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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey Mayu!

Lovely OS. I really appreciate your writing style. And the following lines are superb:

Priya: "Bilkul nahi; aapse pyaar karna meri sabse badi sazaa ho; par mujhe ye sazaa zindagi bhar kubul hai!"

Thanks for the PM.😊

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taashu11

@taashu11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awesome... hopefully ekta ye read karti aur inplement karti...

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sss283

@sss283

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

hooray...loved it...smashing os mayu...

continue this os soon pls...

loved raya being together...

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Mani

@Mani-RK

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Beautifully written thanx for da pm

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow nice update indeed a new beginning for their life ..
thank you

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IPSO_FACTO

@IPSO_FACTO

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

its really very nice...i am desperately hoping that the same stuff happens in the show too...very nice os...enjoyed reading it.

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veena singh

@veena23

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

He placed her on the bed; lying besides herself. He wanted to grasp her; confess to her how much he loves her; wanted to make love. But he had to wait; there were many walls; not social; but he respected Priya and couldn't go against her wishes. He gently met his lips with hers; and she responded. She was ready to submit to the man whom she is in love with. Is she ready to submit? After all that happened in the last few weeks, he needed and assurance.😳

thats sooo sweet...vry nice update ...love it sooo much..thanx 👏👏