Pyar Aur Nafrat..Agni SS.updated part 2..pg 2. - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Charu..Thanks for reading and comments..😊

Amrit is overconfident that her beauty will be enough to make Agam fall for her ..what awaits her she does not know...i hope you will enjoy reading their scene in next chapter..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Krithi..Thanks for comments..😊

Dont worry Agam dont have any past love story ...will someone melt his heart and made him feel the essence of love for the first time..do keep reading..😊

Will update soon with Agam.amrit first meet and also later with Nimrit...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Archu..Thanks for appreciation..😊

Glad you liking the story with a little change..will be coming up with next part soon..Agam meeting both sisters at different place and how will be his reaction...do keep reading.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2..

The palace..

How do you I look beeji?..Rajmata..she kissed her forehead beautiful as usual my princess.. Amrit..Thank you beeji..its time I leave and kill someone with my beauty..rajmata I know you will bring some good news for us..i have no doubt on first sight Mahi son will fall for you..amrit with attitude he has no choice and I'm not going to lose this golden opportunity …About to leave when her mother calls her name…where are going all dressed like this? Rajmata ..always with your nonsense questions..Amrit is the only one here who is trying hard to save this palace or else soon we will have no place to stay..aap ki doosri beti don't have a brain to solve our problems.. amrit laughing whose name are you taking beeji?nimrit she is only worth to work as a servant ..no sign of a princess in her..her mother could not take it anymore.stop it.i'm telling you again amrit this Ego.. attitude will destroy you one day..You and rajmata always degrade nimrit but I know one day she will be very lucky and will get everything in life..love..happiness..Amrit laughing and with sarcasm saying sorry Ma but I think you are getting false dream about Nimrit..who will marry her?..she has no beauty..simple ..if you are thinking a prince charming will come in her life then its time you change your mindset.. rich.prince charming is only for Amrit..my beauty is enough to make them fall for me..her mother wat's the use of beauty when your heart inside is full of hatred for your own sister..whereas Nimrit though you treat her like a servant still respects you..she has a pure heart..no hatred.nor greed ..this makes my daughter much more beautiful.. amrit got angry and walked off…left alone teary eyed God please send someone in my Nimrit's life as I cant see them treat her like a servant..kaash koi aa jaaye usseki zindagi mein..

Taj restaurant..

Agam stepped out of his car and walked inside the restaurant..at the reception desk, he asked for his table reservation..the manager…MR Agam mallik .please come ..There is your table someone already waiting for you...Agam.. Thanks and walked towards his table.. suddenly he came to a halt and murmured mahi mallik choice just like him..Amrit soddi the full of attitude so called princess..his facial expression changed as he got flashback of that incident..how Amrit made a mountain out of a mole... his mother accidently bang with her at the mall dropping her shopping bags..she insulted her and made her picked up her things..He was on the first floor and the time he rushed down Amrit was already gone..he came back from his thoughts .. you escaped last time amrit soddi but this time you will pay for that insult to my mother..start praying your lucky star..A mrit looked at the time on her watch..where is he?..Agam ..I'm coming amrit to make your life hell..Amrit looked up and saw Agam already there.. she stood up and put her hand forward with a big smile..hi I'm princess Amrit soddi..A gam ignored her shakehand and pulled his chair to be seated..Amrit a bit embarrassed stared at him..Agam ..are you seeking someone permission to sit down?...Amrit kept her calm and sat down.thinking to herself so much attitude..well I'm no less Agam mallik..you will soon fall in my trap.A gam..dont even think about it. Amrit shocked about how he knows wat's going in her mind..Amrit..jee aap ko kaise..Agam stared at her and changed the topic..tell me one thing ,why you tag along princess in front of your name..This got to amrit and answered him in a very angry tone.we are royalties and this will always remain..we are not like ..Agam did not let her complete her sentence, I must say you live in an illusion world..you are just a normal human being like us all present here..its a false pride you are carrying and emphasize on her name Amrit soddi..Amrit fuming with anger as first time someone talking to her like this..the waiter came for their order..Agam..not now bring me a soda.for madam I don't know you ask her..Amrit .bring me same.. Agam kept staring at her and Amrit in her thought now you are coming in line..i knew you wont resist my beauty..say it and I'm all ears for your praise.Agam.. are you going for wedding or reception?..Amrit caught off guard as it was not what she was expecting from him.. Amrit.. nahin.. why?..Agam just that the way you are dressed with all these jewelleries ,I thought you are attending a wedding..Amrit got up saying how dare you …she walked out of the restaurant in full anger.. Agam..i'm daring Amrit and this is just the beginning..i'm not those fools to fall in your cheap game …wait and watch ..

Agam in the car park making a call..rohit listen carefully ,I want every detail on Amrit soddi and the latest news..i will be in my office..you meet me there..Agam a self made man ..he has worked hard and today he is owner of a sports complex/Gym..its been one hour..where is rohit?..Agam pacing the floor of his office when he heard a knock at the door..come in …Agam .i was waiting for you and hope you have some news for me..rohit common Agam its my job..celebrities.high class people nothing escape me..i know everything that's how my magazine is famous..Agam.i know I know don't praise yourself.. Rohit.. tell me how all of a sudden you are interested in princess Amrit soddi..something you hiding from me .should I think finally MR..Agam mallik falling in love.Agam..shut up and relate all to me..Rohit..fine then listen..Amrit soddi beautiful attitude ..Agam. please spare me these details..tell me something that will interest me..Rohit.ok fine..latest news the royal family is completely bankrupt.. no money only their royal name and their palace can be seized by bank as they are fully indebted …this brought a big smile on Agam's face.. Amrit soddi I got your weak point..Rohit thanks buddy ..you have given me such an amazing news.. Rohit..anytime..anything for you..i owe you this..i'm confused though why this interest in her..Agam..i have to break that attitude and Ego of that girl..its time someone shows her true place..Rohit..all the best my friend..i leave you now anything I'm just a phone call away.. Agam..its pay back time Amrit ..i knew it a cheater like Mahi mallik will befriend cheater like you..Both of you can dream on..All that wealth belongs to my mother and i wont let your dream comes true..i will be the biggest thorn in your path from now so called princess Amrit..in anger ,he punched his fist in the wall ending bleeding his knuckles..

Nimrit looked at the time and very scared as its already late..what if amrit Di is already home..its time for her tea ..she will scold me for sure.. crossing the road in a hurry ,suddenly all she could hear the screech of tyres …completely numb ,she stayed rooted on the spot.. her heart beating a mile a second out of fear..Are you crazy to cross the road like this?..she did not have the courage to look back..i'm talking to you..scaringly she turned around coming face to face with Agam..her eyes shining with tears..i'm sorry woh mein jaldi and she could not utter another word..Agam's eyes were fixed on her..she lowered her gaze not able to meet his eyes..removing a strand of hair from her face,she looked up .Agam kept staring at her and his heart beat made a skip...for him its as if the time has stopped seeing such an angelic face in front of him… in his inner thought simplicity is her beauty..so beautiful ...Nimrit sweet voice brought him back to his sense..mujhe maaf karna..Agam..its fine.. Nimrit..oh no your hand is bleeding..she instantly took out her handkerchief from her handbag and wrapped it around ..this surprised Agam seeing her so caring though he is a complete stranger to her..Nimrit ..it must be hurting. meri vajah se..i'm sorry..Agam..no no its not your fault..the horns of cars made them both conscious of the traffic jam.. Nimrit I must go and I'm sorry ..saying so she was already on the other side of the road..Agam kept looking at her going away..one of the driver..hey we don't have all the time in the world for you...Agam got in his car and drove off …only a beautiful face kept coming in his mind and he felt like all his pain is healed …Agam whispered.who are you?..

Agam met Amrit who brought back the hatred he had for her..Few hours later, he met Nimrit who seems to have healed his pain …will Amrit let go of Agam ?..will Agam..Nimrit meet again ?

Do keep reading ..will update soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Totaly great writting. I loved all incidents u described here. Specially the first meeting of agni. So good. I imagined it clearly in my mind just like running film. Ab aur kuch bacha hi nahi hai tareef me sab pehle hi kah diya hai maine. . I missed u and whole forum when i were not on forum. Actualy whenever i make friends i remember them always and want to be remain their friend for forever.
Edited by Anurna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW What a beautiful morning for me , I was completely mesmerized while reading the Agam Nimrit first meet . It was so breezy and beautiful.

The pain both had for each other so heart touching , first time someone has made agam 's heart skip. I was grinning visualize the beautiful moment but...Wish those horns sound didn't disturb them.

Thanks a lot Savee , you made my day by giving me this lovely scene.

Rajmata & Amrit so much of head weight and haughtiness. Nimrit 's mom worrying for nimrit and praying and wishing someone to come and make nimrit's life beautiful.

The scene between Agam and Amrit was just superbbb . Agam taming arrogant amrit was just fantastic ,especially asking her whether she is going for any wedding , oh agam was full of naughtiness wow i loved it.

So Amrit had already insulted his mom , and a new character Rohit giving all the details of amrit , agam all ready to pay back amrit and mahi malik , poor guy hurt his knuckles.

Wonderful update savee , can't wait for the next especially agni's scenes,



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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
first about Amrit... 😔 this concieted girl was shown her place so well by Agam... when agam asked her if she was going to a wedding or reception...🤣 it was hilarious ... cuting her mid sentence is what she deserves... all the time going on n on about royalty but behaving like some third rate person... who treats her own sister so shabbily...😔
wow! what a marvellous and exciting first meeting of agam n nimrit... saveeta dil khush kar diya...😳
for agam, it looks like, it was love at first sight..ā¤ļø.šŸ˜... he just forgot himself in the middle of the roadšŸ˜‰šŸ˜† ... and the angel bandaged his hand with her handkerchief and disappeared...
excellent saveeta... u have a knack of writing romantic story...loved it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey saveeta just woke up andread ur 2nd chapter. only one word'' Awsome''.loved the agni part.love at first sightā¤ļøšŸ˜³

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