ArVi OS: Deliberations of Arjun Kirlodskar

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: cyrine
Very nice, I like your way of writing, pleae do continue!

As regards the jelousy track, I believe that is close... Arjun might callPurvi back to the office and then he wont be able to see Purvi with Vinay, if nothig else Vinay will drop purvi home, they might go to lunch together etc that will be enough to make Arjun go wild...

That is when Arjun will finally realize what his heart has been telling and how the poor heart has been suffering and have been burned over and over again when the mind i was refusing to listen or understand.

It is time for Arjuns mind to start listening to his heart and start comunicating... then will we be able to see some interesting twists and turns..

thanks for your comment...

i dont think i'd show any jealousy track coz its a one shot. and the show is already showing it..

i think it will be only upto realization

let us see.. if i continue..