Pyar Aur Nafrat..Agni SS.updated part 2..pg 2.

One couple of RS show angini inspired me and i ended up writing a few stories about them..i tried writing first time as they were one beautiful jodi...

ohhh wow saveeta.ur ss is beautiful.keep writing.waiting for next part.. 😛

OHHOO WRITER, supergood SS. What a lovely writting . U know, when first time i were read ur post one thought was came im my mind that "how beautiful are her(ur) thoughts and what lovely writting. I were realy impressed by ur writting from ur 1st post. U r just fabulous savee. What i think about u is ur very understandable person with clean heart. And most imp a very good friend. Great work. I literally visualised ur ss while reading it. Agam is with full of attitude . I like it. Also characterisation of amrit and nimrit character. All the best for next update. Waiting for it.

@jyothiram..krithi..Archu...thank you so much for comments.😊

absolutely captivating begining saveeta👏... I just did not want it to stop...

Chapter 1..

Chachiji your BP keeps coming higher.its not good for your health.. you should rest and not take any tension..Tell me how .. I always fear of getting a bad news about my son...i know he loves me lot and that's why he is still in this house or else…he keeps all his pain for himself..never share it with me but I know how much he is suffering from inside..everyday his father insults him but he keeps quiet because of me...chachi ji please don't cry..kya karoun ,i keep praying that he gets his share of happiness one day..they stopped talking ,hearing the door opening…Ma and he rushed towards the bed..what happened?..Tej something wrong with Ma..Tej..its her BP..she is always worried about you ..what if something happens to you..you should stop this carefree life ..betting with your life..speed cars etc..at least don't do such things that give tension to chachiji..keep her happy..Agam..you do know my mother means a lot for me and her happiness matters most for me nothing else..sunitaji touched his hand then accept the rishta …agam stood up ..Ma I will do anything you asked me but marriage it's a big No..dont keep hope and walked out of the room..Dekha Tej his sturbbornness..i want my son happy.. Tej.. chachi ji I'm sure there is someone who will bring love ,lots of happinness and change his life..i hope all comes true koi aisa ho jo mere Agam ki zindagi badal degi...Tej…keep faith ..its time I go now..my patients waiting and no more tension..just relax..before going downstairs, he went to meet Agam in his room..Tej is everything fine with Ma..you are not hiding anything with me..Tej keeps staring at him..Agam..what..Tej…you are my cousin bro but sometimes I want to smack you..Agam..hey doctors are not violent and they save life..Tej ….I'm not talking as a doctor but your bro.. chachi ji wants to see you settle in life..Agam..if its so you get married.. my bhabhi will be her bahu too and she will be happy..Tej breathes a sigh ..its no use talking to you and turned to go out.. reaching the door, he heard Agam say.. …i don't keep hope of love in my life..neither I will be able to love someone..it will be an injustice to that girl..Tej.. love can change everything even erase that hatred you are keeping inside your heart..there is someone somewhere made for you and who will melt your heart my brother...you believe it or not..saying so he got out leaving Agam in thought..

Next Day..the restaurant..

Where is Amrit?..waiter another coffee..10 minutes later Amrit taking her seat..you are late..Amrit ..i know I know don't sulk..i have to do a lot of homework..what giving her a shocked expression..Amrit laughing by homework I mean about my future home ..Mallik mansion.. one person interest me more ..my future FIL..mahi mallik.. he will be the first step of the ladder to get my entry as the wife of Agam mallik..he has same ambition like me..fame..prestige..money.. he has a business empire...kuch to baat hein..noone knows about our bankruptcy..just think mahi mallik getting a princess as his bahu..he will be on pedestal..now my partner in crime sonia just arrange a meeting of beautiful princess amrit and mahi mallik.. sonia took out an invitation card from her bag..here you go princess Amrit your invitation card for the inauguration of a new 5 star hotel.. Amrit...may be you did not hear me..i want to meet mahi.. sonia…open the card and read mahi mallik chief guest..Amrit all smile mahi mallik be ready to meet your bahu..First you and next your dashing son Agam..sonia..dashing..is it possible princess Amrit has fallen for a certain Agam mallik at first sight...amrit..are you joking?.i don't believe in love ..only money ..fame..i cant do anything if he falls flat for me..with attitude saying not my fault if I'm so beautiful…anyways that's what I want a henpecked husband..someone who says yes to everything I say..my order and he bows to it..sonia..what if he..Amrit don't even say it..dont underestimate princess Amrit..never..i get what I want and can do anything for it..

Evening…The inauguration place.

Amrit and the Rajmata entered the venue and the photographers start clicking their pics..a bit far away mahi mallik watching them..he called his secretary..who are they to get so much attention with mahi mallik as chief guest..sir aap nahin jaante ..princess Amrit and her grandmother..Mahi..the royal family..stupid what are you waiting for to introduce me to them..Amrit seeing mahi coming towards them,beeji woh dekhiye..mahi himself coming to fall in our trap..i'm going from here you know what to do.all the best.. Rajmata …don't worry I will take care of everything..the secretary introduced mahi to rajmata..both got into conversation and Amrit waiting for the right moment to get the second step of her plan in action..she took out a few notes and gave it to someone..here take this …do your part and remember no mistake or else.dont worry princess I remember my lines very well..he walked towards mahi and rajmata..Excuse me rajmata…can I talk to you in private?..rajmata..koi baat nahin Mr..mehra..you must know MR..mahi mallik well known businessman..hearing this from the rajmata ,mahi was on cloud nine…rajmata..i think you want to tell me about the rishta for princess Amrit.. MR.mehra..you are right ..i have done my investigation,that guy is not worth princess Amrit..everything is fake about them.. Rajmata..angrily says how people can be so greedy ?..they will do anything to get married to a princess..thank you so much …All this time mahi has already dreamed of a big wedding.its rajmata who brought him back from his daydream..i'm sorry its that I'm looking for a good match for my elder granddaughter Amrit..mahi not losing time..should I say something?.please don't be angry.. Rajmata..of course not.aap kahiye..mahi..i'm looking for a beautiful girl for my son.he is handsome.. smart..i was thinking may be we can arrange a meeting for them..Rajmata..you have made my job so easy. Mahi.. jee..Rajmata..i mean why search far when we are getting such a good rishta ..wait a minute..amrit come here..meet MR.mahi mallik..amrit folded her hand in a Namaste..mahi totally impressed by her values..Rajmata..Amrit hum aap ke rishte ki baat kar rahe hein.. mahiji son..if you say yes ,he will arrange for you both to meet each other..Amrit…beeji I know you will do everything good for my future.. have I ever said no to you ?..i accept to meet mahiji son…Rajmata.. good..give mahiji a card..he can phone us anytime..Rajmata..its time we leave now..we will wait for your call..Mahi..once they left ,i will be related to the royal family .more prestige ..i cant believe my good luck..the secretary.. sir you forgetting one thing..will your son accept this marriage proposal?..Mahi..shut up..he will because I have a weak point of his in my hand..his mother..he will do anything for his mother..

Next morning..

Mahi..how dare go against my decision?..he raised his hand to slap her but got a hold on his wrist..Agam..how many times I have told you to respect my mother…or else..Mahi..what..tell me what will you do ?hit me ..dont dare or your mother will pay for you...this got agam more angry but his mother touched his hand calming him down..pointing a finger at his wife..you better convince him to meet that girl or you can pack your bags..Agam..Ma why don't you leave him..so many times ,I have told you lets go from here..dont you trust your son.. sunitaji.. touching his face,i trust you more than anyone my son..i cant leave this house..Agam..i dont understand why you cant leave? ..a place where you get insulted everyday..sunitaji..i have my reason because of the properties..Agam..a bit shocked to hear this...Ma but... sunitaji.. dont get me wrong …all this business..this big house belongs to you my son not your father..you are the true owner ..Agam..Ma what are you saying?..sunitaji..i cant hide this from you anymore.. my biggest mistake I believed in his fake love for me..he was only interested in my money .my father was against our marriage as he did not trust him..you were 5 years old ,when my father left us..before his death ,he made his will all that belongs to him will be for his grandchild meaning you Agam…he added also until you grow up I will be your trustee...your father was furious as he thought he will owe everything .i was so down losing my father and he chose that moment to make me sign some documents..thats how he transferred everything on his name..i hate myself so much as you have to bear his insult because of me.my father worked hard to build this empire and I'm waiting for that day all comes back to you my son..i will bear all his tortures for you ..Agam tearyeyed hugged his mother..you are suffering for so many years because of me...i promise you Ma all will come back to us one day.he will pay for his sins.. he has done dhoka ..betray you ..he will get it back… sunitaji..i know and i have faith in you that you will get what belongs to you.for now we will have to obey him..go meet that girl..Agam..fine Ma just for you.kahan jaana hein..Taj restaurant he has booked a table for you there..1 oclock..

Agam got to know about the betrayal of his father and his hatred for him has doubled.destiny will make him come face to face with two sisters…does Agam hatred only for mahi mallik or someone else also?...do keep reading ..will update soon..

I just came on the IF and the first post i see is your SS...😃

Superb update loved it savee. Tumhari imagination kamal ki hai. Kya khoob representation kiya hai bhaiyo ke beech ke pyaar ka .tej a doctor ohh just love him how supportive he is. Nice story. Tum to superwritter ho savee aur ye mujhe tumhari har post padhakar lagata hai. All the best.