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Posted: 13 years ago
Nehu and Rucha ... I am missing you and ur comments ...and your requests for updates .. Please come back ...
☺️ Badi himmat karke I have posted this chapter
Next day riots had broken out in the city . Everyone was safely at the wedding venue except for Nikki . All her friends stood at the entrance waiting for her to arrive , worried about her safety. Abhi had just arrived and learnt from the interns that Nikki had not turned up as yet and her phone was out of reach.

Abhi's gut dropped hearing this , as he instantly shared their worry , though in a much higher proportion. He felt himself getting sweaty and for the first time in his life panic gripped him .What if Nikki was in some danger and what if ''.what if he lost her ' Suddenly the full impact of what he felt for her hit him and left him shocked and shaken. .

Some commotion shook him out of his trance and he realised that Nikki had arrived in an auto and her friends were crowded around her asking her well being . Relief washed through him and he almost ran to her but stopped himself on time as he couldn't even hug her openly. Their relationship was still a secret ...

He could do nothing but stand afar and watch her intently .After some time Nikki looked up and their eyes met and she reassured him with her eyes and a small smile that all was well with her and she was perfectly fine. But he still needed to see her alone and experience the relief of holding her close to him and ridding himself of all his fears and worries . As they walked back into the house Armaan hung around her . But Ridhima had not missed any of the emotions on Abhi's face since the time he had arrived and heard of Nikki missing ,she understood what he was going trhough as he walked inside both lost and confused , Nikki was faring no better , forcefully smiling at Armaan whereas she clearly wanted to be somewhere else.
Stopping Abhimanyu from walking any further by calling out his name , she immediately went to the heart of the matter and reassured him that she would set him up to meet Nikki alone by the poolside in half an hour.

Abhi was restless, behaving like a school boy but he couldn't help himself ,as he brushed his hair for the 5th time , checked himself out in the mirror and straightened his blue shirt. And then fisting his hands to get over his anxiety walked over to the pool , eagerly waiting for her to arrive.

As minutes passed , his restlessness only increased."Nikki , where are you ?" , he repeated to himself , anxiously and then after a gruelling wait of almost 10 minutes , he saw her walk in , dressed in a strappy white salwar kameez , her hair flying with the breeze. His heart almost stopped breathing as he took in her appearance . God ! She looked stunning ...

She saw the look in his eyes and her eyes dropped down shyly . She fidgeted with her dupatta and stopped abruptly , as she saw him walk towards her and cover the distance between them .

"Nikki" , he said stopping just a few steps away from her and pushing a few lose strands behind her ear . She absently leaned into his touch , enjoying the warmth of his fingers.

"Nikki" , he said again , this time urgently and she looked up at him .

"I was so worried Nikki when you did not show up . The mere thought that something could happen to you and I might lose you forever almost killed me Nikki . I love you Nikki . I love you more than you'd ever have imagined." , he said as Nikki's eyes widened , first with surprise and then with happiness .

She took a step forward in his direction , but the next instant , he pulled her into his arms and hugged her ,as if worried that he would lose her . Nikki hugged him back , her arms desperately pressed against his back.

"I love you Abhi" , she said against his chest as Abhi closed his eyes and held her even more protectively , cherishing this togetherness , cherishing how his first true love made him feel.

After the party , Abhi dropped her to her house . He got outside the car and walked her to her door , he didn't want to let her out of his sight '.Nikki was unable to leave him and get inside her house. Unable to stop herself, she invited him in . Abhi tried hard to decline the invitation , tried hard to get away from her . But , he realized all his efforts were futile , as he agreed and got in.


They smiled at each other , completely filled up with awareness for each other . She had never looked this beautiful before '..Abhi stepped towards her and gently caressed her cheek , as her eyes closed and she sighed. She was so beautiful...

"Nikki" , he called out her name slowly and she looked up at him , a very different expression in her eyes , an expression he instantly recognized as desire.

He bent down and kissed her on her eyes , followed by her cheeks and then finally took her lips in a passionate kiss .He couldn't stop himself from drowning in her beauty as he softly kissed her on her shoulder and then lowered the silver strap of her dress and continued to kiss her . His hand went into her hair and the other moved to her back to unzip her dress .He lowered the dress and kissed her all over . Soon she was free of her dress and his lips moved all over her body .Rest of their clothes too joined the floor soon after.

Nikki had closed her eyes as she was not left with enough strength to handle all this, her senses were not in her control . Abhi called out her name and she opened her eyes only to see love , passion , lust and wantoness in his eyes . She couldn't deny him anything now and silently gave him consent . With her permission , they let their desire reach its conclusion . Now for the first time in her life she was not alone , he was with her too and the feeling was precious . They lay spent on her carpet with his arms around her .

As her strength returned she got up and picked up her clothes and left the room to dress up . When she came back Abhi was buttoning up his shirt .. He looked embarrassed and unsure.

Men! Nikki began thing to herself. They were always like this , did things in the heat of the moment and then felt scared of the consequences, they never realised that a girl would not give herself up in the heat .. what had happened had happened out of her consent.

But Abhi still kept looking around apprehensively . "Abhi I am going upstairs to sleep . You can sleep in the downstairs bedroom if you like . ", she said , trying to keep her voice as normal as possible.
" NO " , he almost screamed. " I need to leave " , he added urgently.

But observing her calm face , some of his confidence returned and he gradually relaxed.

"Nikki I'll pick you up tomorrow morning , later we will go to the marriage together.." he said tentatively . Nikki gave him a soft smile and a nod , there was no shyness or embarrassment on her face .This gave him more confidence as he turned to leave and then stopped and turned around abrubtly. In no time Nikki crashed into him and hugged him fiercely . He hugged her back hard ,letting her feel secure about her love.

Next day he came to her house in the morning and led her to the car , some of his shyness had returned . Nikki just smiled at his silliness. In the evening both came to her house to dress up for the wedding . Nikki gave him the downstairs guest room to get dressed and herself went to her room upstairs .He was in her house and with all that closeness and comfort , they almost felt like a couple. After Abhi finished dressing up , he decided to check on her and came upstairs . Nikki was done dressing too , in her beautiful magenta Sari and was just applying her bindi .She turned on sensing his presence and smiled at him.

"How do I look?" , she asked shyly .

He sighed .She looked delectable and if he had his way , he would not let her leave this room tonight ' He walked up to her and cupped her face in his hands , gently kissing her on her forehead ..

"Lets go abhi ," . Nikki said and broke the moment as they walked to their car hand in hand.

During the wedding , Abhi kept talking to dr shashank and padma . Arman was irritated at his presence and Abhi felt a little lonely but feeling underconfident was not his style. Only Nikki was so far from him that it made him miss her.

After the wedding everyone moved to the lawn ,a buffet was laid out in the open . Nikki walked past her friends sitting at the table and walked up to Abhi , smiling happily.

"Abhi food?" , she asked him sweetly. Abhi was happy and surprised that she had come to him inspite of being busy with her friends . "Sure" , he nodded smiling

"Abhi lati hoon " , she said and turned to leave .

"No Nikki lets get it together . " , he said , holding her wrist and stopping her ,his smile still persistent.

They sat eating their food at the table even as Armaan looked at them ,completely irked .

"What is Nikki doing with that Modi?"

"Relax Armaan they have been working together for so long. And Dr Modi is not a bad guy . Just let them be ." , Riddhima said gently and turned his face so that he looked at her smiling face . Armaan nodded half heartedly and smiled at her , even as he continued to steal some glances at them , wondering what exactly was going on between them.

Another chapter on next page ...check it out .
Edited by mitzification - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES.. so excited..
gona edit soon Mitzi.. :)

And after reading this one.. Im even more excited... ;)

☺️ Badi himmat karke I have posted this chapter

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Posted: 13 years ago
Is Chapter ko parhne ke baad bahut mushkil se hum ne khud ko sambhala hai mitz ji mar dala aap ne toh hume aaj mar hi dala
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am☺️ and I m going away now for a holiday so hers the next part ...thoda short hai par kaam chalalena ...
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Next day at the nurse's desk , Nikki couldn't hold her smile from escaping as Abhi came to brief them . Nikki looked at him her love brimming in her eyes but he hardly responded to her good spirits , giving her just a short glance and then hurriedly moved his eyes to the rest of the interns . Nikki felt a pang of hurt go through at his reaction… He didn't even look at her for a few good seconds, of course he couldn't ... It was a hospital .. but still all he had said to her since morning had been an abrupt order ,"to ur duties right now". And he had not even called her and asked her to stay back and spend some time with him. Dejected, she walked to her duty and got busy with it.

A little later , immersed in her work in the lab , she felt his presence and before she could react to it ,his strong arms came round her and engulfed her from behind as he rested his chin on her shoulder. She turned around to meet his eyes and soon was lost in them. Abhi broke the moment by leaning and kissing her on her cheeks , one by one . As her eyes closed with that exciting intimacy, he kissed her further , on her chin and then very sensuously on her neck . A small gasp escaped her and she came to her senses.

"Abhi some one will come inside ..." , she said trying hard to free herself .

"No one will come the door is locked" he said , smiling conspiratorially and then bent down again to kiss the neckline of her dress.

"Wha.. Abhi if some one knocks and we open the door what will they think" she shouted in panic , imagining the scene and imagining the embarrassment ...

Abhi , the man in love with Nikki , did not want to hear anything . He wanted that moment with her ; but Dr Abhimanyu Modi , the boss of Sanjeevani agreed to intern Dr Nikita's anxiety and reluctantly let her go . In a few seconds , he recollected himself and left the lab to get back to his work. Nikki also straigtened herself out and muttered to herself

"Don't know how I will ever get back to concentrating on my work.

Nikki had been working in the lab for three hours and that was more than enough hard work and now she needed some 'fun' time.

Nikki went to meet A in his cabin in the afternoon , she walked in without knocking and demanded….
"Abhi aren't u going to take me out on a date?" , she asked naughtily , half expecting him to come up with some excuse .

He looked up from his work and gave her a smile " of course!, lets go for a movie first then a long drive and then dinner" , Abhi said getting up from his seat and gathering her in his arms.

"Really ?" , she asked , happiness spread all over face and yet unable to give up on all the doubt.

"Of course not. Now go back to your work." , he said haughtily and saw how her face had fallen.
A smirk on his face at this response , he lifted her face , holding her chin " Sorry , I was just kidding ,Lets go out to dinner and this time I mean it."

Nikki instantly cheered up and presented him with a smile.
"Really Abhi ", she asked her smile big and eyes sparkling.

"Yes , yes . I'll be free by 9 …." Abhi said and then laughed as her face fell again. He had her fooled for a second time .

Caught by surprise by his naughtiness , she moved out of his arms and started to hit him,

" ok ok just kidding lets go when you finish your duty . I'll drop you home after that" , he said again moving towards her and holding on to her cheeks and then unable to stop himself from making a move to kiss her , as she instantly slipped out of his arms and ran away from there, shyly .

He kept his promise and took Nikki out for dinner to a place of her choice , a Punjabi restaurant . Nikki was such a chatterbox and not one second in her company , left any margin for boredom to creep in . After ages I he felt truly happy and relaxed. But this was just the beginning , he thought to himself happily , just the beginning of many more precious moments to be spent in her entertaining company.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry but I wasnt aware of this FF... I ll read it nd edit this post soon!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx for d pm Mitzi bt I hv not read dis ff before so I need to read it frm d start n I will comment after reading previous parts.
BTW does anyone knw where Neha is?She used to pm me before.
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Posted: 13 years ago
@mitzi... Good job with showing the after confession scenes... wish they were more detailed though... esp where A confesses at pool that he was afraid of loosing her... There wasnt much reaction from N on that ...

The best part i liked was N thinking "Men feeling guilty after giving into their desire" :) She is such a confident girl and you portrayed that so well..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pri ..you caught me ...😳 I couldnt visualise the pool scene so just did a patch up job of it just so that we cld move forward ..agar baad mein mujhe kuch soojhega ..ill come back here and edit.
What a guy feels and what a girl feels ... a typical hum tum situation .. I am getting a few flashes into this boy-girl thing and u will see it in the coming updates ...but just in flashes ... DMG was the only show to dipict a guy and girl thing otherwise other shows leave no scope for what a person feels cause there are so many family members teling them what to feel and what not to feel .
Arent girl like that .. the guy says something , we make it mean something cry then console ourselves and the guy will be like .. hey I didnt even say that hehheehh did u watch pyaar ka panchnaama ... ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys i'm completing this ff in 4 more updates ... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Next morning , she barged into his cabin even as he was busy with his laptop '

"What are you staring at so intensly in your laptop ''. Is that .. is that a picture of some girl? Is it? Who is it ? I'll go and kill her. Wait , its Shelly. It's shelly Isn't it ? , she said in a single breath and rushed towards him and peaked at his screen . But what she saw there was her own pictures . She stood there , completely frozen . Abhi looked up at her and touched her hair. Embarrassed , she tried to go away from him, but he quickly got up and stopped her form going away. He walked towards her and backed her up against the wall ,his gaze was intense and he moved his face close to her as she looked at him caught in his gaze. She was blushing as she stammered

"A Abhi I have to go .My duty '.. "

"Doesn't start till another half an hour, you are early ..." , he interrupted her and came even more closer to her. Nikki got flustered and looked away and said.

"Abhi I am sorry , I misunderstood you so many times but you were only nice to me "

Abhi moved back and smiled at her "Its ok nikki your pranks pierced the tough wall I had built around my heart. You pranked me but I never got angry with you. Had it been anyone else I would have fumed the modi anger but you , you broke the wall and entered my heart."

Nikki looked at him , amazed and delighted with everything he had said .

Next day Nikki took extra efforts in dressing up ,they were celebrating Christmas in the evening in Sanjeevani ..maybe today was the day they could dance together . She had carefully dressed in her red dress wondering if he would remember to wear black as that was the boys dress code.

But it was a day of disappointments for Nikki as Abhi did not even give her a good look before he ordered her about some files and left for a meeting. The whole day he didn't even call once to check on her , even though she got Ridhhima to call him reminding him about the party. Finished with the work and very angry at Abhi , she wasn't even left with enough enthusiasm to attend the party and left for home. If she was expecting him to magically turn up at her house , she was majorly disappointed as she did not even receive an sms from him . Talk about loving her 'ha! he didn't even miss her. Done with all her work at home ..freshing up, eating dinner and going through her books, she couldn't stop herself from calling him . Did she expect him to enquire about her mood , the same guy who hadn't bother giving her a look in the morning or apologizing for missing the party ? if she did she was the biggest fool because his only question to her was about his work ' was his work done , could she come in early so that he could go through it once. The beautiful party hall with its red and white balloons flashed in front of her eyes '. And anger rose '.

" '.you are still asking about your files Abhi 'what about the party '..I missed the party because of your work '.."

" this work is important Nikki .. and am badly struck here in this meeting'.Don't tell me nikki u want go out for a party with your friends..

Not with them.. with you ! She said in an inaudible voice.

sorry? What did you say ?

.. never mind.. any other order sir? Nikki asked by now totally frustrated.

" Look Nikki , i..." but before he could continue someone called from behind-

Dr. modi, shall we resume meeting?'

Nikki I got to go '.see you tomorrow'.

Nikki opened her mouth to protest but the line got disconnected from the other end and Nikki went to sleep angry and frustrated.


When Abhi came to give duties the next day .Nikki smiled a false smile at him

"Good morning sir" , she said sarcastically and Abhi looked around at the group of Interns afraid that she would end up doing something silly but she did nothing like that .

Later in his cabin she stood aloof and with hands crossed in front of her as he went through the files she had completed so painstakingly yesterday'..

" if you are finish with your scrutiny of my work , shall i leave?

abhi read her anger and smiled to himself , She had done the work perfectly and he was pleased with her . Also he had heard her last night 'about wanting to go to the party with him. He understood her emotions but work came first. He couldn't just change his attitude towrds work..

sighing ,a naughty smile on his face ,he got up and rounded the table to stand in front of her

Dr. malhotra has anyone told you that anger suits your complexion..

color startd creeping on her cheeks despite her anger

why did he have to play with her when she was so angry ? or trying to be especialy now as his proximity shot up her heart beats , she fought hard to stay in control and not melt in front of him.

She stepped back from him ,gave him a sarcastic smile " dr.modi, as you have rightly said 'work comes first, it's 8:30 already .. so shall i leave? i hv gt duty to perform.. "

She walked past him and out of his office no longer angry at him , ..she was nothing but putty in his hands , one close encounter with him and all her carefully brewed anger had flown out of the window. But she had walked away from him as she didn't want him to know that.

That evening Nikki had a small fight with one of her patients. Abhi scolded Nikki and sided by the patient.

Later she caught up to him in the corridor and confronted him

"Abhi how can u blame me?" , asked him , her tone hurt and accusatory .

Nikki , what do you expect , I was surprised you were fighting with a patient like that , I had to take the patients side .

Arman who Was passing by , was shocked on hearing her argue with him.

"Tumhe hamesha main he galat lagti hoon naa Abhi nikki asked him .

Nikki I am the administrator I cannot be biased '.

Nikki was hurt as Abhi instead of being apologetic for talking so rudely to her ,was still so professional and unconcerned about the anguish she was going through. She had fought for the benefit of the patient himself , cldnt abhi see this , shdnt he side with his own staff , shdnt he side with her ? instead of a stranger ? was the stranger more important to him? Hurt at Abhi's total indifference to her , she moved away from him angrily.

Armaan stood frozen at his spot .They were fighting like a couple , on a first name basis . Why were they fighting as if they were seeing each other ,? he thought to himself. He would have to find out .

After duty, Nikki still fuming with anger, hurt and frustration walked up to the terrace. Abhi foollowed her in no time.

"What are you doing here Nikki?" , he asked her tenderly

"Why do you care Dr modi , its after duty hrs ? I can do anything I wish." , she said angrily and then began crying. Abhi pulled her close and she willingly went into his arms. As he soothed her back while she tried to stop crying.

"Don't ever shout at me like that Abhi . You have no idea how much it hurts me." , she said against his chest as his hold on her body got more protective in response.

They stood like that for some time. After a while she rose her head and smiled at him

"Chalo Abhi mere ghar chalte hain '." , she said cheekily , waiting for his response. Wsnt she sweet crying one moment and instantly forgiving him in the next moment just like a kid .

" No nikki I have a conference call '." , he said and she found herself majorly disappointed." Ohfo he worked so much" , with him everything was about work ''and wasn't this the reason they had started this long drawn out fight in the first place'.. uff !

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