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Hiya Members. I have written an OS for the first time. I hope u like i. I have also 2 SS pending. thats not gonna be updated so soon😉. Well, I am not gona continue with this. Its raining in mumbai and i am expecting some Virman rain sequence. So here u go... ~~*~~

She was walking on the lanes near marine drive.


It was 9:00 pm. Yes, she was walking alone at 9, and that too in Mumbai. It had been 5 months since she last sawChandigarh, nd know..she was leaving here with her di nd virat . Jiju used to come frequently to see her. She was almost cured now. Only more few months nd then cancer will go away frm her life forever.

This was the best trip of her life. Not because Mumbai was her dream. Cancer was also not the reason. She did not know y she felt something strange frm a few months. Was it just her or he was also going thru the same race. She now, knew every path of Mumbai. Afterall, he had showed her every single place of this big city. She was not scared of getting lost, she knew her chep would come to rescue.

But she was unaware of why she felt so. She trusted him. But y trusting him more than own. Y listening to him nd following his instructions. He was just her partner, not life partner. Then y believing that he would never lose her? y?

Suddenly, she heard the clouds thunder. In no time it started raining. Everybody started running. But she continued her walk, she knew that this rain will help her to think more. Soon, there was no person on the path ,near the marine drive ,below the rainfall. It had started rainig heavily. This was very rare. Virat had told her that rains r vry frequent in Mumbai. This was the first rain of the year.Luckily or say Unluckily, she did not have umbrella. But she did not care. She wanted her answrs.

She raised her hands to feel the rain nd closed her eyes. She loved feeling the rain drops. It hurts u, gives u pain . but at the sametime, u njoy being under it. In the shelter of pouring clouds. Suddently she opened her eyes. She had got the answers.

"I know what it is"She said smiling. "Its love. It can never be expressed through words or sentences. Just thru actions. If u love someone, u will never want him to leave u. you want him to be with u thru ur pain, sorrow,happiness nd joy. Love is like a wind, u can never see it, but u can feel it!!!

"He loves me" She said finally. She has always seen pain in his eyes durin the chemo. He was always by her side, never to leave her. Nd she, Crazy girl!! Never understood his feelings. But ,the question arises, did she love him??

"Yes, I love him too. Our love is like this rain, it is falling unconditionally. It hurts u in the first pase, but slowly u will enjoy it!!

She was happy. Atlast her wish was finally fulfilled. To love someone. And someone is no other but her chep, her partner, her 'Virat'

Suddently, the rain stopped. As if it has just came to make her realise his love. Their love. Her mobile beebed. It had received a message

"Where r u partner?? Come back soon. Bhabhi nd I r waiting"

"I am coming Virat. Just to be urs. Urs nd only ur, Bandariya"

She moved , continuing her walk.

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PLEASE like and comment. Please add me if u want to reacieve any pm of my wrk in future. Sorry for mistakes!!

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PyaasiChudail69 thumbnail
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good job pm me 4 ur future work
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Hey it was vry nice... Gud job done...👍🏼
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Lovelyyy!!!
Bring Virat in the next part!!
And u better pm me for the next part!! 😆
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res ..yayy.. virman and rain..just now i wrote in some thread dat i m eagerly waiting for a rain sequence for virman and i got it..will read it in my time i.e at night..i love to read any ffs,os or ss at dat time..special addiction..i m sure it is gr8😊
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Thaaat was sooo sweeet! Keeep writing moooreee! :D
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I really liked it! 😃 Loved the use rain as the backdrop to her revelation. I demand a second part to this (only if you want to though) 😆
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Originally posted by: Pooja_Ch

Hey it was vry nice... Gud job done...👍🏼

thanks
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Originally posted by: Sruthi_Virmanli

Lovelyyy!!!
Bring Virat in the next part!!
And u better pm me for the next part!! 😆

thanks
not sure about part 2
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Originally posted by: niksidfan

res ..yayy.. virman and rain..just now i wrote in some thread dat i m eagerly waiting for a rain sequence for virman and i got it..will read it in my time i.e at night..i love to read any ffs,os or ss at dat time..special addiction..i m sure it is gr8😊

Aww!! Thank soo much darling. luv u!!!
read soon nd do comeent

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