FF-Untouched Chapter-5 pg10 13jun

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

hi sana

nice ud looking frwd to next part hope naku contnues with job tc😊

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

hellooo Sana,
well done lady! fabulously written,the text just flows easily in the situations you have penned down. Have to say here, the forced kiss scene was very well described... it was very imaginable indeed, I couldn't have managed the expressive language ..
My only ummmh was a shaved chest Dutta, hain? yaar baaby uska hairy chest with a thick mat of jet black curly hairs he to uske appeal hai. But have to add that you are the writer of the FF , and therefore stand at full liberty to paint Dutta as you see him... we love Dutta which ever wayas long as its played by Mishal!
Please continue writing the FF ,its very captivating. thank you for the pm.
much love xx hammie.
PS: kya SIGGY hai baaby love it! beautiful captions too...

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Vaishnavi

@Strawbella

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Oh sorry yaar i was bit out of control. Edited:-)

Edited by Strawbella - 13 years ago

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Liked it ...looking frwd to next part pls ud soon 😊

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

sana beautiful ud. dutta and nakusha both are like magnets for each other albeit reluctantly at the moment...

nakusha thinks he was doing it to get rid of her , i wish she would find another job. phir dutta ka dil mangay ga more nakusha.

anyway i am just saying that the story is progresssing fine as it is , enjoying each ud . wll done it's differeny but good👍🏼

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hey sana

lovely update

she don't want to confront him but have to do for her work

so dutta accept he don't want her there

finally dutta fulfill his desire to kiss nakku from first meeting 😉 now thinking what he did 😆

she is trying hard to find another job but hard luck

superb

thanks for pm