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Posted: 13 years ago

I am writing the update for this one. So hope the update will be soon up...

Just to let you all know, After the coming update, the Maaneet moments will start and the it will slowly go on increasing and this FF have lots and lots of Maaneet moments awaiting. 😉
So be with this FF Dearies.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
From next update Maaneet moments will start and slowly slowly the moments are going to increase and even passion.
Lots of Passionate Maaneet momnets are awaiting to come in this FF. So be with the story.
-Anu
Part 33
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Banner Credit goes to @-piya

"Now Maan, I know Geet is disturbed coz you took away her child from her. But why has this incident shocked her so much and why her depression is not getting better and why she tries to hurt herself and you by her acts, is all reason I want to know about your both relationship from begining"

Maan staye quiet for a while but then he knew for Geet to get well he have to do this and he was ready to do anything to get her back.

"We met at Hoshiyarpur, and the first time we met we had a different kind of strong attraction, all I thought that it was lust but now I realize how could a lust have such strong feel. We on mutual consent decided to get into relationship and now I realize, how soon we went on going deep and deep into relation, still I thought it was just a lust game between us but"

He paused

"What but" asked armaan

"She realized soon that it was not all just game, yet she never expected anything from me… realizing her love she just kept on giving me… whatever I demanded."

"It was dream world… we would always be lost in each other.. what days those were..

Beautiful as could be… after whole day of work, she would without complain cook for me, with so much love and I would always be there troubling her and then joining her in whatever she did.. never left her alone for a single moment when she was with me. She took it all as my love and all I thought was the lust that kept us together."

"I demanded to be possessive, she gave me. Knowing I had been with so many girls never questioned me.. she accepted the relation as it was, never showing her authority on me but gave all authority on her to me…. Never hesitated to give herself to me.. never said no…was always there for me. She never took any favor from me Just lived with me coz we had to be together otherwise used no advantage of my money or status ."

"I remember the days, she traveled by bus in public and I have to provide her guard… it was my selfish motive. I could not bear anyone touching her… she was just mine, only mine "

Maan said all in a breadth and the got lost in those old days.. he was all lost for long hours and armaan was waiting for him to come back to present…

After being lost in those moments for long Maan shied

"Beautiful, life was just beautiful, perfect" and tears escaped his eyes.

He resumed again

"I kept on insulting her, telling she could never be part of my family and she said nothing, silently made my house a home… gave me the family"

"Only one thing she had asked me and I could not do that for her"

"What"

Maan gulped his saliva with pain and guilt

"she only wanted to be associated with Maan and not MSK .. she always said that… and all I did was become MSK and insulted her publicly for trying to wrap MSK in her game… I used such words which people will think twice before speaking but with no fault of her and my escape I used such words to her"

"She just left.. said nothing. After taking everything from her all I did was accuse her for something she always wanted to keep away with."

So then, how did you guys meet again?

"I could not leave without her.. I did not realize it was love, but all I knew was she was mine and she will be back with me and I went behind her. She was getting married and I could not take it. She had surrendered to her family but little did I knew that even after my accusation and insult she will not give herself to anyone.. so she consumed poison.. just to end her life being mine"

"And again for all her sacrifice all I did was accuse her again and this time a blunder…Accused her for consuming poison to end my part in her when she consumed the poison so that she could be only mine."

"Snatched her away from her family… did not twice think how will she bear that her family disowned her and how broken they were due to her.. all I cared was my family, my child."

He paused… took a deep sigh before making one more big confession

"I did not marry Geet, I just married a mother of my child."

"I killed Geet, I finished everything with my own hand"

"and then you know very well what more and biggest blunder I did, snatching Mohit away from her"

Armaan looked at him with disgusted face

"You know what Maan, I feel like throwing up on you…You devil, you got an angel in your life and you crushed her, what else can a devil do"

"Armaan, please bring back my Geet., please Armaan. I love her, I know now I love her.. I want my Geet back.I love her, I love her"

"Come on Maan, do you think I will bring Geet back for you, No. Its for her and her son only but the biggest irony is all that, the moment Geet is back or in the process of bringing Geet back I will need Maan.. because with all you have said, Geet does not exist without Maan.. That's her love and her life."

"You definitely don't deserve her but I have no option. Ok, Now I will need to talk to Geet. I will meet her tomorrow but please do not let her know I am coming."

While Maan was returning back home he did not have the strength to go back to work and he was returning back home.

While at home, Geet has just returned to her room making mohit sleep. Nobody expected Maan at home at this hour.

She was happy and contended after playing with Mohit and came to her room. She wanted to rest, when she saw Maan's shirt on the bed. She picked it to remove it but in that process her nose got the smell of his shirt. His fragrance so close, Geet could not resist and she pocked her nose more into it.

She slowly started drowning in him, in thoughts of their time together, she was so lost in him that she did not hear his footsteps coming.

Maan entered his room and was shocked to see Geet hugging his shirt and smiling. He quietly wanted to go away but in the process he made noise from the door and her trance was broken. She saw Maan and then her holding his shirt. She got up, threw his shirt on his face and left the room.

"Why do you love me so much. I don't deserve it." He said after she left.

Next day after breakfast when Maan left Armaan came to visit Geet.

"Hey Dr. Armaan, nice to see you" "Hi Geet, how are you"

"Again Geet, I am just Mrs khurana only, or else I am not talking, phir kerna kisis bhoot ka ilaz"

"Ok Baba, Mrs Khurana… well I know who you love to listen this name from"

"No body is allowed" "Maan"

"Who is Maan, I don't know any Maan" "Really?? I can read the lie on your face"

"Its not a lie, Maan was my illusion and now I am out of that illusion.Maan never existed… Mr Khurna always hinted me from his words but I loved to live in illusion and just imagine him as Maan… "

"Maan illusion he sahi, he is still in your heart…" "No, I am out of my illusion, any way I know why you are asking such things, not as a friend as a doctor"

"No Geet, I am always a friend to you" "I know you are my friend, but these talks is from a doctor… I know Mr.Khurana has spent Money like water to get you back in India and for what purpose… he doesn't do anything without purpose,I know very well"

"So… he is trying to fix things… not for him but for Mohit, give him a chance"

Geet laughed sarcastically "Do you think he need a chance, no Dr Armaan… If he feels so he will just grab the chance.. today he has given me liberty but tomorrow if he feels my liberty is not going fine with him, he will not take second to lock me up…. And I am not sure why is all this pretense of being good is for"

"Then just leave him, get custody of Mohit" Geet did not say a word "You can't leave him, right"

Geet hesitated a little "I don't want to snatch Fathers love from Mohit" "then for Mohit, you have to try to get better"

"I try but sometimes" "but sometimes thought of Maan overtakes everything…he is settled so deep in your heart"

Geet did not say anything and turned other side.

"Geet I need your help to treat you… for Mohit, please help me" Geet knew she has to get better for healthy growing environment of Mohit, she nodded in yes.

"Tell me about your and Maan's relation"

"What to say, it was all my illusion which snatched away every thing from me.. his love, his care, his possessiveness, our togetherness, those madness, those happiness every thing was my illusion…"

"it was not his fault actually, he was always MSK, I failed to see it" her voice shaked while speaking. All the while, dr Armaan was just seeing her expression… he knew it was only Maan who could bring her back.

He got what he wanted to know from her he did not want to disturb her more as all other information he had from Maan

Next : Teaser

Ohhh... how could she control... she could not even move, just kept gazing at him..it was already tough for her to keep away when he is Maan Singh Khurana.. ohh why he is back as Maan...
He gave seductive smile and approached towards her with his casual completely like Maan.. nothing was getting into her mind ,it was over taken by her heart.. heavy heart beat
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one anu
well geet did reveal many things so did maan
hoping for mg scenes!
waiting for next part...hmm yummy yummy teaser
HAPPy to be first 😉
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
loved it so much
what u did msk
and yes we want maaan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
His narration of past was so touching and emotional..
From his words we can c hw much he s repenting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool some changes at last! sigh i just wish she could run back into his arms for he has suffered enough... i hope the coming updates will show more maan ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
as always awesome update...
so geet needs only maan for her and not msk
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Di look today ur Piggy is not late
Chalo now my comment
I am happy with Maan's confession he not only admitted his mistake but also admitted that he loves Geet
Armaan is a sweetheart and he understood only Maan can get back Geet and this was what I was trying to tell Maan through my comments😆 par wo buddu samajtha hi nahi tha
but Armaan muahh aapne toh Pihu ka dil churaliya jo baat Maan nahi samaj paaya wo aap samaj gaye 😳 dur rehne se sirf duriyaan badengi agar duriyon ko mitana hai toh nazdikiyon ka sahara lena zaruri hai

Do small things Maan take some initiative shower her by ur love phir dekhna sab kuch badal jaayega usse bas ek ehsaas dila doh that u love her and there is no place for any lust in ur relationship phir sab thik ho jaayega:)

Geet dear tum laakh chupa lo par aaj bhi tum Maan se pyar karti ho aur yahi pyar tumhe thik karega

But Di ur Piggy has fallen in love with Armaan😳 haye kitna samajdaar bandha hai kaash wo mere hothe😳

continue soon Di waiting for Maaneet moments

love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
feels bad for geet

deep down she still have image of maan in her heart

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