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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice prologue.. continue soon..& make index too dear..excited to read more! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please PM me with the parts :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice... pm me the parts!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE- sorry for delay. actually i am tired of waiting...they haven't revealed abt all the character n the hero hasn't entered yet...i have started with some real n some imginary characters. hit the like button n do comment if you liked it...criticism n suggestion are also welcome.😳


CHAPTER 1 DIFFERENT WORLDS

There is a huge mansion and crowd of hundreds of people standing in front of it, shouting with excitement. They just want to have a look of their favourite star n wish him on his special day. Inside the mansion we see the lavishly decorated huge bedroom. The interiors itself speaks about the choice, elegance n status of the person to which it belongs who right now was having sound sleep on his king size comfortable bed under the warmth of blanket. But his sleep was disturbed when someone pulled off his blanket and asked him to get up immediately.

Man (strictly)- common son get up…its already too late. Do you wanna spent your birthday in sleeping n doing nothing….crowd has already gathered outside the house…they all are your fans just want to see you once. Besides this, we have to attend press conference where I will announce new film of our production house. comon RK..

RK (lazily)- oh dad, whats your problem??? Let me sleep some more, I have taken break after long time.

His dad- get up or I'll kick you out of this bed.

RK (pulling blanket again over his head)- you should really know how to talk to RK the super star.

His dad- (pulling off the blanket again)- and you should really know how to talk to the father of RK the super star(mocking him) and if you inflated your ego any more I will surely kick you out of the bed this time.

RK (finally got up)- fine you won (giving irritated looks to his dad)-happy now (both father son glared at each other for few seconds n then started laughing)

His father went away after wishing him happy birthday n reminding him to get ready for the press conference. While RK finally got up from the bed, yawned stretching his arms, and went to get ready. He came out all fresh wearing cool white t shirt n rugged blue jeans, his all time favourite. Just then a servant arrived with a glass of juice. He took the glass and took a sip of juice and immediately threw the glass making faces.

RK (giving angry looks to the servant)- what the hell is this? You know I prefer orange juice n this was mango juice. You know how much I hate it…god!!(throws up his hands in the air out of frustration) you all are hell bent to spoil my day.

Servant (head hung down)- extremely sorry sir, I will bring orange juice.

RK (still angry) no, now there is no need of it…i m getting late…just get out from here and give me some peace.

Servant went out of the room. A person was standing at the entrance of the room, he saw all this and gulp down hard n thought – oh god!!! Save me from this erupting volcano.

Man (tried to smile concealing the slight fear that he has to face RK's anger)- may I come in sir??

RK (without looking at him)- come in.(recognized from the voice that he is none other than his PA, bittu ji)

Bittu ji (smiling)- happy birth day sir.

RK (tilted his head and glared at him then at watch n then back at him)- will you tell me what made you so late???

Bittu ji (smiling sheepishly)- woh …sir aapke liye ye lane mein derr ho gayi (gives him a huge bouquet of his favoutite white roses) khud apne samne banwaya sir…after all its your birth day…so the bouquet has to be perfect na…just the way u like it.

RK (sternly)- stop buttering me. Lets go we are getting late.

RK first went to his balcony to show his one glimpse to his fans. As soon as he came there all the fans started shouting his name with excitement.

" hey RK..RK…RK"

"happy birth day RK"

"we love you RK"

RK stood there for sometime n rested his hands on railing, gave his cute dimpled smile which can make any girl go week in her knees, swayed his hand saying hii to the crowd. he stood there sometime smiling at the crowd, his smile was same to that of a king's smile when he sees his prosperous kingdom. A kind of proud was also visible in his deep brown mesmerizing eyes indicating that how happy he is to be the favourite of lakhs of fans and getting all their attention. He shouted – "thanks all of you for your love and support. RK loves you guys. (blew flying kisses to all of them n went away)



ONE OF MUMBAI'S THOUSANDS OF ORDINARY CHAUL

The place was crowded by women of the chaul who were as usual fighting for their chance to fill their bucket with municipality water which come just for half an hour. This disturbed the peaceful sleep of a girl who was trying to shut down these noises by putting pillow over her head. She was lying on her not so comfortable bed in her room which she shares with her elder sister. The furniture of the room was mostly old, ordinary speaking of the lower middle class status of the family but everything was organized neatly revealing the sense of belongingness n love of the members with whatever they had in their small house of two rooms.

Suddenly a bubbly, cheerful girl came running in the house, jumped on the bed and pulled the blanket off of her sleeping sister and shook her vigorously to wake her up.

Girl(excitedly)- hey wake up you sleepy head..you know what happened??? I saw him!!! Wake up madhu. (again shook her vigorously)

Madhu (giving irritated looks)- what is this trishna di?? Today is Sunday…we don't have to go college. Let me sleep.

Trishna (still excited)- no way you are sleeping this late today…you know what is the date??? Where I was gone early morning???

Madhu (finally getting up)- I know you won't rest until you spoil my sweet morning sleep. Fine (sighs) tell me what so great about this day n where you have been since morning???

Trishna (smiling dreamily)- today is RK's birth day madhu!!!! And I went to his mansion to see him n wish him.

Madhu (mocking her)- oh really!!! I am sure he invited you inside n cut the cake with you.

Trishna (fake anger)- uda lo mazaak…par ek din ye sapna bhi sach hoga dekh lena….abhi ke liye itna hi bahut hai that he said I love you to me.

Madhu (placing her and on trishna's forehead)- are you alright di….your fever has gone up to your brains….RK…the RK..said I love you to you (starts laughing). Subah se aur koi mila nahi kya bevakoof banana ke liye.

Trishna (pouts)- I am not joking ok. He said it to me…I mean he said it to all of his fans who were waiting outside the mansion to have his one glimpse. (looks at madhu who was laughing hard now). Hey I am one of his fan….right! so indirectly it means the same thing.

Madhu (still laughing hard)- oh di…you are too much!!!

Trishna (still pouting n showing fake anger)- as if you don't like him.

Madhu – I like him because he is a good actor and is handsome. I like his movies….i am just a normal fan. I am not crazy like you. (puts her hand on trishna's shoulder n says in serious tone)- di…we should always know where to put the full stop. I know your dreams…how much you love this glamour world…n I have faith in you but we should not lose our sanity while chasing the dreams. I hope you remember mom's teachings that – "we should never forget what we are and what is our real identity"

Trishna (joining hands in front of her)- maate madhu –ishwari. Iss gyan ke liye dhanyawad. Now lets go we have to go to temple, tomorrow is my first audition so I want to take the blessings of god.

Madhu (giggling)- ya lets go.

They got ready and went to temple, padmini and roma also joined them.


TEMPLE PREMISES

Trishna was biting her nails, thinking about tomorrow's audition.

Roma (pulling her hand out)- what are you doing??? See you have spoiled your nails.

Trishna – roma I am very nervous about the audition.

Roma- don't worry everything will be fine…I am sure you will give best performance.

Trishna(hugs her) – thanks for support. You are really like a true friend.

Roma – by the way where are your sati savitri mom and mother Teresa sister???

Trishna (pointing towards the ladders)- there…giving prasad to beggars. Come we should also go there.

They went there n joined madhu n padmini. Padmini suddenly stopped when she come across one beggar. She looked him with curiosity. Actually he doesn't seem like beggar but more like a saint. There was peace n glow on his face. When he looked at padmini he smiled and asked- " tere mann mein kuch sawaal hai beti"

Padmini (stammering)- nahi…nahi toh…baba plz give blessings to my daughters. (gestured trishna n madhu to seek his blessing)

First trishna touched his feet.

Baba – waqt se pehle aur kismet se jyada kisi ko kuch nahi milta.

Then madhu touched his feet.

Baba – ek sunahri duniya tujhe bula rahi hai…..tyyaar rehna.

He went away leaving all the ladies confused who were trying to decipher the meaning of his words.

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precap- RK's birth day party
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me first awesome update do continue
Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Amazing start...continue soon & thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was a interesting update! please send me a PM when u update next.. i can't wait to read future updates! please update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

me first awesome update do continue




thank u so much😳

will continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

Amazing start...continue soon & thnx 4 d pm



thank u so much dear
will cont soon...welcome😊

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