SwaRon OS: Leave Out All The Rest

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

amazing and if u decide to continue plz pm me and i loved it espically when swayam was saying do u know what ur date intends to do?

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Wow what a beautiful piece of work . U've expresed sharon's feling so wel. Plz kep writing more os like this...

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Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Happy New Year Kankshita .. you write VERY well 😳 Its amazing how SwaRon fans actually manage to write up such long and descriptive posts / OS / FFs without Grammar police sounding their sirens from miles off .. Thank you for NOT torturing us with bad spelling/ grammar ! 😆

"Maybe you should try leaving out the rest and just stick to the part where you say you have sentiments for me"

^ OH ..

HOW I wish she would 🥺

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I can't believe Kanks that you never happened to mention that you had written such an awesome OS on Swaron! I mean seriously. how hard is it to tell? Never mind, right now I'm just glad that we made that gallery otherwise I would have never known about this.

It's always a treat to read Sharon's POV, because there is hardly ever enough of it. And the fact that YOU'VE written it is just chocolate icing on a deliciously served chocolate cake. You nailed it. This is the best explanation for why Sharon is the way she is. And even through all the name calling, its obviously brought out that she does care for him. Her jealousy, her denial and her longing, all effectively highlighted like always. This is the first work of yours on Swaron (that I've read) in which you've extended the show's version of it. And I'm really glad that you wrote it. It does explain a lot.

You know that it's very well written. And you know that it was completely in sync with her expressions. So there is no use of me repeating it. 😛

You rock, like always.

Love,
En.