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Hello guys. I am BACK with another FF on Maneet. My old FF Tere Liye was not a hit and to be honest with you I didn't like that story. It was my first time writing a story on Maneet and I didn't really know what to write about. Well now I am all set to write a new one. And I really hope, I don't disappoint you guys. So please support me on this FF as well as you did on my previous one.My heart was pinching me to write this story. I worked really hard on this story. So please like it and do comment it! Oh and yeah This story is not copied from ANYONE! Ok enough with my Buk Buk. Let me Introduce you my new FF: "Untouched Yaadain!"


Untouched Yaadain:


Part 1:
"Hello everyone!" A reporter, standing at front of a mental hospital room followed by other reporters, was saying to his camera. The whole hallway was covered with reporters who were eager to break down that mysterious door. Hidden in there is a secret of one individual who has vowed not to come out and share it.
"Kya ho sakta hai is kamre main?"
All of the reporters trying their level best to create an intense atmosphere to attract their viewers so they won't leave their seats at all. Everyone was busy either in shooting or trying to peak in that room. But all they could find was darkness. All of the sudden everyone heard a roar in that room. Like a lion's roar. But in this case it was a man's roar. The security came in.
"Excuse me! Please haitiye aap."
A security man banged the door to open it, when he opened it a man jumped on him. Like a lion trying to attack his prey. He looked like a beast. A long beard, he probably didn't shave for so long. But his hair was perfect. He was wearing a black trouser with a black shirt. All of the security men jumped on them to save the poor guy who was under the beast. A doctor came forward and gave the beast the injection which made him unconscious. 6 men then dragged him in the very same room where he burst out some minutes ago.
An 18 years old came forward where the doctor was standing, "Yeh kya huwa sir?"
"Since the day he came in this hospital, he's been trying to attack everyone, even me."
He showed her a scar on his forehead. Which made that girl gasp in horror.
"He's really an aggressive person. You should not go near him. Pata nahin aap ke saath kya karay ga."
"But sir, why is he like this?"
"He is going through depression. Something has happened in his past. Something horrible. He's holding his past tightly in his palms, which results him to act like this. The day he lets go of his past then he will be a normal person just like us."
"By the way who are you?"
"Oh. Sir I am Anjali Sharma. Just a reporter."
Saying this the doctor walks away leaving the girl in awe.
After some times the hallways finally cleared out. Nobody was there anymore. The reporters after witnessing such a horrible sight went home immediately. But the same 18 years old wearing shalwar suit entered the room. It was pitch black. But she could hear the snores of that beast.
She turned on her torch hoping enough light to make her way though the room. She then found a desk. On it was a diary.
"Yeh is ki to nahin hai?" She then heard some footsteps behind her. She quickly turned around and flashed the light in his eyes. He roared, she screamed.
"Koun ho tum?! Aur kya ker rahi ho?" His red eyes, in it anger was swimming. In any second it could come out. She quickly picked up the diary and made her way out without looking back. She could hear the roars quietly dying out behind her. Maybe she was quick enough to make the escape otherwise who knows what he could have done to her. Maybe attack her the same way he did to the poor security guard. She was in corridor now, running out of breath. She opens the diary and on the first page she saw a picture of a man. Looking handsome and clean. Looking at the camera with anger. In the captions, Maan Singh Khurana, was written.
"To yeh hain. Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. Kya ho sakta hai in ke past main jo yeh is tarha ban gaye hain."


Part 2: Page 2

Part 3: Page 4

Part 4: Page 5

Part 5: Page 7

Part 6: Page 10

Part 7: Page 11

Part 8: Page 13

Part 9: Page 14

Part 10: Page 16

Part 11: Page 17

Part 12: Page 18

Part 13: Page 19

Part 14: Page 21

Part 15: Page 23

Part 16: page 24

Part 17: Page 25

Part 18: page 27

Part 19: page 28

Part 20: Page 29

Part 21: Page 31

Part 22: Page 32



Part 25: Page 36

Part 26 (LAST PART): Page 38

Hope you all liked it. :) BTW if you want any PMs from me, so please do add me to your buddy list. Thanks! :) .Sara

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start
i hope u update it regular 😛
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amazing start
continue soon
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Amaazing👏
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amzaing concept

it remember me d movie GHAJNI

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amazing start
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Thank you all for your lovely comments. Enjoy reading this. -Sara

Untouched Yaadain:

Part 2:
That night when Anjali got home. She tried her level best to set aside the questions arousing in her mind regarding Maan Singh Khurana and his evil past. The doctor's statement, "Something has happened in his past. Something horrible. He's holding his past tightly in his palms, which results him to act like this. The day he lets go of his past then he will become a normal person just like us." His statement kept on revolving around her head. Making her just want to get up and read his diary. But due to her dean's strict rules, she must go off to sleep at 10 o'clock sharp. As she lay flat on her stomach in her little room along with her roommate Mini, she kept on revising her day in the hospital. Why was she craving to go there? She put not only her life in risk but her roommate's life too. Mini was suppose to wait for Anjali in her University's corridor. What if the dean found her there when she was suppose to be in her room sleeping? She could have gotten in serious trouble. But thank God she managed a escape from the hospital and reached there just in time before the dean does his final round in the university. Anjali's mind was filled up with confusion and some serious questions which only his diary could answer. The Dean, after his final round in the university, went back to his room to doze off. Anjali finally relieved, got up and threw everything out of her backpack to find that one and only key to her questions; his diary. She got a torch from her desk and settled on her bed to read his diary.
She flipped to the first page of his diary.
He wrote:
June 11, 2010 Monday
Aaj hamari company ko bhot nuksaan pohncha hai. Everything was going perfectly fine when the court decided to irritate me by setting a new rule. Who the hell is he to decide what can I do and what I can't. Just because of him I can't become the head of my dad's company. It was my dad's dream to see me taking his place in Khurana Constructions. Ab woh to is duniya main nahin rahay. And now I will fulfill his dream no matter what. I will become the head of this company no matter how strict the rules are. Who cares if the court said to me that I am too young to own a company. I must marry first to become the head of Khurana Constructions, this is the court's pointless rule. They say that way I would look responsible when I get married. Every man does. I am only 24 years old, old enough to handle my own responsibilities without getting married. But I can't go against the court. I have to fulfill my Dad's dream. That's why my sister, Nayantara Di is gonna find a bride for me that I can marry to become a head. I will prove to the court that I am responsible enough to own my own business. So Dad would be happy. He's not in this world so what, he will always be alive in my heart. And I just want to make him and my Di happy. They both are the most important people in my life. Let's just hope that Di finds a bride by this Friday.
-Maan Singh Khurana

Anjali flipped the page to read his next update.

He wrote: June 15, 2010 Friday
Today, Di is forcing me to go to this poor place, Hoshiyarpur, to meet about to become my bride. I am not interested in these stuff. But I can't say no to Di. I trust my Di more than anything. I just want to get married to get over this whole chaos. I don't know who she is but she must me the luckiest girl in this world to become my bride, the richest and successful businessman, living in a Mansion. She's very lucky to have me as a husband.
-Maan Singh Khurana

Anjali flipped the page again. But this time it was blank. She kept on flipping the pages hoping to find something fascinating. But nothing was found.
"What happened next? Who is that girl?" After a while she get tired of that diary, she threw it hard on her bed. Taking out her frustration. "Ab kis tarha pata karoon?" After thinking for sometime, the only solution she could find was, "Mujhay Maan Singh Khurana se dosti kerni ho gi. So he can tell me about his past. No matter how wild and aggressive he is, I won't back off. Maybe I could help him."
She fell asleep hoping the next day will bring some answers to her questions.

Part 3

Hope you all liked it. Do comment and like this post. :) BTW if you want any PMs from me, so please do add me to your buddy list. Thanks! :) .Sara
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update
loved it

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved both d parts dear!!!!
Plzzz cont soon...
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😃...sooo nysch... 😃

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