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Ishmeet went aside and then phone Yasmin. Y- hello
Ishu- ha hello mein Ishmeet bol rahi hon.
Yasmin- o Ishu bolo, kya kar sakte hai hum tumhare liye
Ishu- kuch nahi bas tumhe aaj Preeto, mere saath auri family key saath yaha ana hai.
Yasmin- kaha tumhare mayeke aur tumhare sasural
Ishu- mayeke
Yasmin- done hum waha saat bhaaje tak pohoch jaengay.
Ishu- good bye
Yasmin- bye
Ishmeet disconnects the phone and then in her mind- tere dimag mein kya hai yeh toh aaj mein sabke samhe lakar hi rahongi Preeto.

7 PM...
Rajbeer and Dhruv have come from Air Force to Dhillon house for supper. Rajbeer- Bj aaj khane mein kya hai bhaut bhook laji hai.
Mamiji- teri aur Dhruv ki pasand ka khana bana hai aaj Tondorri roti, saaj aur woh sab.
Dhruv- saaj thank u Bj
Rajbeer- Tondorri roti sunkey hi pet mein bhook padgae.
Bj- ajao garma garam.
Ishu- ha woh aaj Yasmin bhi ane wali hai.
Sonu- Yasmin di wow mujhe weysi bhi biology mein thodi help ki zarorat thi.
Yasmin comes home (is wearing a blue and green suit). Yasmin- im here
Papaji- ajae tu chal khana kha.
Yasmin comes and sits at the table and looks around. Yasmin- yeh Preeto kaha hai.
Mamaji- arrey ha Preeto kaha hai.
Bj- PREETO CHAL KHANA KAHANE AJA!
Preeto soon comes to the dinning area. Preeto- yelo Bj ajae.
Dhruv has a little disappointed face on. Preeto sits at the table and takes food. She is taking desert which is rasgulle. Yasmin sees Preeto is about to take one. Preeto looks at her and Yasmin shakes her head as a signal of no. Preeto takes the jug of water instead that was right next to the desert. Rajbeer sees that. Preeto had her dinner and was about to go. Rajbeer- Preeto tumne desert nahi liya.
Preeto makes up a lie- woh mujhe desert nahi khana.
Rajbeer is left curious, in his mind- Preeto ne desert nahi liya. Strange usse toh mittah bhaut pasand hai.
Everyone is done eating, Bani comes with a bottle and says- aaj hum truth aur dare khele.
Everyone cheers. The first time the bottle points towards Papaji. Preeto- Papaji ap sach bologay ya dare karogay.
Meeta- truth hi hoga ladkey khabhi dare nahi kar sakte.
Rajbeer- nahi nahi papaji dare karengay.
Yasmin- thik hai toh phir... Papaji apko Bj ko ek sher suna na hoga.
Papaji- thik hai toh yeh lo...Suraj ugay ya na ugay, humare dil mein humesha roshni rahe gi. Suraj ugay ya na ugay, humarey dil mein humesha apki roshni rahegi.
Everyone cheers, Mamaji- dekha hum ladke kisse se nahi darte.
Preeto- accha
Rajbeer- aur nahi toh kya
Mamaji stands and proudly says- hum humesha sina tankey chalte hai.
Mamiji gets up and Mamaji sits back down and the girls laugh. Preeto- ha dekhli na ap sab ki mardanagi.

The bottle is spinning again and then Ishu stops it and it is pointing towards Preeto. Simmi- Bhabhi apne yeh kya kiya bottle abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Ishu- Preeto tum sach bologi aur tumse sawal mein pochongi.
Preeto gets up- kya sawal pochna hai apko di.
Ishu- Preeto tu ne mujhe khoon kyun nahi diya.
Preeto looks at the ground- meine apko kaha toh tha key mujhe injections se dar lajta hai.
Pankaj- nahi Preeto yeh sach nahi hai, jo jhoot bolta hai woh khabhi apni nazare nahi milta.
Rajbeer- Preeto sach kya hai yeh baat mere dimaj mein bhi bhaut der se thi.
Sonu- di apko needles se itna daar bhi nahi lajta key ap Ishu di ko khoon na do.
Ishu walks over to Preeto and takes her hand and places it on her own head. Ishu- Preeto tujhe meri kasam sach bol warna mein apni jaan dey dongi.
Preeto gets tears and looks up at Ishu and shakes her head. Preeto- nahi di mein apko nahi bataongi.
Yasmin gets up- Preeto kab tak iss aag mein akeli jalo gi. Humari maano toh tum abhi sab ko sach baatao. Agar tumhe yeh galat fami hai key tumhari khamoshi in sab ko jalne se bachaegi toh tum galat hon, tumhari khamoshi inhe aur jala rahi hai.
Papaji- ha Preeto, sach tujhe patta hai hume patta lekin unhe nahi patta. Betta khushi baatne se baadti hai aur dard baatne se kam hota hai.
Bj- tu inhe nahi baataegi toh khabhi na khabhi inhe patta toh chala na hi hai lekin agar toh baataegi toh inhe kisse aur se sune ki baad dard mein jine ki zarorat nahi hogi.
Ishu puts both of her hands on Preeto's shoulders and turns her towards her. Ishu- sach kya hai preeto plz hume baatao hum tumhari yeh problem solve kardengay.
Preeto- di yeh ek aise problem hai jaha pe meri madat koi nahi kar sakta.
Ishu- kya problem hai.
Preeto sobs- di sach toh yeh hai key mein... bimar hon,... bhaut bimar hon.
Meeta- Preeto gol gol gumakey baat maat kar, warna ek thapad dongi tujhe.
Ishu- keysi bimari hai tujhe
Preeto cries- d...dil ki bimari hai mujhe di
Ishu- KEYSI BIMARI HAI TUJHE... (she starts to tear up) bolna Preeto bolna
Preeto after a long silence...-di mujhe...con...conge...congestive heart failure hai.
Everyone gets up from their seats. Simmi- kya,,,,, no no no no Preeto tumhe yeh nahi ho sakta...its not possible
Ishu couldnt say anything else she just drops on the sofa with a few tears on her face. Rajbeer- kitne dino se yeh bimari hai tumhe.
Preeto- patta nahi lekin lllast stage hai.
Sonu- Yasmin di apko isskey baare mein patta tha na.
Yasmin nods. Sonu- kitne chances hai
Yasmin- bhaut kam
Sonu- kitne chances hai
Yasmin- exactly 9.89%
Bani- di apne itni baadi baat humse keyse chupae.
Meeta- yakin nahi hota mujhe
Dhruv, Rajbeer and Pankaj arent able to say anything. Mama Mami are crying. Mamaji- yeh keyse ho gaya yeh toh humarey jaane ki umar hai tu keyse.
Preeto sees Ishu's silence, she kneels to her. Preeto- di ap kuch bolo na.
Everyone is looking at them now. Ishu is still shocked, Preeto cups her face and she is crying herself. Preeto- di please kuch kahona. Dekho na di mujhe apni bimari se dar nahi laj raha, nahi mujhe moth se dar laj raha hai lekin please di ap kuch kaho. Mujhe apki khamushi bhaut daara rahi hai di.
Ishu finally broke up the silence- kyu tune humse yeh chupaya.
Preeto- kya baatati mein key Bj Papaji mein ja rahi hon humesha key liye, aur khabhi chakey bhi wapas nahi aongi. Yeh ki iss duniya ki koi bhi takat mujhe nahi baacha sakti.
Bani is too crying- lekin phir bhi
Preeto- dekha kitna rhona dhona ho raha hai issi liye nahi batana chahati thi.
Preeto runs to her room.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Comment on the sher i wrote it myself
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Lovely shayari. Read this episode with floods of tears though. So sad for Preeto.

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