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compilation of all 8 parts


Unconditional love and friendship

Beginner brief:

Characters are same as in the show'.

Except the dazzlers and weaklings are not united'

But rey likes kriya

Swayam likes Sharon

And Vicky likes neha

But all three majnu's are secretly loving their respective lailaa's'.

Kriya and neha hates dazzlers so both avoid dazzlers

But the twist is kriya is vicky's friend'they share cute friendship between them'

But their friendship is also secret

Vicky does lot of stuffs to get a li'l bit of attention from neha but neha always avoid her'and he then share all his feelings to kriya in bollywood style'.and kriya consoles her

Part 1 !

The day starts in the college ..its around 8.30 am. Vicky and rey are both tensed.thinking about their love who don't even care about'suddenly both goes in devdas mode.

Rey thinking about kriya and Vicky about neha and suddenly swayam joins them.

As rey and Vicky are dazzlers they always insulted and avoided rey

But here they are thinking about love'and they don't even come to know that swayam has joined in.

Devdas mode they both started shayari..

Vicky : kya karu is ladki ka mein yaar!

Rey : samajhti nahi who hamara pyaar!

Vicky:mera dil hai uske liye bekaraar!

Rey : but y the hell is this intezaaar!

Swayam silently laughing on both of them and says'

Swayam : guys mein hu aap logo ki madat karne ke liye tayyar!!ha ha ha

After listening to swayam's voice they both come in their senses

Vicky:toh yeh weakling hamari baatein sun raha tha??

Rey:haan ab yeh sabko jaake bata dega'Vicky hamara reputation ka kya'log hum par hasenge yaar'

Vicky:kyu?

Rey:array isko pata chal gaya na ki hum un weaklings ki baat kar rahe the'

Vicky:abhi tak toh use pata nahi'humne unka naam mention tak nahi kiya..lekin tumhari wajah se'..abhi tumne bola weaklings'toh use toh ab pata chal gaya hoga'thanks reyaansh singhania'(angrily)

Swayam :listening their discussion.guys don't worry, mein kisiko nahi bataaunga'

I promise'I promise..

Rey:r u sure..

Swayam:jis situation mein tum phase ho usi me mein bhi fasaa hu' L

Rey and Vicky:what???

Swayam:kuch nahi'.kuch nahi'

Rey:that means u like some dazzler gal'tell us who it is'

Swayam:koi nahi hai'

Vicky:matlab tu hume trust nahi karta'I mean tume hamara ek secret pata hai'

Toh hume tumhara pataa hona hi chahiye'

Rey:tum hume tumhara secret love bataye bagaiyr nahi ja sakte..

Swayam:its Sharon(and he starts blushing)

Vicky and Rey starts laughing loudly'

Rey:use bhul jaa yaar'.woh tumhe dekhigi tak nahi.

Swayam(dreamy):kya hua agar who mujhe dekhegi bhi nahi'shayad use kabhi pataa bhi na chale ki mera jaisa ek ladka hai jo use itna pyaar karta'.my love for her is just UNCONDITIONAL'mujhe sirf yehi chahiye muskuraati rahe'khush rahe'

Rey and Vicky staring at him..

Vicky:abye yeh toh philosophy zhaadne lagaa bey'

Rey:lekin isse lagta hai ki yeh Sharon se bahut pyar karta hai..

Vicky to swayam:so aaj se hum tumhare friends.. :-)

Swayam(happily):yes.

Rey:itne bure bhi nahi hai yeh weaklings

Vicky:haan yaar..lekin yeh kisiko mat bataana ki hum ab friends hai..warna tum toh jaante ho humara repu

Swayam:haan haan tumhara reputation kharab ho jayega 'ha ha ha

And all three of them leaves for the class

Rey swayam and Vicky all are sitting behind in a line..behind girls

Vicky sees neha and goes in dreamy mode

Vicky:baar baar 'ye Vicky ka dil neha ke liye bekaraar'

Neha hears her name and angrily she turns back

Neha :y u taking my name?ek dazzler ek weaklings ka naam apne muh se ley??jaao muh dhoke aao (and she turns and starts writing )

Vicky:yaar jab iska muh band hota hai .tab kitni cute lagti hai'lekin jab bhi muh kholti hai tab kuch galat hi bolti hai'kyu yaar!!!(and starts crying like a baby)

Rey and swayam consoles her'

Bharat amd amar sees that and gets angry..

Bharat:array is swayam ko kya hua hai??ye us dazzler Vicky ko console ho gaya hai

Amar:kuch toh gadbad hai yaar..

Bharat:ruk iski to mein class lunga'is class ke baad

I guess very tough day for swayam'amar aur bharat band bajaayege uski

How is part1 guys'give me ur opinion through ur comments'

I hope u like it'anybody who wants pm 'add me in ur friend list'.

PART 2

Rdx sir enters the classroom'

Rdx:guys..i came here to announce that next week is a fun week '.so an urgent meeting now in my office'so gs ,ags,cs and acs'come with me'

Rdx leaves and all 4 of them follows'

In rdx office''

Rdx:so guys this is ur first event after ur election'so u"ll have to prove that they have elected write ppl..

U have to work hard for it

So rey---the GS

And kriya'AGS

Start working out on events'it should be really big this tym'

and swayam--CS

and Sharon 'ACS

work on the sponserors and decoration

and plz Sharon listen to swayam as u are assisting him.

Sharon:whatever!!!sorry I mean yes sir I'll definitely assist him properly(angrily)

Rdx:very good!guys u may leave now..

Sharon very angry'and she is getting pissed off as she has to assist swayam whom he hates

She goes in the locker room

Swayam follows her'

Sharon:kaise din aaye hai'us looser ka assistant banaya..and she bangs her hand on the lockerand shouts 'ouch ouch!!

Swayam:Sharon kya hua??

Sharon:tum yaha gals locker room me??

Swayam:tumhari awaaz suni 'isliye'

Sharon:yeh sab tumhari wajah se ho raha hai'tum jao yaha se'aaj rdx sir ne mujhe assistant hone ka ehsaas dilaya'aur mein Sharon "the dazzler"..y the hell should I listen to u'??? my ideas will always be better than u'p;ar mein tumhari assistant hu naa'isliye sunna padega'how disgusting

Swayam:mein janta hu kit um ek dazzler ho'aur mujhe koi problem nahi hai agar tum baat nahi suno'lekin mein tumhari baat hamesha sunuga

Then eye contact and pehla nasha song

Swayam(comes to his senses):I mean'tum mat suno'mein jaakar tumhari rdx sir se complain karunga

Sharon(angry):tum aur kya kar sakte ho!(and she leaves the locker room)

Swayam goes to canteen

Amar and bharat are sitting and talking about swayam and talking about the thing that happened in class..both are angry on swayam

Swayam:hey guys!

But they don't reply

Bharat:yaar amar kuch log apna group chodneka plan bana rahe'isliye un weaklings se dosti kar rahe hai

Amar:haan yaar'aur agar chode toh bhi hume koi farak nahi padta'.

Swayam:tum kiske bare me baat kar rahe ho

Amar & bharat:tumhare bare mein..

Swayam:kya?????????

Bharat :haan.humne tumhe dekha'us Vicky ko console karte huye 'class me'

Swayam:shit!tumne dekha'??arrey who toh mein aise hi'arrry who dazzlers itne bhi buren nahi hain'

Bharat:unhone tumhe rishwat di hain kya??unke bare me accha bolne ke liye

Swayam:sorry bharat!par tumhe itna gussa hona nahi chahiye'who acche log hai

Bharat :itne acche hai??toh unhe pure ek din ke liye rehearsal hall humare naam karne ke liye kaho'aur agar unhone haan kaha 'toh humare saath baat karne ke liye aana'warna tumhe unse baat band karni padegi..

Swayam:kya?????shock

Amar:haan!!!!

Both amar and bharat leaves

Swayam in shock

Swayam:abhi to unse dosti huyi thi'aur yeh kya hua'kya karu me??

Agar Vicky rey se pucha toh who mujhse gussa ho jayenge

Aur abhi abhi jo dosti ki shuruaat huyi thi 'who bhi khatam'sharon ke paas janeka raasta band!!!

Aur agar rehearsal hall book nahi kiya toh amar bharat mujhe maar dalenge

Hey bhagwaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!

part 3

Kriya practising in rehearsal hall'vicky enters the rehearsal hall'

Vicky:kriyaaa

Kriya:hi Vicky!kya hua'

Vicky:suno meri dard bhari daastaan'

Kriya:aah!!!ab kya hua'

Vicky:teri best frend muje itna ignore kyu karti hai'.???kya mein itna bura hu???

Kriya:array Vicky!itna tension kyu lete ho tum'.thoda patience rakho

Vicky:tumhe kuch batana tha mujhe'mein aur swayam ab dost hai'aur rey bhi

Kriya:wow!!tum swayam ke saath dosti karoge,yeh possible hai'par rey '.aur who ek weakling ke sath dosti is impossible

Vicky:kya kriya'.tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa nahi hai'who bahut accha hai'..woh is status me believe nahi karta

Vicky in his mind("kriya !!tum kab yeh samjogi ki rey tumhare liye perfect hai..usse accha ladka tumhe kahi nahi milega")

Vicky:yeh sab ladkiya ek jaisi kyu hoti hai'

Kriya;kya???kya kaha tumne?

Vicky:kuch nahi '.mein ab jaa raha hu'agar tumhare dosto ko pata chala ki mein tumhara dost hu'toh who tumhe nahi chodenge'

Kriya:thik kaha tumne 'jao tum yaha se'

Vicky leaves!!!!!!

Swayam in locker room'very tensed'

Swayam:kya karu kya karu???

Vicky enters lockerroom

Vicky:kya karu kaya karu???

Swayam:tu mere dialogue repeat kyu kar raha hai

Vicky:swayam tu joke mat maar 'mein bahut tensed hu'.neha ki wajah se

Swayam:ohhh!!

Vicky:par tu kyu tense hai'

Swayam tells Vicky everthing about canteen scene what happened between him and bharat and amar

Vicky :shocked'array itni si baat na'tu tension mat le!mein karunga teri madat'

Tu sirf Sharon ko sambhal'use tumhare fun week prep me busy kar daal.

Mein nil aur rey ko bata dunga

Who easily maan jayenge

Swayam(happy):thanx Vicky'.tunhe toh mera problem solve kar diya

And next day swayam gives lot of work to Sharon'.thaat keeps her busy whole day'

And this is how swayam manages to book the rehearsal hall

And dazzler and weakling boys gets united and make d3 boys group

Here weaklings are very happy that they got whole day rehearsal hall for practise

Vicky thinks that he will use this thing to change the image of rey infront of kriya

And he tells kriya that the whole day rehearsel hall was arranged for u'll by rey

As he wanted to help u'll.

Listening to this kriya is bit shocked..and amazed'and happy

And from there she starts feeling for rey

Part 4

Swayam with sharon in auditorium'discussing about fun week events'..

Swayam:Sharon tumne sab kaam khatam kar diye?

Sharon(in her mind::ek toh itna kaam dete ho aur ):haa 'I did whatever I could!

Swayam:means?(in his mind::I know Sharon..that I had given u lot of work to do'but sorry I had to do that'aakhir yeh sab toh mein tumhare karib aane ke liye kar raha hu )

Sharon:I have arranged some sponsorers'aur mujhe 2 more assistant ki jarurat padegi..

Swayam:mere assistant ko 2 more assistants'ha ha ha

Sharon:enough!!!

Swayam:ok (smiles)toh mein kria aur neha ko tumhara assistant banata hu'.

Sharon:what ???no never''mujhe unke saath kaam nahi karna'.

All this convo was heard by nilesh and rey

Rey to nil:kya chalu hai yeh swayam'sharon ko order de raha hai'.

Nil:koi toh hai ho Sharon ko order de sakta hai'

Both laugh loudly'.and disappears from der

While rey was running through corridors and hits kria

Kria(angry):dekhe nahi chal sakte ho aap ???

And suddenly she sees det its rey

And that reminds her about rehearsal hall which was booked by rey

And suddenly she turns suddenly sweet towards him..

Kria:its ok rey..kabhi galati se ho jata hai'

Rey in his mind:abhi toh yeh ladki jhagda karne ke liye tayyar thi'aur abhi kya hua??

Kria smiles and leave

Rey:wow usne mujhe smile diya yaar..i m so happy I m so happy'

Nil(shocked):yeh rey ko kya hua???kya hua hai rey tujhe???usne ek smile diya toh tu itna kyu khush ho raha hai??

Tujhpar hazzaaro ladkiya fida hai'

Rey:lekin kria toh kria hai'

Nil:what??????
rey:kuch nahi !kuch nahi(out of his dream mode)

Nil:kuch toh hai rey'.

Rey:kuch nahi yaar!!!!!!!

Nil teasing rey with kria's name

Rey blushes

Hey chupa rustam rey'tu kria ko like karta hai'aur hume bataya hi nahi

Rey:bataya to 'vicky ko bataya

Nil:what ???vicky ko bataya aur mujhe nahi'

Nil gets angry'.rey starts saying sorry to nil and puppy faces'.

Nil looks at rey and as he is his best frend he cudnt remain angry with him for long tym

Nil:its ok rey'.. :-)

Rey and nil leaves corridor and goes to canteen

There in auditorium Sharon and swayam fighting

Sharon:mujhe simmi rinni nil aur Vicky 'inme se koi bhi chalega'lekin kria aur neha??? No ways'.

Swayam:ok'

Sharon:ok???abhi toh argue kar rahe the aura b kya hua??

Swayam:tumhari baat kaise taal sakta hu mein'dreamy mode

Sharon:what?

Swayam:kuch nahi'but ur assistant are Vicky and nil'

Sharon:what??? Mujhe toh rinni aur simi ke saath kaam karma tha

Swayam:tumhare frends ke sath karne diya toh bhi tumhe problem hoti hai na Sharon'kya ladki ho tum?

Sharon:acchaa!!!mein kar sakti hu unke sath kaam 'afterall they are dazzlers..and they will do jobs better than weaklings'.

Swayam:ok then u may leave now'

Sharon:what?tum Sharon raiprakash ko jaane ke liye keh rahe ho 'tum hote ho mujhe order karne wale

Swayam:kitna jaldi bhul gayi tum..i m ur cs'..ha haha

Sharon:cs hua toh kya hua'tum mujhe order nahi de sakte

Swayam:ok'toh tum raho yahape 'mein ja raha hu'..

And he leaves

Sharon:hey that was rude

And she also leaves auditorium

Swayam:walking in the corridor: talking to himself:yeh Sharon aisi kyu hai??yeh kitni cute hai'aur jab bhi angry tab toh aur cute lagti hai'mujhe use irritate karma pasand hai'.

Swayam was unaware that Sharon was also walking behind him

Sharon listen to swayam's talk and blushes and then overtakes him..and leaves college'

Swayam shocked:array kya isne suna hoga??embarresed

And he also leaves the college

Sharon drives the car and thinking about swayam'.

Dreaming mode'and she hits swayam who was crossing road'.

Sharon worried'gets out of her car and goes to help swyam

Sharon:swayam tum thik toh ho na??

Swayam:I m alright!!dont bother'..and he gets up'takes his cycle and leaves from der

Sharon is pissed as he ignored him..

Sharon:ajeeb hai yeh swayam'kabhi kabhi over importance deta hai'.kabhi kabhi bahot rude'wat's the matter


Part 5a

Baatein kuch unkahi si

Swayam lift her bicycle and went'ans Sharon also took his car and left there

Suddenly a thought came to sharon's mind

"why was I so much concerned for swayam'I have met wid so many such accident wen I drink and drive..and I have hurted lots of people'but first tym I showed some feeling for swayam..i asked him how he is? He ignored me so badly but still I didn't feel bad about it..and seriously I am still worried for him'y is this happening?and what is this?"

And background song plays'

"Baatein kuch ankahi si, kuch unsooni si..hone lagi"

""dil pe kaabu raha na'hasti hamari khone lagi"

"who woooh shayad yahi hai pyaar"

There swayam riding his bicycle singing same song

Rey in kria's dream'..

Kria too thinking about rey

As rey's image is completely changed infront of kria

All reached their home

But Vicky's car is broken down in the middle

And he was waiting there for an hour but no single car passed from there and it was getting dark'and he couldn't call anybody as he had forgotten his cell in college

He was left with no choice but just to wait for a lift

Suddenly he saw one rickshaw'and neha was der in it

Neha saw Vicky

Neha to driver:array bhaiyya jaraa ruko'.

A rickshaw stopped infront of Vicky

Vicky was very happy..and he starte thanking that rickshaw driver but he didn't knew that he has to thank some other person and that other person is none other then NEHA

Her dream girl

As he went to sat in rickshaw..he saw neha'and was shocked but super duper happy within'..

precap:sweet ride of rickshaw with viha in next update

RICKSHAW RIDE

part 5b

vicky very excited

vicky:nehaaa,thanx a lot

neha:itni jyaada excited hone ki zarurat nahi hai...mein toh sirf help kar rahi hu...agar tumhari jagah aur koi hota toh bhi mein use help karti...

vicky:that i know neha...tum bahut acchi ho...tumhe sabki help karna pasand hai

neha:haan...tumhari tarah nahi hu..dazzler kahi ke,,jinhe apne sivaah aur kisi ki padi nahi hai

vicky:i know ...mein bahut selfish hu

vickly answered to all her remarks very calmly without reacting at all

neha in her mind:yeh vicky ko aaj kya hua hai..hamesha ki tarah meri baato ko deny kyu nahi kar raha hai...chup chaap sab sun raha hai???

vicky:kya hua neha?chup kyu ho gayi tum?

neha:kuch nahi,tumhara ghar kaha pe hai?

vicky:kyu ?tumhe dekhna hai??

neha:kya ?mujhe ??? nahi ...is driver ko bataa do

vicky:ok

vicky tells the route to driver

neha:toh tumhara ghar mere ghar ke saamne????????

aur mujhe pataa bhi nahi

neha shocked

vicky:ohhh!!!!!!!!tum mere ghar ke opposite rehti ho???

arrey neha...humaari family kal hi yahaa shift hui hai

neha:oh nooo...

vicky:oh yesss...laughs

and thanks neha for the lift

neha still in tension..and thinking

agar yeh vicky 24*7 mere ghar ke saamne rahega toh mere kya hoga...

it was around 8 at night

vicky enters his new house...super excited

vicky:this new house is very lucky for me...yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!

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neha calls swayam

swayam:hello neha.kya hua...itni raat ko kyu phone kiya...

neha:guess who is my new neighbour?

swayam:??

Neha:array who akdu Vicky'

Swayam excited:wow that's great'

Neha:kya?

Swayam:I mean kya???

Neha:haan mein kya karu?

Swayam:who accha ladka hai'

Neha:tum bahut change ho gaye ho swayam

Swayam:nahi neha'.

Neha :bye gud nite..

Swayam:byeee

Swayam is very happy for Vicky

**********************************************there vicky calls kriya and tells the good news

Kriya is very happy for Vicky.

Vicky then moves to the balcony of his room.and sees neha there

Neha's room is exactly opposite to his

Then Vicky dance on song

"mere saamne wali khidki mein

Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai"

Vicky then goes to sleep

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Next day Vicky purposely hides himself behind the gate

And as soon as neha hire a rickshaws

And suddenly wen rickshaw starts moving 'he jumps into it

Neha shocked:Vicky tum???utar jao abhi ke abhi'.bhaiyya rickshaw rook

Vicky:tumne kal kaha than a neha ki tum kisi ki help karti ho'toh phir aaj kya hua?

Neha:aaj tumhe help kyu chaihiye?tumhare paas toh car hai

Vicky:mere car breakdown ho gayi kal'remember?

Neha:haa!ok chalo bhaiyya(she says bhaiyya to rickshaw wala)'

both reaches college

all college ppl are shocked as they see vicky in rickshaw for the first tym that to with a weakling

part 5c:completed rickshaw ride of viha

to understand this part of my ff..u must have to read my previous part...it is the continuation of previous part

vicky:oh no!!!!neha mujhe chupalo...

neha:chupalo??? par kyu?

vicky:arrey neha hum college pahuch gaye hai..aur sab log hume ghur ghur ke dekh rahe hai...aur ek dazzler weakling ke sath...

neha:kar di na choti baat...

vicky:wow neha...yeh toh rhyme ho raha hai.."dazzler weakling ke sath,kar di na choti baat" wah wah...tum kya nil se tution le rahi ho???

neha:bas karo vicky...mein jah rahi hu

vicky:i m sorry neha ...suno toh...

part 5 completed

[Font]part 6[/FONT]college college college


sharon the diva practising dance in rehearsal hall... and as usual swayam watching her from the side of main door...as soon she sees him..she stops dancing and asks "swayam kya kaam hai"
swayam wid attitude "agar tumhara dance khatam ho gaya ho to kuch kaam ki baat kare" sharon in her mind"how rudely he talks...i hate him"
swayam : tumne kuch kaha...
sharon :nahi nahi...
swayam:._mein rude nahi hu sharon lekin agar tumse pyaar se baat karu

part 6b
toh tumhe samajh nahi ayega...
sharon:what???how?? tumhe kaise pata mein kya soch rahi hu???? she is litetrally shocked
swayam:kuch nahi chalo..lets do our funweek organising...remember rdx sir has told us to do..
sharon: ha ya i remember!!!
swayam: toh sponsorers are ready sharon...actually sharon i have completed all my work...vicky n nil handling the decoration part...and soundsystem is arranged by me...and fun week days are decided ...and i hope u vl do special dance performance on western day.

part 6c
sharon in her mind "agar sab kuch decide ho gaya hai toh mujhe kyu bata rahe ho show off kar raha hai.. aur how cum nil and vicky listening to him"
swayam:itna mat socho...let me clear ur doubts..i m cultural secretary..all the students listen to me...and btw we r no more dazzlers and weaklings ...v r louians...
sharon: in shock...swayam jo bhi mein mann me sochti hu tumhe kaise pata chalta hai...tell me swayam..this is creepy,unnatural...
swayam: smiles and leaves
sharon literally confused..

PART 6d

sharon thinking thinking and thinking

"swayam ko kaise pata chala ???"

simmi and rinni enters rehersal hall and sharon thinking and thinking...

rinni:kya sharon?????

sharon:kuch nahi...

so guys are u'll ready for funweek????

monday:filmy day

tuesday:western day

wednsday:magic day

thursday:aliens on earth day

friday:rock show day

and the funweek gets great success...all the teachers principal are very happy...

the next week after funweek...sharon sees swayam in abundant room of college chanting some spells...and as he moved his hand something glittery things occur...sharon puzzled and she shouts aloud in shock

sharon (shouted):OMG

swayam:what the hell!!!!!!!!!!!i think someone saw me

and he opens the door and she sees sharon lying down...sharon fainted

swaym:oh no!!!!she saw me...y was i doing all this in college..now i have to tell her the truth

sharon:suddenly gets up...what was that swayam???tell me...

swayam:what???

sharon:i saw u swayam chanting those spells

swayam:sharon ,pagal ho gayi ho kya ??what spells???

sharon:swear on me n tell that u wer doing nothing???

swayam:ok...fine...i m a WIZARD,

sharon faints again :D

swayam: :D :D :D...i knew u will faint...isiliye toh nahi bata raha tha...

part 7:"what's that ajeeb feeling??"

Swayam:Life without u is very difficult for me,

But life with u is even more difficult'..

Sharon suddenly gets up and fully shocked

Sharon:what was that swayam????

Swayam:but it's the truth

Sharon:aur yeh toh sabko pataa hoga as usual'''

Swayam:no Sharon!yeh bhi tak kisiko bhi pata nahi tha'lekin ab'.

Sharon:tumhare pass yeh power hone ke badh bhi tum iska bura istamal nahi karte'how cute is that' (and she smiles)

Swayam:can u repeat the sentence which u said just now

Sharon:haan to mene yeh kaha ki bhi tum iska bura istamal nahi karte'

Swayam:nahi 'uske baad

Sharon(blushes):kuch nahi'who galti se nikal gaya

Swayam:rehne do '.accha hai galti se toh tumne tariff ki'it matter's to me a lot'

Sharon:shuru ho gaye phir se'''

Swayam:but now u have to promise me Sharon that u wont reveal this secret to anybody'I hope so'

Sharon:u don't worry swayam..i wont tell it to anybody..(she smiles and goes)

Swayam still in abundant corridor and still thinking'

Swayam to himself;array yeh ladkiya itni unpredictable kyu hoti hai'I was so worried about Sharon 'I was thinking what what and what not will happen after knowing the fact that I m wizard'but she acted as if 'what a big deal in being a wizard''.why was she cool with this fact????????

Lekin jo hua accha hua..i m happy about the fact that she showed her positive side this tym

Scene at sharon's home

Sharon:wowww!!!!!swayam is a wizard'..and awesomest part is he is my friend??? Is he???no..no.. he is not my frend..but he is a wizard'and I know one wizard'.

Sharon turn her laptop on and tries to find out more about wizards and what spells they used

While reading all those spell'one spell grabs her attention and the name of that spell is "LOVE POTION"

And then she reads

LOVE POTION:- Love potion is a basic thing that every wizard can use to attracts hi/her loved ones towards him

She reads and in shock again

Sharon:agar swayam ko mera attention panaa hi that oh who mere upar yeh love potion use kar sakta tha..it would have been such an easy job for him..but he never did that..swayam u r really a great guy and u don't deserve me .. L L'tumhe toh koi bhi mil sakti hai'..i respect u swayam'..lekin tumhare saamne aate hi kuch ajeeb sa hone lagta hai..aur agar mein pyaar se baat karma chahu to bhi tumhe dekhkar mujhe kya hota hai pata nahi'so avoid that feeling I show anger towards u''.

Kriyaansh on my friends demand'

I hope u like it'

At night around 8 in her room

Kriya:rey dance with such a feel..how can he do that??with such emotions and all'he is perfect''..what????kiski tariff kar rahi ho tum kriya..us stupid rey ki'jise apne status aur style se time mile tabhi who emotions e bare me sochega na'kya kriya tum bhi.kiske bare me sochne lagi

She laughs at herself..

Takes her ipod and starts listening to songs'

Song plays "in dino dil mera mujhse hai keh raha'

Tu khwaab saja,

tu jile zaraa,hai tujhe bhi izzazat ,

kar le tu bhi mohabbat"

while listening to song he dreams about rey'..

and smiles

kriya:what's wrong wid me??woh baar kyu yaad aa raha..god help me'.she removes earphone and goes to sleep'.

Den she checks the tym'.

Array its still 8.30'y m I sleeping so early?? Seriously somethings wrong'hey universji!!!help me

Chalo facebook pe jaakar tympass karte hai'.

She logs in'and surprise to see det she got friend request and surprise'its none other than REYAANSH SINGHANIA

She is shocked..as she thought he is very proud ,egoistic person ,full of attitude

Kriya:how can he sent me friend request'college mein iski izzat kya rahegi??

Lagta hai yeh dazzlers ki chal hai..khud hi request bhejte hai aur phir college mein jaakar yeh kahenge ke kriya sent him friend request

(kriya in angry mood)

"apne aapko bahut hoshiyaar samajhta hai rey..mujhe small town girl samhajkar mera majaak banana chahta hai..lekin mein yeh hone nahi dungi :@ "

And she rejects his frend request '

Rey at home on bed wid his laptop starring at his facebook account for to jus get one fb notification saying det "KRIYA GHAI accepted ur request"

He waits n waits and then he comes to know det kriya has rejcted her request'.

He feels very bad'and hr thinks "agar is ladki ko meri fb friendship bhi nahi chahiye..toh real life me yeh meri kabhi frend nahi banegi'lover to dur ki baat hai :'( :'("

Rey :chalo k baar aur try kar leta hu..and he sends frend request again'

Kriya:array abhi toh request reject kiya tha'phir se bhej diya'.wat to do now???

She thinks for a while and then accepts his request

Rey:checking out notification of accepted friend request,he starts dancing on the bed'

In excitement his laptop falls down and breaks..rey's mother enters the room and sees laptop fallen down..

Rey's mother (angry):Rey!!!! U r grounded this weekend'u cant come out of the room on Sunday also'

Rey(excited):ok mom!apka hokum sar aankhopar'and he starts dancing again

Rey's mother (shocked):u r happy bcoz u r grounded..wierd!!what's wrong wid u,,,

Rey in his mind:kya batau apko..agar apne mujhe room me rakha to bahut accha hoga..i'l be able to chat wid kriya on fb whole day and I can tell Vicky n nil det I'm grounded ,so dey wont call me for outings n all'so its fun getting grounded dis tym 'he he he'

Rey to mother:nahi mom!mein toh bahut sad..ab mujhe Vicky aur nil ke saath ghumne nahi milega.. (makes puppy face)

Rey"s mother:this puppy face wont help u this tym re'

N she leaves the room..latching the room from outside

Rey starts dancing on bed again'

And suddenly he realizes det he had broken his laptop jus few minutes back in excitement'..

And becomes sad'

Rey to himself:no worries rey..i have net on my cell and he logind thrugh cell and sees det kriya is online'.

Kriyansh facebook chat

Rey:hi kriya!

Kriya thinking whether to reply or not'and she goes offline purposely..

Rey:hi!

Y u went offline'I juz want to be ur frend'

Kriya gets rey's msg

And she comes online

Kriya:hi rey!

Rey:how r u?

Kriya:I m fyn..wat abt u?\

Rey:I m gud'

K:ok

Rey:I think u r not interested in chatting wid me?

K:no.nothing like det'

R:u r replying in one one word..what does det mean..

K:hmmm..i m feeling sleepy'

Going offline..

Bye..

Rey:bye'gud nite..miss u..

Kriya shocked reading his last msg

N she starts thinking again."yeh mujhe miss kyu karne laga.. n she blushes"

Rey goes offline as soon as she goes..

Rey:koi baat nahi rey'kal Sunday hai..aur kal pura din tu grounded hai..par tera mobile tere pass hai..thank u mom for not taking my cell'

And he goes to sleep

HOW WAS THIS PART GUYS'LET ME KNOW THROUGH UR COMMENTS :

J J J J


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nobody there to comment?????? : '(
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hey small doubt i have read it before somewhere...can i know??? is it reposted from fanfictions to this forum???
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Originally posted by: deetha

hey small doubt i have read it before somewhere...can i know??? is it reposted from fanfictions to this forum???

ya...it is reposted by myself...from fanfic
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EXCELLENT! You write really well... very well compiled :)

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