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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

Nams, u r just killing me with each update.. the way Shakti was blushing, aww, i was feeling that it was me who was blushing, instead of Shakti..

(p.s: maybe i will be late to comment, as my inbox is full n i m not getting any pm)

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Nams, Meri Maa, aabto update kardo !!!*pouts* 🤔

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Preeti ArsHa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

Update please !!! despratly waiting !

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Nams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

im so sorry lovelies i was soo busy preparing the arsha OS tat i almost forgot about this... will update 2day only gimme sometime to type down 😳

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jahnavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

Will b waiting for da updt

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Nams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

CHAPTER 8

sorry for typos dint re check i wrote on the spot 😳

they say that Long Distance Relationships dont exists!! really ? i mean seriously ? ITS A BULLSHIT!! coz if u are really madly deeply in luv then distance will just the name!! it can never separate u from ur love!! well if its true luv then what does distance got to do in it ? if the love changes wid distance and time then it isnt the love at all! atleast tats what i belive in now.. yess i love kunwar from all my heart.. till i confessed love was just part of my life for me.. wether it will last long or break away was left to destiny.. but since kunwar has changed his place in my life.. my thoughts my likes my wishes have changed.. today i like what he likes even i used to dislike it once upon a time, but today i love to like his like..!!

morover i belived love is part of my life but today i can say love is my life kunwar is my life..!!!! this is the effect he created on me in the past 3 months..

no insecurities.. the same cute nok jhok of us.. those teasings.. jealousy.. care.. wishes.. dreams all existed bw us.. desperations have reached the peaks!! i am soo dieing to meet him again..

trust me i never belived in long distance relationships but today im luving it!! all credits to kunwar.. he matches his timings wid mine.. and i do the same to him.. we chat we discuss we crae for each other whole day!!!

reading those old chat msgs wenevr i miss him..

watching those intense love movies holding a ice cream can in hand and crying wenver necesaary!! gosh i have a doubt am i a teenager ???

i just praying these days to end!! pleaseee!!! and c here im !!

last 2 days in NY..

and today my final performance.. if u ask me am i nervous then ... HELLL YESSS!!!

i so wish kunwar wud be here !! damnn!!

'shakss.. its time u have jus 10 mins to go.. get readt faster..' candy blurted out as she rushed to the stage.. candy was my only friend in the academy.. she being indian never looked one.. yet she was a sweetheart.. i wished her luck and made my self towards the back stage..

*announcent fr shakti's performance*

my heart beat tightened.. for one last time i dialled his no..

*pick up pick up kunwar! dammit pick up!!! *

*the number u have called is currently swithed off please try after sumtime*

*uggghh*

i threw my fone in rage!! i needed his support i needed him dammit!!!

a wipped the lone tear wich trembled due to my nervousness.. and stiffened myself boosting confidence..

gaining back my self confidency i proudly occupied my stage..

1000's of eyes on me.. my heart beat ranging up at sky 'this is it!!! do it shaks do it prove it' my inner voice screamed as held myself straight..

5 secs to go fr the music to b played..

lights went dim.. i bowed before the lights went mild..

and now i slowly shut my eyes closed..

remembered my family like i always do.. those faces always boost my courage.. but today was different amidst those precious faces stood a cute lil hottie.. my love my knuwar .. i saw his smiling face in mind.. how i wished to see him..!! *sigh*

as i opened my eyes the music played..

song : A THOUSAND YEARS ( christina perri )

i swayed with her ballroom steps.. with evry word imagining him.. dedicating myself , my dance to him..

i landed with my last step on ground with the sweat buds dripping on the floor and breathing high..

i looked at the crowd wich was complete silent..

as the music finally halted i stood glancing at the crowd wich was in pin drop silent.. a fast sharp prick went thru my heart.. i was in state tat tears wud flood out any moment.. i shivered thinking all my efforts went in vain..

i was standing on the center of the stage completely dumbfolded glued tomy place.. a lone tear escaped from my eyes.. and i shuddered... i turned to leave

within a blink of eye i heard one single clap from whole crowd.. 'kunwar' i wispered with beat of the heart stopped for a while.. as i turned whole crowd stood in unison and showered with loud applause..

i was soo surprised.. may b my heart flew to heaven.. i cudnt hear my heart beats.. nothing i cud hear except tat loud heart full applause.. i jumped danced happily wen my rest of the friends gathered me and hugged me.. i was in real state of could 9!

nothing wud be more happier than or may b.. or may not.. but today i won!! i won my life!!!

i moved to the backstage still awestruck wid such a great response..

i headed to green room..

the happieness had no boundaries..! i was in air flying like an angel GOSH!!

now i was sure i wud stand somewer in final results.. atleast runners up.. ? but to be frank my confidence always stuck on the winner.. i was confident i wud win! i wud win thsi competition too just like DID.. but i belive everyone shud have one negative side in them wich will prevent them from having over confidence! and i do have it..

as i changed my dress into my casuals.. tat one clap amidst the 1000 audience rewinded in my ears.. i seriously dint have any clue why i called his name..!

i again took out my fone.. and dialled his no..

*ring ring*

my heart skipped a beat! finally his cell wasnt switched off!

soon i heard a caller tune..

* khuda jaane starting tune *

i froze for a moment.. fone was still ringing on my ears and on the other hand i heard a caller tune..

i jerked to look back who was in green room..

after wat i saw my fone fell off my hands..

door was pushed.. it got locked.. but seeing the sight i was numb..

Aaa aa'.

(Male)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

(Male)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya

Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai

the air stopped..

my heart beat first skipped few beats and after wich it went infinite high pace..

i forgot to blink my eyes..

few drops of tears already encircled my eyes..

nothing cud be heard except tat caller tune..

wich came from tat fine 'he' was holding..

as my gaze shifted from his hands to his arms.. and den to his face..

our eyes met..

his orbs shined admist those pearl tears wich collected in his eyes too..

and if i remember anything else than tat i was in his arms.. and song was playing.. wen it came to an end idk..

he too dropped his fone and crushed myself even harder against him.. i nudged closer..

i hugged him with all my might indicating i MISSED HIM DAMMIT!!!!!!!

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is it short ???? 🤔

do i need to give kunwar's POV ?? isnt it evident from the hints ??? 😉

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btw i have added KHUDA JANE song ( music ) in the post.. please let me know if the song is playing 🤢

Edited by nams_arsha - 14 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

res

unres

Yippie first one to comment

Awsm update dear 😊

Yup it was short in comparision with other updates of urs but never mind its amazing

Arsha hug aww luved it 😍😍😳

and ya that song isnt working no problem its fine

thanx for pm and update soon 😊

Edited by abhiyakreya - 14 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

res
unres
di its mind blowing...
loved it very much
the way u described shakti's POV...its beautiful!!
Arsha hug😍...loved it
and yes it was short when compared to the updates u give usually but never mind its amazing

Edited by lovely7010 - 14 years ago