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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rajbeer is at the camp- Preeto ko kamsoori ki waja se achnak se behoshi ka dhoora, woh bhi pach chey ganto tak yeh kuch samhaj nahi aya.
He looks at the time and which is 3:40 am, Rajbeer- god bhaut late hua, ab suna chahiye kal toh camp hai.
Next Morning...
At the breakfast table everyone was gathered including Rajbeer. Meeta di was watching Preeto like a hawk, she was right next to Preeto who was forcefully feeding herself parathas. Meeta- arrey Preeto jaldi kar yeh toh sirf breakfast hai lunch bhi toh karna hai.
Mamiji- ha kya yeh dhirey dhirey kha rahi hai.
Mamaji- chup kar tu Dolly. Preeto tu tere hisab se kha.
Preeto looks up from her plate- mere hisab se mera khana hogaya.
Rajbeer gets up after finishing his breakfast- Meeta di meri taraf se ek paratha aur khelao.
Meeta laughs- woh toh tum nahi bolte toh bhi mein isse khelati.
Rajbeer and Meeta share a high five. Bani and Sonu have already left. Preeto whines- Meeta di ab aur nahi.
Meeta- chup kar. aur nahi, chup chap yeh doo paratha khaley warna ek paratha sabar dasti se tere moo mein toosh (stuff) dongi.
Preeto has a exhausted look. Meeta gently smacks her head- jaldi poora kar.
Rajbeer smiles and then leaves. Preeto- jaldi kyun karo weyse bhi jaana kaha hai.
Papaji- puttar jaldi kha warna Meeta tujhe choudey gi nahi
Bj- Preeto aur kuch don
Preeto- nahi nahi Bj jitna hai woh toh itni muskil se khatam ho raha hai.
Meeta laughs. Preeto finishes her food and finally gets up only to almost fall. Mamiji- arrey arrey deyna se
Preeto- agar itna khelaogay toh yahi hogana.
Bj- thik hai ja tu apne kamre mein.
Preeto- ha rabba pehle toh suna tha key bhook ki waja se moth ho sakti hai lekin aj bhaut khane ki waja se moth hogi lajta hai.
Everyone laughs.

About 7 pm...
Ishmeet and Simran are at their house. Simran- bhabhi hum Preeto ko milne ja a.
Ishmeet- thik hai lekin Dhruv ka wait karte hai.
Simran- nahi mujhe abhi ja na hai.
Ishmeet- thik hai Dhruv key liye hum ek note leek key jaate hai.
Simran- mein leek ti hon.

Dhruv's note: Bhai, mein aur bhabhi bhabhi key mayeke ja rahe hai.

They are on the way when a flower shop comes. Simmi- bhabhi hume flowers leyne chahiye na.
Ishmeet- ha yeh thik rahe ga.
Simran parks the car on the other side of the flower shop.
Simmi- Preeto key favourite flowers kyunse hai.
Ishu- red roses tum roko mein leykar atti hon.
Simmi- okay
Ishu gets out of the car and crosses the road and goes to the flower shop. Ishmeet picks up a bunch of red roses and a tiny note card. Ishmeet shows it to the owner- veer ji kitna hua.
Bhaiya- 30 rupee.
Ishmeet pays and then leaves. She is crossing the road when a black car cocmes and comes and knocks hers. Ishu- AAAHHH!!!!
The flowers that were bought were in the air and Ishmeet was on the ground, with a lot of blood lost. Simran ran out of the car to Ishmeet. She took her head and said- bhabhi bhabhi please oatho. Please.
Simran takes her phone and dials Dhruv but couldnt reach him because the phone was switched off. She called the Dhillon house. Preeto- hello
Simran- hello Preeto bhabhi bhabhi
Preeto- kya hua Ishu di ko
Simran- bhabhi ka accident hua hai.
Preeto- kya
Simran- ha tum jaldi hospital ao.
Preeto- ha mein abhi a rahi hon.
They put the phone down. Preeto goes to the living room where everyone was gathered. Preeto- Bj Papaji woh Ishu di ka accident hua hai.
Bj gets up- kya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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One questions for the viewers r guys not commenting on my epis cuz preeto is dieing and rajpreet r saparated again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: unknownunknown

One questions for the viewers r guys not commenting on my epis cuz preeto is dieing and rajpreet r saparated again



nope thats not the reason for me , i'm going to start reading your new ff with forum members name inlcuded and will just catch up with that if you don't mind😊 , too many ff's to read ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well sorry to break ur heart but i have finals this months so cant start that yet ill write from the 27 th
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was lil busy and just catching up with all the FF's
What's happening to Dhillon sisters ? ek ke baad ek hospital pahunch rahe hai 😭
Excited to see what happens next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Actually its just ishu and preeto that have reaches the hospital
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: unknownunknown

Well sorry to break ur heart but i have finals this months so cant start that yet ill write from the 27 th




Yeah i got exam too ... it's okay take your time ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Sana. You study for your exams. I am also catching up with all the episodes and FFs.

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