch ri par hmne kuch ni btaya usko acha kia na".. he instantly became alert, "kya kon puch rha tha?" " are wahi suvreen guggal, topper of d year" dey said nd hified nd strtd laughing.. bt yuvraj again went back to his thoughts.. she was askin bout him means she was cncrnd for him, may b she was worried about him😃.. lekin why wud she, she loves sum1 else.. .. hw cn he say dat, bt she admitted it herself nd why does he cares if she does, again he entered the pool of emotions..


I'm a big fan of yuvreen so thought of writing this random story... sry guys, this was a small part.. pls forgive my mistakes.. i'll continue d story soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahw, I just love jealousy, I think it one of the ways
to realise your love, and you wrote feeling beautifully!
P.s. It's Ranbir right?
Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wooohooo another OS on YuvReen yayy..

Wow!!1 superbb!! Yuvraj getting affected n all and then he's thinking so muchhh about it...it's so realistic according to his character...and aww Suvi...in love with Ranbir..lol
Nice !!! continue soon and do pm me :)
Edited by isnat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice...go ahead...pm me if u can 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thankyou every1 for ur lykes nd cmnts.. i'm gona cntinue it real soon nd yeah thanx 4 telling it's ranbir... :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2


Next day : a new day, a new morning nd some new thoughts... yuvraj wake up with a smile on his face, now topper hovered his dreams too.. he has surely gone insane.. bt it was enough now cheetah was back in action, he's goin to kick out that faltu ranbir frm his toppers lyf😡Bt before doin dat he shud atleast knw about him, he doesn't knw any1 of dis name before yesterday... okay task 4 d day was to search about his enemy.. okay so he gave d task to both chamchas, to get every information possible of every guy with dis name present in d clg.. nd himself gone through her friend list on fb.. bt got no success at d end of d day.. either the guys with dis name were complete nerds whom his topper wud never lyk nd he himself threatned sum of d boys with dis name in d clg😆, bt they told him dey didnt even knew her, she had jst 1 frnd with dis name nd on searching his profile he got to knw he was in a relationship with some neha.. mannu nd rathi were d mst cnfusd, what had happnd to their bhai, has he gone mad?? oh god, why r u making it so tough 4 me, shud i go nd ask her directly.. thought yuvi. Nd suddenly it clickd if nt her he cn ask dat to her frnds, or even her.. he desperately needed to knw bout him. bt he cnt ask dem jst lyk dat, he has to think of sumthing..

It was lunch break, Annie nd Naro were coming towards d canteen, it was a golden chance, as suvreen was nt with dem bt den were was she?? he came towards both of dem, " arey aaj dono billiyan akele, kya bt h"😆annie " shut up yuvi, tm hme billiyan keh rhe ho?" She pouted.. : "are nhi nhi, me to bs puch rha tha topper ni dkhyi de rhi?" " ha wo lib gyi h kuch buks issue karane waha se direct yaha ayegi"Naro replied.. " oh acha, to tm dono ayo na, sath me lunch krte h.."yuvi offerd.. k, they both agreed.. they ordred their lunch nd yuvi began his plan. Acha to ye pyar k bare me tm logo ka kya khyal h? Askd yuvi.. yuvi tu ye kesi bten kr rha h, kuch hua h kya? Askd a cncrnd annie.. are ni yr me to ese hi gk k lie puch rha tha, acha chodo kuch aur bt krte h.. said yuvi.. (plan no2 ;) ) yuvi: "acha tmhe mera naam kesa lgta h, kitna royal h na?" he has actly gone nuts thought both of them passing luks to each other.. yuvi: " are btao na, sharmao mt😆?" ha acha naam h, par kyu? Replied naro.. yuvi: " are ese hi" jst den he realised dat topper was entering d cnteen he instantly said : "ha par lekin pata h kuch naam na bht hi bekar sound krte h, jese jese( actd as if he was thinking, nd wen she was jst behind her) ranbir, hehe pata h bht bade losers hote h is naam k log, ek tha mere skul me b, cheeteh ka shikar bn gya tha.." as suvreen headed towards d cnteen he saw annie nd naro sitting with yuvi.. she became irritated, iske sath bethne ki kya jarurat thi.. as she approached she could hear wat was he toking bout, nd as soon as she heard the name of ranbir, her anger knew no bounds, hw dare he called her ranbir a loser, me ise chodne wali ni.. nd she screamed in anger, " tmhri himmat kese hui ese bolne ki" nd dis was wat he wantd... he smiled inwardly.. " kya topper, tu itna bhadak kyu rhi h, esa b kya bol dia mene, puch le apni dosto se ye b to yei thi".. bt she was real angry😡 " tmhe kya lgta h, tmhe jo mann krega tm bole jaoge, hw cn u cmnt over sum1" " cmnt, are me to bs yei keh rha tha ki ranbir naam k log bhais ki puch hote h" he said smiling.. nd dat smile added fuel to her anger.. annie nd naro came forward to resolve d issue seeing d situation was worsening..yuvi again said " are, tu kyu itna bhadak rhi h, tera tau lage h k?? " inside he was happy nd jealous too.. happy dat his plan is goin to b succesful nd jealous cos of seeing her posesiveness.. she cant even stand mocking of dis name..!! annie interupted in between " come-on yuvi, tm b na, kyu pareshan kr rhe ho bechari ko, ab apne crush k bare me koi b ye sunega to bhadkega hi na" "CRUSH???" yuvi actd as if he was amazd.. " are, apni topper kisi ko lyk krti h, kya bt h tu to bht badi ho gyi topper.. kon h bhai hm b to jane?" jealousy was obvious in his tone.. suvreen sensed his voice nd felt dat it was ol goin on d wrong track so she replied very inocently " tmhe kyu btau ki mera crush ranbir kapoor h.." " ranbir kapoor??" said a shockd yuvi.. " are ha yuvi, woi jordan mtlb rockstar wala, woi to h hmari suvreen ka latest crush" said naro smiling and hified with annie, suvreen passed angry looks to dem nd yuvraj.. he was nt able to cntol, he started laughing madly.. OMG this situation was lyk khoda pahad aur nikli chuhiya ... hahahahhahahaha...

Suvreen became mre angry, she yelled " whats so funny bout it? Tm mjhpe hans rhe ho ya mere ranbir pe, dkho tm na hm dono me se kisis pe b ni hans skte, samjhe, varna" varna varna kya nd same scene repeated as of their first meeting in nainital.. after the falling nd eyelock😍they stood straight embarrassed bt again yuvi mocked her, " vese aur ese tere kitne crush h?" " shahrukh, amir aur b bht sare, par latest wala abhi ranbir h, kyu tm kyu puch rhe ho?" she replied very innocently.. "bs bs rhne de, ese hi pucha, dkhne k lie aur kitne h jinki kismat kharab h"..( jb ek naam ne mera ye haal kia to itne sare, bhagwaaannn) suvreen: " hawww, tm na yuvi, me na tmhe chodungi ni" yuvi:" me b to yei chahta hun ;) ..nd d bell rang, it tym 4 d cls..

It was night again nd yuvi was standing beside his window again looking at d moon nd thinking bout his topper.. bt unlike yesterday, he was relived nd happy frm inside.. today he realised hw much she meant to him, she was everything.. yes he was in love, he got all his answers... yes he was madly in love with his nd only his topper.. ❤️



sry 4 d mistakes... hope u lyk it.. :)

Edited by cutemaahi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww how cuteee...he trired soo hard to know about Ranbir lol..and now..he relised he's in love...waiting for the next part :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the second part was awesome ...even better than the 1st 😆 ..bt ya without the 1st part the 2nd one is incomplete...update soon...will be waiting for the next part...
Edited by NancyB - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dis part was awsum yar!!!!!!!!!! continue continue :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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second plan worked !!
can u put an index on first pg ? :)

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