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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yasmin- so guys hume Preeto ki saari wishes jaane padegi.
Rajbeer- woh patta karna mera kam hai.
Mamaji- ha aur hum donu bhi yaha kuch dino tak ruk jaati hai
Bj- ha boorey waqt mein apne hi kam atte hai.
Simran- so mein bhai aur bhabhi yaha rahen gay.
Papaji- yeh bhi kyu poch ne wali baat hai.
Pankaj- mein aur Meeta toh 2 minute ki doori pe rehte hai
Rajbeer- accha hai key tum sab saath ho, i think hum mein se kisse ek ko Preeto key saath humesha rehna chahiye.
Ishu- ha aur iss mission ka pehla rule yeh hai key hum mein se koi bhi udas baatey nahi karega.
Rajbeer- rule number 2, koi nahi roaga (cry).
Simmi- rule number 3, bilkul Preeto ki tarah hum andar se kitni toute hue kyun na ho lekin chere mein humesha ek smile rakhengay.
Bani- rule number 4, iss ghar mein bilkul heathly khana aur healthy chise a angi warna di ki tabiyat aur bigad sakti hai.
Yasmin- rule number 5, Preeto ko hume zabardasti toh zabardasti at least 12 se 14 gante aram karna hoga.
Sonu- di phir chahe kitni zid bhi kyun na kare hum unhe ziyada bhaaj daud nahi karney dengay.
Rajbeer- so guys kal se yeh mission suro
Everyone cheers and Bj wipes a tear from her eye and smiles.
Next Morning...
Bani had slept in Preeto's room with her. Actually Preeto doesnt know that since Bani came in at 11 pm and left at like 6:50 am. Before Preeto wakes up. Preeto wakes up and sits on her bed. Meanwhile Meeta comes in with a cup of tea. Meeta- chai
Preeto- di tune takleef kyu ki. Mein a rahi thi na
Meeta- kyun hum teri khatir dari nahi kar sakte.
She smiles and sits on the bed with Preeto and hands over the cup. Preeto takes a sip and hate it. Preeto- kya di kitni kadwi hai please thodi shakar dalona.
Meeta- nahi shakar sirf thodi hi daliga agi tere khane mein aur namak bhi.
Preeto-kya
Meeta- shakar aur namak dil key liye bhaut ache nahi hote.
Preeto- iss bimari ki toh...
Meeta- chal Ishu ne nasta baanaya hai.
Preeto- atti hon.

After Preeto took a shower she comes to the dinning table where everyone other than Yasmin is present. Including Rajbeer and Simmi. Ishu - good morning.
Preeto- good morning di.
Ishu gives Preeto only healthy food in her dish. Preeto- di
Ishu- shut up jo bhi diya hai woh sab khana padega
Preeto- kyun
Ishu- kyunki meine khaha hai issiliye.
Preeto forcefully feeds herself. After eating, Preeto sits in the living room while everyone else is busy clearing the table or eating. Rajbeer comes to her. Rajbeer sits beside her- hi
Preeto- hi
Rajbeer- kya hua mood kyun off hai
Preeto- Ishu di ka woh healthy khana khana padda na
Rajbeer smiles. Rajbeer- so kya tumhari koi bhi wish hai, i mean koi bhi tamana.
Preeto- tamana... well meri tamana toh yeh hai key iss ghar mein sab bilkul weysa hogae jeysa Ishu di ki shaadi se pehle tha.
Rajbeer- aur kuch
Preeto- ha doo chise hai lekin ek toh mein sirf Bani ko baataongi aur doosri tab jab waqt ae.
Rajbeer- waqt ae ka kya matlab.
Preeto- jab ae ga tab baataongi.
The phone rings... Preeto gets up but Bani makes her sit down. Bani- di mein dekhti hon
Preeto- as u wish
Bani takes the call- hello... hi Yasmin di
Preeto's mind- Yasmin o no zaaror meri band baajne wali hai.
Bani- thik hai mein di ko bheej dongi.
Rajbeer- kya hua
Bani- Yasmin di ka phone tha keh rahi thi key Preeto di ko IV drops key liye jaana paadega.
Rajbeer- IV drops... lekin kuch din pehle toh liye the.
Bani- ha lekin key rahi thi key jab behoshi ho tab uss week mein at least do baar leyni padti hai.
Preeto- yaar iss Yasmin ko mere sewhy aur koi kaam nahi hai kya.
Bani- bilkul thik kar rahi hai di warna ap toh khabhi nahi jaongi.
Rajbeer- kab appointment hai.
Bani- bas 12 o'clock
Rajbeer- thik hai mein ley jaaonga.
Preeto- nahi nahi mein kud chali jaongi
Rajbeer- nahi jaaogi. Mein tumhe jaanta hon. Mein tumhe ley jaaonga.
Preeto's mind again- Yasmin tumhari toh...
Simran comes and says- come one guys thoda boring nahi laj raha sab kuch
Rajbeer- kya karey
Simran- so everybody come here.
Everyone is gathered. Simran- toh kya kehna hai kya naam tha uss game ka... romal shafae... whatever woh game tha na jaha 2 teams hoti hai aur middle mein romal hota hai aur donu teams se ek member atta hai aur romal leyneki koshish karta hai.
Meeta- Simran game ka naam maat sochu sab ko patta hai
Everyone laughs. Ishu- so girls vs. boys.
Bani- mein nahi kehl rahi
She goes and sits on the sofa. Pankaj comes with bags in his hands. Dhruv- wow Pankaj tum bhi agae. Pakora lae hona.
Pankaj- yaar mere kud key baane hue healthy pakora hasir hai.
Preeto- kya baat hai Umbrella jiju.
Rajbeer- itna kush maat ho tumhe sab se kam milengay.
Preeto- thats not done
Pankaj- Rajbeer yeh meine kam oil mein baanae hai.
Preeto- dekha apse ziyada jiju acche hai.
Rajbeer- accha tumhara IV session hai na 12 bhaaje Yasmin se keh kar ek ganta aur chalwaonga.
Preeto- nahi nahi nahi please nahi

The romal safae game starts. Preeto was allowed to play. Ishu vs. Dhruv, Meeta vs. Pankaj, Preeto vs. Rajbeer, Mamiji vs. Mamaji. Sonu had homework to do.
Mamaji and Mamiji go first. Mamaji bends to pick up the romal put Mamiji puts on a angry face and then Mamaji stands up still again with fear. Mamiji bends and picks up the romal and goes to her team. The girls are laughing. Preeto- kya hua ladko apni naak katwali
Rajbeer- naak nahi kati score agle game mein settle karte hai.
Meeta- settle kya ganto karogay. Mamaji ne toh beshati karwali.
Mamiji- issi kehte hai joora ka gulam dekha ladkion.
Mamaji gathers the boys, their backs opposed to the girls.
Mamaji- o ladko yeh toh bas avi kehti hai abhi ek thapad donga na yeh toh kya saari ladkiyan bhi maanegi.
Mamiji- oye Dharampal ji...
Mamaji gets a scared- ha Dolly
Rajbeer- Mamaji ap toh keh rahe the key ap Mamiji se nahi darte.
Mamaji- abhi kehne mein kya jaata hai, lekin meri uskey naam se hi faati hai.
Dhruv- kya mamaji galat salha dey rahe ho
Ishu- excuse me agar dar laj raha hai toh result declare kardey Girls win and Boys loose
Dhruv- oye Ishu issa kuch nahi hua, humari tarah se a raha hai humara veer Pankaj
Ishu- accha toh humari tarah se a rahi hai humari pyaar Meeta di
Pankaj gets a little tensed.. Meeta comes to the centre while Pankaj is still by his team trying to avoid but Rajbeer and Dhruv are forcing him to go to the center. Meeta- oye Ambrella ithey a.
Pankaj kind of falls back but Rajbeer pushes him to the centre. Preeto and Ishu are laughing at them. Preeto- yeh hai tumhara veer
Rajbeer- come on Pankaj jeet key dekha dey in ladkion ko
Pankaj was extending his hand to the romal when Meeta says- Ambrella yeh romal oataya na toh dekh liyo poori raat ghaar key bhaar nikal dongi.
Preeto and Ishu give each other a high five. Meeta takes the romal and walks to her team. Simran- boys result baataney ki zarorat hai kya boys zero girls 2.
Dhruv- shut up Simmi ab humari gabro jawan Rajbeer aega.
Mamiji- toh humari team se sirf Preeto hai na toh Preeto ja
Rajbeer kind of shows off while Preeto totally avoids him. They are both opposing their teams and each other. They are looking into each others eyes. Preeto looks down at the romal while Rajbeer is still looking at her. A lock of her hair was on her face which was irritating her a little and then he finally looked down at the romal. They were looking at each other again. Simran wanted to help Preeto so she did her old trick. Simran- RAJBEER
Rajbeer's tension was lost and then Preeto got the romal and then ran to her team. They were celebrating when Dhruv and Pankaj went up to Rajbeer. Dhruv- yaar mere bhai kya kar raha hai tu
Rajbeer- mein kya karo Simran ne distract kiya
Pankaj- koi baat nahi Dhruv tu ja aur jeet key a.
Dhrishu were opposing each other. Dhruv was really fast in taking the romal to his team while Ishu put her hair in a pony. Ishu- arrey
Dhruv- kya hua
Ishu- no problem weyse bhi hum ladkiyan hi toh jeet rahi hai.
Mamaji- kya yaar woh haari aur hum jeete lekin phir bhi hume inki baate suni pad rahi hai.

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I really love your writing and just hope Preeto will be ok in the end.

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