OS|Kya main wahi ASR hoon?|PART1/2 PG1/2|

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Hey guys pls do comment:) if not how will i know if you like it or not and if you want more parts:O pls guys:( if not there will be no continuity :'(

Part one is one page 1 and part 2 on page 2!!! pls coment and like for part 3! :D

Hey all! This is my FIRST EVER ONE SHOT!! And I am actually very excited on how it would turn out!! Hope you all will like it and pls comment! Please do read it TILL THE END!!!

PART I (train meh romance? kya yaar ASR!)

Ok this OS is being written assuming that the kidnapping scene never happened!!!

Instead of going to London, ASR was scheduled to go Singapore. (as I am from Singapore am more familiar with Singapore rather than London so ya!). ok so there was this conference being held in Singapore and ASR was going for it and the conference organizer organized a dinner and dance at the end of the conference and meetings so all the people attending had to bring their wives along. ASR didn't let anyone in the RM know about this as he knew they would force him to bring Khushi along'so he was planning to just go for the conference and come back. Unfortunately/Fortunately, Anjali saw the invitation and compelled A to bring K along and so it happened'.

(in the flight)

K- apko pata hai flight mein baitna yeh meri pahli bar hei!! mai bahut excited hoon!!! :DD

A-(angrily) Seat belt tho teek say laaga loh na

And A helped K put her seat belt properly..K felt cold shivers down her spine when she felt his hands on her waist

Soon the flight going to take off'

K-mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai(with tears In her eyes) Arnavji kya hone wala hai mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai :'(

K was truly frightened and A couldn't bear to see her in this state and was about to hold her hand..but K was a step ahead and she was alr grabbing A's arm and held it close to her heart..with her eyes closed and her head against A's shoulder, she "survived" the take off..

K-(hesitating and stammering) who mai..woh..

A-(trying to break the awkwardness) Tum theek ho? Dizzy feel kar rahe ho?

K-(in an instant back to her bubbly self)Ji'Ji nahi'hum na bilkul teek hai!

As it was night time, khushi felt very sleepy while arnav was still awake reading the magazines'she fell asleep and her head fell onto his shoulder and in her sleep..to make herself feel comfortable, she shifted a bit and soon her head was on his lap

A-What the..K!..K! wake up'what are you doing!!

Khushi didn't wake up and Arnav was left admiring her beauty as se slept'

It is quite a short journey to Singapore around 3.5 hours to 4 hours..and they soon landed in sinagpore..Khushi obviously grabbed A's arm while landing!!)

It was about 7am in singapore and A and K reached their hotel'

K ran to the balcony in their room

K-arrey wah!! Kitna sundar aur saaf hai yeh jagh!! Yeh hotel bhi kitna tall hai yaha se tho poora desh dikh raha haii! Aur who dekhiye!! Yaha ka railyway track zameen peh nahi hai!! Tracks tho ground level say upper hai!! ~blabber blabber blabber (sweet blabber by the way)~

A-uhh Khushi'main abb jaa rahi hoon mujhe meeting hai tum kahi maat jana yahi kamere mei hi rahna khana sub kuch who log yahi pahucha denge'.pls behave yeh anjaan sheher hai'

With that Arnav left without even saying bye..Khushi surly was hurt but she didn't think much about it and kept admiring the scenery..especially the trains'

Khushi spent much of her time at the balcony as there was nothing she could do'and while waiting for Arnav to return and around 6++PM she fell asleep sitting on the chair at the balcony..

Soon arnav came and saw her there and shouted

A-Khushi! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Sonna that ho andat bed par shoti na..

K-Arnavji! Aap kab ayee?

A-baas abhi

Then arnav freshened up and sat with his laptop..soon it as about 7..and khushi was alr feeling hungry as she didn't eat lunch well'

A-kya hua?

K-ji who book lag rahi hai..

A-toh khan eke liye kuch magva doh na

K-Wo..Arnavji mujhue iss hotel ka khane pasand nahi aiyi'khana galle se nikal hi nahi raha tha..

Thinking about how he mercilessly left her in the room from7am-6pm and didn't even bother if she had eaten properly'he decided to take her out for dinner

A-theek hai hum bahar indian khana khane challenge..tum thayaar ho jayo main aman ko gaadi lane ke liye kahoongi'

K-Arnavji!!!

A-What?

K-who kya hum train se jaa saakte hai?

A-WHAT??!?!?!?!

K-ji who subah se trains ko dekh rahi thi bahut ache lage'maan kar raha hai ki ek baar uss par safar karoon'

For once arnav thought logically and apparently his meeting went smoothly and thus he was in a good mood and he said ok..

It was peak hour and most of the ppl were returning home from work by the train..so it was quite crowded'.

Everyone was pushing and pushing and khushi felt uncomfortable..arnav saw this and went near her and held her hand tight as though he didn't want to leave her..he didn't want her to feel uncomfortable

A-bahut beed hai tum mere pass hi rahna'

Those words hit khushi like never before..it felt so nice for her ears to listen to arnav talking with so much of love and concern..

Soon the train came and many ppl were coming out and many were trying to get in..

Arnav hardened the grip on Khushi's hand and led the way into the already very packed train..everyone was finding for a pole or a handgrip to hold..khushi was in the middle of nowhere and she had nth to hold..

They were supposed to get off about 5 stops later..and soon the train reached the second stop..many ppl wanted to get out in this stop and everyone was pushing their way out..someone pushed khushi and as she had nth to hold she was about to trip and fall but arnav grabbed her with one hand on her waist and the other holding tight on her arm'Romance even in a crowded train? That was exactly why ARSHI was special! :')

Later as the train was moving, it suddenly jerked and khushi's chest collided with Arnav's hard chest'they had to remain in that position as it was too crowded to "maintain a distance" :P

Arnav had a hand on her waist and one on her back while Khushi just leaned on his chest'it felt as though there was no need to worry about anything as long as her arnav was there with her..not allowing her to get any harm..

Soon their stop came and very little ppl had to get out so once again arnav held Khushi's hand and led her out thourgh the very squeezy train'

They started walking towards the restaurant "riverwalk tandoori" it is an awesome authentic indian restaurant

K-who..(hesitating)'sorry arnavji'maine train lene ka zidd ki aur train itna crowded tha..

A-'..(for once he started using his brains and realized that it wasn't K's fault as she didn't even know it was peak hour) koi baat nahi magar experience acha tha.. ;)

Of course ASR experience acha kyun nahi hooga ;) apni biwi ke sath romance jo karna mila!;) enjoy toh zaroor kiya hooga ASR ne apni biwi ko apne hathoin mein lena aur air con ki wajah se khushi kay balloon uski cehre par ana..haihai

So that is thi end LOL!! It is like 1213 words o.O LOL haha how was it? Sorry for my karaab hindi:P pls let me know if you want a continuity'rmb there is supposed to be a dinner and dance ;) hint-hint so do you all want me to continue or? No L((

Comments greatly appreciated! :D

-Bhargavi aka fluffyclouds

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS..it is sweet!
Do continue. Would love to know what happens next :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you guys!! so sweet of you guys :') i will continue if more ppl like and comment part II most probably will be up tmrw! :D
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Amazing start ..plz cont :)

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oh, it's very sweet!
Khushi with her antics!😊
continue plz.
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This is a good OS...Thanks for putting in Singapore...I am also from there ;) High five to my Singaporean buddy 😉
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Enjoyed it...but ended soon :( do continue soon
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thank you all so much for you comments!! they really mean a lot to me!! :')) @ sandhyait so sorry if it was too short :( first time writing so ya:( will imrpove!! PAKAA!
@Edella17 HEY high five lol!! :DD
once again thank you soo much guys!! your comments mean a lot! promise next part will be longer!! :D stay tuned! part II will be up tmrw :DD
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Nice os. Do continue writing.Waiting for the next os.😊
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PART II (Arnav eh kya ho raha hai mujhe? Kya main wahi ASR hoon?)

Soon they arrived at riverwalk tandoori and Arnav was sitting down at the table while Khushi went to wash her hands…

Arnav in thoughts: What is happening to me? I thought I was supposed to hate her? I couldn't get my eyes off her when she slept on my lap ystd in the flight..i couldn't get my eyes off her in the train just now..i didn't want to let go of the "hug" in the trains…I felt as if I wanted her..i needed her..i loved her….this is just crap lets see what to order..

But then again khishi came into his mind..how she held his arm in the flight how she was so close to him in the train..he wanted to relive every single moment with her again..

Breaking his dream bubble and jotting him back to reality was Khushi as she came with the lively atmosphere

K-Arnavji!! Apne kya order kiya? Waise thank you ki apne mujhe itna acha restaurant me lekhe aiye! Mujhe yeh jagha bahut pasand ayi hai!

realizing how he had been so nice to her for so long, Arnav went back to the old him..ASR

A-What? Tum yeh soch rahi ho ki maine tumhare liye iss R mein aiya? Rubbish..aaj kuch colleugues bactha rahe the ki is R bahut achha hota hai issiliya yaha aiya hoon…I took pity on you..aur tumhe bhi saate lekhe aiya hoon…~.~

K-Kya?(tearful) ek minute keh liye maine socha tha ki aap badle aye the…

They called the waiter and ordered their food..while eating:

A-K! tum theek say khana bhi nahi kha saakti hai kya? God main iss ladki keh sath kar kya raha hoon…

K-Arnaji aab kya huya? Aap bar bar mujhe kyun dhantthe rahte hain?

Arnav brings his hand forward to k's mouth and K gets the weird feeling…he was about to touch the end of her lips when he brought his hand back to himself took a tissue and said…tumhare mouth ke pass kuch hai..and gave the tissue to K…

He never fails at giving K the wrong impression that he loves her and he cares…even after all this pagli khushi still loves him more than anything else…

They soon finished dinner and were walking around for a bit as Arnav was talking on the phone…he was talking about a really important matter on the phone…not to forget it was quite dark outside..and the only light was the one near the main road…

Khushi was damn scared but yet she cant do anything…to make matters worse the path was desserted…she oculdnt even talk to arnavji and he would snap at her for disturbing his phone call…

Khushi was in her own thoughts about the jalebis she ate in the R when suddenly:

BOOOM(a loud noise came from the construction sight nearby but arnav ignored it as he was too into the phonecall)

K-AHHH ))): (damn scared)

A-(leaving his phone call behind he ran towards K..ps K was trailing behind A) K!! kya hua! K tum theek hoo? K!!

K-Arnavji! :'( Khushi shouted as she ran to him and hugged him real tight…there was no gap between them…Arnavji mujhe bahut daar lag raha hain :'(( yahhan par bahut andhera hain aur achanak se kuch bahut daravanny avaj aiyi L arnavji mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain aap pls mujhe chodke maat jaoon…please :'(

A-Nahi Khushi main tumhe chodke kahin nahi jaa raha hoon….tum fikkar mat karo main yahi par hoon..tumhe kuch nahi hoga darne ka koi zaroorat nahin hai..(he spoke like a true husband protecting his wife)

All this while they didn't break off from their hug…they were still hugging sideways..like arnav had a hand around khushi's shoulders while another hand at her waist area..khushi was also still clinging onto him as if if she left him she would loose her life..and they were walking to a taxi stand

Once they reached the taxi stand, they let go of each other and waited for a taxi..meanwhile khushi was feeling damn cold..

K-Grr><

A-tum theek ho?

K-jj…jjjiii..ba-as bahut ta-a-and lag rahi hai (shivering)

It indeed was very cold even arnav felt very cold but without second thoughts, he took off his blazer and put it around khushi

Khushi was looking at him with shock..

K-ji iska koi zarrorat nahin hai..

A-…mai eh tere liye nahi kar raha hoon..agar tumhe zyada tand lag gayi toh bemaar pad jaoge and sneeze karte jaoge…phir di pareshaan ho jayegi..

K-once again with tears in her eyes as she had been proved wrong that her husband loves her..by her husaband..she said..kya? aap ab bhi yeh saab di ke liye kaar rahe hai? (angrily and sadly, she took off th eblazer and threw it on the ground)

A-WHAT THE..KKG ye kya kar rahe hoon? Mera blazer karaab ho jayegi..

K-aap koh toh sirf aapki blazer aur di ki paadi huyi hai…ek aur bath Mr.ASR mera naam KKGSR hain..apko pasan ya na pasand yeh hi mera naam hai aur shayad app bhul rahe hai ki apne hi mujhse zabardasti shaadi karke mujhe wo naam diye the..

Before Arnav could say anything..a taxi came and they boarded it

In the taxi also K was feeling very cold as the AC was on…even after what she said just now Arnav could still feel her pain and couldn't see her in that state and said:

A-kitni taand hai…I can't even wear the blazer now…umm could you pls reduce the air con pls? It is quite cold

Driver: oh yes sure..

Khushi noticed this and somewhere in her heart..deep down she knew that arnav wasn't feeling that low and that he requested the driver for her sake…

Khushi soon fell asleep in the taxi and they reached the hotel..Arnav payed the driver and the driver was like..i think you have to carry your pretty wife up to the hotel now!

Arnav felt that that was the only thing to be done..carry Khushi up to the room…he couldn't bear to wake her up so he slid one arm around her knees and the other around her back and carried her towards the room..while he was trying to open the room door, khushi awoke and was shockingly surprised to see herself in arnav's arms..arnav quickly kept her down and opened the room's door..

Khushi couldn't stop blushing..she was as red as an apple…

A-ummm tum bed par so jayo ..I..I will sleep on the sofa..

K-theek hai :o

A-urmm khushi?

K-almost instantly..JI arnavji?

A-arhh..(hesitating) arhh goodnight

K couldn't believe her ears..THE ASR said good night to her! She was going all mad and she whispered..goodnight..a whisper that was loud enough to be heard by Arnav..

Khushi slept almost imeediatly..while Arnav was tossing and turning on the remarkably big sofa…

Atnav to himself: what is happening to me? Why do I seem to care so much for her? That phone call was so important and even the loud noise form the construction sight didn't distract me then WHY? Why did I disconnect my phone at the moment I heard her shout? I ouldnt bear to hear her in pain..when she threw herself at me..why did I react and put my arms around her? What is so special in her that is dragging me towards her? I even let her wear my blazer..when she threw my blazer down, instead of grabbing her by her arms and threatening her…why did I listen to wtv she was saying? Why did her words leave an impact on me? Even after she said all those to me…I chose to request the driver to reduce the air con FOR HER why am I so concerned about her? And just now, I could easily have woken her up I didn't have to carry her..but seeing her sleeping so peacefully I didn't feel like disturbing her..and what was that that I just told her? Goodnight? Seriously? I, ASR, said goodnight?? Wait why am I even thinking about her right now?

Arnav got up with all thse thoughts in his mind went to the bathroom and washed his face…he looked up into the mirror and asked himself this "kya main wahi ASR hoon?"

With that he went to sleep

The end~

"fingers crossed" guys!!! Really hope you all like it!! Spent a lot of time thinking and writing it!! Ahah it is 2 am in singapore and I am up writing this! Hope you guys appreciate this!

Pls do comment and like on both my parts so far! Please guys..i promise another fantastic part is coming up!

Your likes and comments mean a lot to me :') so please!!!

Thank you!

Bhargavi aka fluffyclouds

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