Palak's sad poem for arpita And happy one for arat

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This poem represent's palak's feelings conserning arpita's 😭

Fields of love,
rain drops of joy.
You hear friends saying,
you're mommys little girl
Mommy can we play
mommy will you stay.
Walk a little straighter mommy,
because you're leading me this way.
Mommy please don't leave,
it's not your turn to go.
I'm sitting in this chair
Waiting for you to come with my birthday cake
Please don't leave,
I need you here.
So my life,
can be perfectly clear.
Pull through this,
I know that you can.
Come on mommy,
it's mommys little girl who ask you
Mommy can you here me?
please say you do.
Come on mommy,
I know you'll come back to me
I love you mommy,
nothing is going to change.
Mommy please don't you leave me
so my life can stay the same.
Please try, please try!
Not to leave me
you can not die.
Mommy I love you,
I know you love me too.
That is why you've got to come back to me
please make it through this rainy night
With my birthday cake in your hands
Please come back home
I know that you can do it.
Please stay with me And payal
And my daddy too
I know you'll make through to us
I Love You Mommy!😭


And her thaughts for arati when she comes to love her


She is portrayed as evil, a devil, a shrew,
With agendas aplenty and morals quite few.
There are many more names and none of them stellar,
If you want a long list of them, ask Cinderella.

She's a gold digger, a home-wrecker, really quite harried,
But that doesn't describe who my father married.
He married a woman as warm as the sun,
Who has opened her heart to most everyone.

She is generous and kind and sweeter than sweet.
With a smile and a kind word to all that she meets.
When first I met her, I was a little girl, oh so smart,
With the world at my feet and tongue sharp as a dart.

She saw through my facade and made me her friend,
And I knew then she'd be there through thick and through thin.
Stepmother's a harsh word and the French have another,
Its Belle Mere and translated means Beautiful Mother.

So I say to you, my Belle Mere, my beautiful mom,
Please know that I love you, you're my very best mom
We've all been so lucky to have you in our life,
My Dad got it right when he made you his wife.

And i love you maaa🤗






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Zetter thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww that's was really sad 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zetter

Awww that's was really sad 😭 😭 😭

Bonjour zetter just wanted to highlight her feelings😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was so emotional 😭
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Originally posted by: jikky_84

That was so emotional 😭

Thanks yaar there's sadness And happiness mingled😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww such beautiful poems!! did u write them?
the first one made me cry... and the second one put a smile on my face...

"He married a woman as warm as the sun," - so true... i love this line...
Edited by aanyakunat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so touching. what a great piece of poem. Thumbs up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks yaar😳
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Originally posted by: aanyakunat

awww such beautiful poems!! did u write them?

the first one made me cry... and the second one put a smile on my face...

"He married a woman as warm as the sun," - so true... i love this line...

Yes for the first question i hope you liked it yaar😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful!!!
One made me 😭 while the other brought a 😊

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