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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yippeee...me the first one...
though it was only because i threatened you...😛

first where are you busy..???

second still thinking about that dream sequence...?? OMG...!!!!

honestly speaking i was not so very impressed with that dream sequence.. i dont even remember now...
but i am overwhelmed after reading first seven para... it was more beautiful than that dream sequence..
sachi..no flattering,..

i really want to borrow some words from you...

it was just P.E.R.F.E.C.T
hats off to your "vision"...

seriously i cant just pick some lines and say i loved it... it was an another master piece from you..
loved every single word you wrote... you have beautifully put the words together completing this os..

and the last para,..it did justice to your title,their feelings and everything else...

khushi is still the sweet girl... who loves arnav more than her life... who cant leave him even if she want to...

and arnav..hahaha,.. i still have a big soft corner for him... i am in love with ASR...

though he was bit selfish but last few line which he said before collapsing you me feel his pain...

one question.. how you write such thing..?? in essay you might be getting full in school hai na...???

and yeah thanks for telling before hand.. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that wss amazing!

I love how Arnav let it all out and told her to go..But Khushi couldn't go away from her Arnav.

Simply amazing :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome...its truth that their love story is bitter sweet one...
but arnav is being selfish and he cant loose her at any cost and here also he pleaded in an indirect way to conveince her but felt really bad for khushi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh Pearl I loved it...
This is sooo beautiful
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice use of words!! Very gripping...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful!!!!


would luv to read your other works!!!

m sending u a buddy request...plz pm me ven u write sumthing new!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is amazing... sometimes u make me feel as though u peek in my mind and come up with words that u know i'll like... amazing amazing... this was perfect...fell in love with each and every line...Arnav being so scared that the person who is now given a new meaning to him would walk away and he would be left empty as before... awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Totally beautiful It was very well written. Amazing use of words!
Awesome! :) Just loved it pearl! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing...u have shown arnav's feelings so well...the title is so apt for them...
and the banner...what can i say...i have always loved your banners...

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