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Untouched Yaadain:

Part 20
The day went by very slow. Maan and Nayantara were busy with their lives, nobody at home except Geet. Maan busy with his office matters, while Nayantara was busy with the lawyers. Nayantara did come home for a little while but left immediately as her phone rang.
As for Geet, she was looking around in the house to find any evidence. She was very eager to find out what Nayantara was planning on doing? Normally she wouldn't really care but when Nayantara mentioned 'hiding it from Maan' phrase, Geet got cautious. She did however found the file which Nayantara was deliberately hiding last night and that pretty much summed up Nayantara's plan. But she needs proof to show it to the Akdu Khurana. He will never believe her what Nayantara is planning on doing even if he shows her the property file. How on earth will she do that?? How will she gather proofs when she can't find a single proof with an exception of that file?? She needed to think quickly. Which she shouldn't have any problems with. Her mind has become very sharp watching all those bollywood movies.
Half of the day went by, Geet was sitting in the living room, hands up on her forehead, eyes closed. She hadn't accomplished anything. This won't do it. She can't ask Maan about this and she certainly can't ask Nayantara about this either. It seemed as if all of the doors were shut on her face.
"Geet tujhe aik aisa darwaza khud banana ho ga."
After giving a much thought, she finally came up with an idea. "Of course! Pagal pehle kyun nahin socha!" She scolded herself.
Why hadn't this idea occurred to her before?? Even in the movies, the main actors do this. Salman Khan might've done it too in his movies. She got the idea of being a detective for some days. That's the only way she could find out what Nayantara is doing, since she's very tippy about her doings. Nayantara can hide her doings very quickly and precisely. So all she has to do is keep an eye on her.
For a mere second, Geet felt ashamed of what she was about to do, invading someone's personal matters. Just for a mere second. But then the thought of keeping Maan in the blues brought back her old emotions and feelings. Now 'maybe' turned into 'must' for Geet. What if Maan is in danger? According to the file and Nayantara's behavior, it show's that something big is cooking. Now all she needs to find is what kind of dish is cooking just to keep Maan safe. She felt proud of herself for thinking something like that.
"Wah Geet, tum to bhot achi detective bano gi!"

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By 8 pm, everyone was present at the dinner table. Geet had vowed not to take off her eyes off of Nayantara. Each and every action taken by Nayantara might lead her to her answers. And all the proofs that she needs will be discovered. To Geet's luck, Maan was so busy with his phone that he didn't realize Geet staring at Nayantara, otherwise he would've said something to Geet. Nayantara also failed to notice Geet's stares as she was too busy gobbling down the food. Geet realized that Nayantara was holding a file under the table and now all she needs to know is what kind of it is. Nayantara called Nakul over and told him to put the file in her room because Maan wanted to discuss something with Nayantara. Geet had a golden chance, she could sneak in to her room and read the file. But as soon as she was discharging from the table, Maan called out her name.
"Geet.. Kahan ja rahi ho??"
Geet stop. Yeh Maan bhi na abhi unko mujhe bulana tha. Main chup ke se chali jaati aur kisi ko pata bhi na chalta.
"J-ji"
"Mere liye coffee le ker aao."
Gai bhens pani main. There goes her golden chance down the drain. She didn't want to show them her angry face so she just went to the kitchen without even glancing once back at them.
"Ab kya keroon?"
For the past 15 minutes, Geet was in the kitchen thinking, leaving the pot on the stove. Apparently, she was too busy thinking that she forgot she had to make coffee for Maan. Instead she just put a pot full of water on the stove. While Maan waiting outside for his coffee and Nayantara dispersed to her room.
"Yeh ladki kahan reh gayi hai? Maine Nakul ko kyun nahin kaha?"
Did he really want to spend some quality time with her? So that's why he sent her to make coffee and not Nakul? Did he really miss her all day long that when she was leaving for her room, I made her make coffee so she will stay here a little longer?
Impatient Maan went in the kitchen to see what's taking so long. But before he entered, a scream from the kitchen alerted him. He ran in the kitchen to see what had happened. Geet standing before his eyes, while the pot fell on the floor, splashing the water everywhere. Before the hot water could reach her face, Maan jumped in, pulling her out of the way. Maan lost his balance and fell to the floor, pulling Geet along with him. She landed on top of him. In this matter, she should've gotten off of him immediately or he should've pushed her off of him. But neither of them did anything of that sort. It was as if they have transformed into a statue, neither of them moving. Just staring at each other. Geet had forgot what she was thinking about and Maan had also forgot why he was here in the kitchen. All they could see was each other, dwelling into each other's eyes. He was staring so much at Geet that she felt as if his eyes could see his soul. And the same goes for Maan. How could they pretend that they hate each other when their heart crave for each other? Unaware to Geet, she slowly moved her hands towards the boiling hot pot. Geet was slowly coming back to her senses and accidentally she banged her hand against the boiling hot pot. And then the scream brought Maan back to his senses. Geet quickly sat down next to Maan, massaging her hand and trying not to scream at the sudden pain going up and down her hand. Maan quickly took her hand into his, slowly massaging it and blowing on it. That did slowly soothed the pain. Seeing Maan's concerned face, Geet's heart wouldn't stop its thumping. She was surprise he couldn't hear it! How could he not? Can he? Is he just ignoring it?
"It's okay. Main theek hoon."
That did it, "Theek ho? Tumhara dimaagh kharab huwa huwa tha?! Itni garam pot uthane ki kya zaroorat thi? There's something called tong, banda us se utha ta hai. Geet tum pagal ho gayi thi!"
Ok he was overreacting just a little. Ok maybe a lot. Itni chooti si ghalti ke liye is tarha ka reaction. When she looked down at her hand, the redmark that was formed was still there. She was surprised she was not screaming anymore!
"Maan, main seriously theek hoon."
"Geet tum to apna khayal kerti nahin ho. But main ab tumhara khayal rakhoon ga."
Too late, those words left his mouth before he could gulp them back down. How on earth will he explain this to her now? He reminded himself to slap himself after he gets away from this situation. He did promise himself to hide his feelings and yet here he was again, expressing his feelings. As for Geet, she looked him innocently trying to reach the depth of his words. Did he really mean that? But how can she believe him this time? He always end up changing his words, anyway. Annoyed, she jerks her hand away from his hold, stands to leave.
"Isi kya ho gaya?" Maan wonders.
Geet leaves the kitchen, not caring that her wound has yet not been healed. But this wound was nothing compare to the one buried inside her. She is not falling for his words again. Maan suddenly grips her hand and jerks her back, pulling her towards a wall. She tried to escape but his two muscular arms wouldn't let go of her. She gave in.
"Aap ko kya chahiye?"
"Jawab."
"Kounsa?"
"Geet. Tum achanak kyun uth ke chali gayi thi?"
She stayed silent.
"Geet answer me." He demanded but in a calm voice.
Geet hesitated but finally got the courage to speak. "Kyun ke I don't know how to react to your words. I don't know main aap ki baaton ka kya matlab nikalon. Kabhi kuch kehte ho aur kabhi kuch aur. I just don't understand you. Aur shaid kabhi ker bhi nahin paoon gi."
She blurted out too fast. There was a dead silence in the kitchen. Geet now regretting saying that and she was feeling very awkward with this silent. She was waiting for him to burst out, taking out his anger. But before even giving him a chance to speak, she pushed him back and ran away from there. Maan just stood there, dumbfound. She was right, he concluded. She is right everytime. It's just him and his feelings that cross their path eveytime. How he wished he could control them! But he didn't have the power. With each day passing, his feelings were getting out of hand. What an unfortunate that the girl, who showed him the way of life, can't be his. He can't be mendling with his feelings anymore. Once they are hidden, they should always be hidden. Even living in different rooms brought them together. Maybe staying away from her is the best choice after all. He decided to stay in a hotel room for a lil while, just so he can take some time off of this hysteria. He left to pack his belongings.

The next day Geet woke up with a headache. Last night was again something that shouldn't have happened. Maybe she should get used to it. Whenever they are together, they share an awkward moment and then end up in a fight. She cried herself to sleep. Her eyes were red from all the crying. Oh God, it is really hard to hide her feelings! And then she realized that today too, just like any other day, she would have to face him, maybe spend some time, fight, and like usual end her day with crying. For how long will this go on?
After some time, she gathered some confidence and left downstairs to make breakfast. Nakul was already there, busy with his morning rituals. Geet quietly went up and started to make coffee for Maan. Nakul saw her doing this and objected, "Geet madam, yeh sab kerne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai." Geet raised her brow. "Kyun?"
"Saab subha subha kahin chale gaye hain apne suitcase ke saath."
He left? So early? Where? Without telling her? Instead of telling her he found it righteous to tell Nakul. But again they don't have that kind of a relationship where he would tell her these kind of things. But where did he go? Suddenly? Oh God, first she was feeling awkward with his presence and now that he left, she misses him. What is wrong with her? She has surely lost her mind. Though Geet acted as if she didn't care, but from inside she wanted to have her answers. She asked Nakul, if he knows anything. He said no. "Aap saab ko kyun nahin call ker lete. Waise jab woh ja rahe the tab unke chehre pe ghussa tha." Geet had been right, he changed again. After what he said, he was again angry. How can she trust his words when he himself doesn't really follow them. She got hurt last night, and he didn't even bother to check on her. She made the right decision to not believe him. But what he did right now was eating her from inside. Why did he suddenly leave? Should she call him? A good wife would do that. She was so confused. In the end, she took Nakul's advice to call him. She did though hesitated but then called anyway.
Rrrinnngg
No answer. She tried it again.
Still answer. She has lost the count on how much she probably called him.
"Woh phone kyun nahin utha rahe."
Then suddenly he called back. Uhh finally!
"Hello? Maan? Aaap kahan ho? Itni calls ki mainain."
"Hello ma'am." Came a heavy male voice. That was not Maan.
"Maan kahan hain?"
"Woh actually apna phone office chod gaye hain. But I know he went on a business trip to Italy. Woh 1 week main aa jain gain." Satisfied Geet hung up after nodding.
But the guy had to lie to Geet, thanks to Maan. He didn't want her to know that he was staying at a hotel so he asked one of the housekeeper to answer the phone and lie.
Now that Geet can think straight she went on her quest to find more evidence, or in particular that file which Nayantara told Nakul to put it in her room last night. Since she's not at home, Nakul is in his room, and now that Maan is gone too, this is the golden opportunity.
She sneaks in Nayantara's room, turns on the light and tip toes to the side table. She opens the first drawer, no luck. She does remember that the color of the file was red. She opens the second drawer, and still no luck.
After 10 minutes or so, she has turned the whole room upside down, just in search of that one file. And then she spots it in the closer, under some supposed clothes that were suppose to hide it. She quickly grabs it and opens it. And what came next shook her inside out. As if the sky has fallen on top of her.
-The End-


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Edited by sara_06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow soo sweet and waiting to know wat is in the file
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet detective😆😆😆
maaneet love each other but they r behaving like a dumbo😡
grrr😡😡😡😡ye naintara ki to main😡😡😡
what is she planning ki geet ko detective banna par gaya
thnx for pm
cont soon
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kahi naintara maan ko marne ka plan to nahi kar rahi he
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awesome update
both of them always misunderstood each-other silence
ab ye NT ne kya plan kiya hai jisse dekhr geet shocked ho gyi???
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fabulous update.please try to update soon
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Superb parts.
Maaneet ki duri kb khtam hongi. Aur geet ko kya huya h, why she is running from own feeling.
Aur present me geet kaha h.
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Sorry for keeping you wait guys! :(
Enjoy! Do leave your comments and likes! :) .Sara



Thank you guys for your lovely comments! :)
Untouched Yaadain:

Part 21
what came next shook her inside out. As if the sky has fallen on top of her.
Maan's death plan, Written on top of that file. She had nearly lost her balance but quickly got hold of herself. She didn't know Nayantara was this cheap. She is plotting to kill her own brother! How could she? Geet didn't waste any minute and read the whole file, not missing a single word. According to the file, Nayantara was planning on killing her brother for the sake of the property. And not just a sudden death but a painful, lasting death. Tears were crawling out of her eyes. Good thing she saw Nayantara's true face before her eyes, otherwise who knows what she would've done to her Maan. She need to tell this to Maan quickly as possible. But he was not at home! And this couldn't wait a single moment. This is a matter of life and death. How could she fail to see such a devilish character of Nayantara all along this time? How did he not find out! Her heart was thumping. Suddenly she wanted to see Maan, hold him, just to be sure if he really is okay. Then it her, Maan was not at home and so is not Nayantara. Is she about to...?? No it can't be. She ran to call Maan. That guy had said he was in Italy but then she couldn't wait any longer! She tried his cell number. No answer. She tried it again. No answer. She kept on trying until she lost control and burst out crying.

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Why is Geet calling me? To her I was in"fictional" Italy. Then why?
Maan was laying on the bed when Geet started calling. He didn't want to pick up her call. Did she find out that I was lying? That I am not in Italy? A part of him didn't want to answer and the other part of him did. What if it is a serious problem? Di wouldn't be at home either. Oh God, what shall I do? His phone was still ringing. This has been the 20th time his phone rang. And Geet's name kept on popping on his caller id. That's it! Annoyed Maan finally picked up his phone.
"What is it Geet!?"
A broken weak voice replied.
"Maan? Aap kahan ho?" But Maan decided to ignore it!
"What do you mean main kahan hoon? Bataya nahin hai ke main..."
"Maan aap jaldi ghar aa jaye! Abhi isi waqt! Please!" Geet said cutting him. She was too impatient.
"What nonsense!"
"Please Maan. Mera dil ghabra raha hai! Please come home right now!"
And then a thrashing noise over the phone alerted Maan. The phone got disconnected, leaving Maan in worries and awe.
Maan came running out of the room, without his luggage. Maan kept on scolding himself. He regretted that he hadn't picked up her call sooner.

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Geet was talking to him perfectly, well despite her freaking out and crying her balls out. But she was about to convince him to come home when she got weak in the legs and fell, knocking the flower vase on the table on her way down. Oh great! What a convincing job she have done! She had made a fool out of herself.
The vase was broken and one of the piece had fallen on Geet's feet, wounding her. She had no strength to get up. She just sat there, massaging her feet when the main door burst open. Geet was startled to see Maan running to her. He quickly took her feet in his palms and started to blow on it. While Geet sat in awe. She was trying to differentiate between her day dreaming and the reality. Is he real?
"Maan? Aap real ho na?" Geet said while sobbing.
"Nahin! Main tumhare khayalat se neekal ke bahar aaya hoon."
"Aisa bhi hota hai??"
Maan raised his eyebrows. Oh God, this girl!
"Geet obviously I am real! And I can see ke tum bhot badi bewakoof ho."
"What did i do?"
Maan raised her feet a little higher in order to indicate what she has done to deserve that statement.
"Geet main tumhe thodi dair chod ke gaya tha aur yeh halat tumne apni bana bhi li hai?"
Geet looks down, not meeting his eyes, too embarrassed.
"Geet look at me while I am talking to you."
Geet slowly lifts her face up to meet his eyes. And then it hit her. Nayantara's plan!
She jerked her feet away from his hold, stood up quickly.
"Maan! Thank God you are fine! Main itna dar gayi thi!! You have no idea!" She held on to his shirt's collar in worry. Maan was in awe with her sudden behavior.
"What are you talking about? Of course I am fine! Mujhe kya ho na hai?"
A tear makes it way out of her eye. Maan notices it and holds her hands.
"Geet kya baat hai?"
"Maan aap ki jaan khatre main hai." Geet slowly brings out the truth. Maan chuckles.
"What nonsense! Aur koun mujhe maarna chahe ga?"
Geet was suddenly scared to tell him the truth. She's about to reveal his sister's true identity. How will he react? What will he say? But she has to say it! For his own good! She must do this!
"Maan..."
"Geet bolo na. Koun mujhe maarna chahe ga?"
"N-Nayantara Di. Woh aap ki saari property laina chahti hain and so woh aap ko maarna chahti hain." She quickly spits out the truth. She doesn't know why she called her 'Di'. She surely doesn't deserve to be called that. Maan suddenly lets go of her hands and pushes her away, not caring where she lands and he himself takes some steps back.
Geet is startled. Oh God! What should she do now since she has already spilled the beans.
"How dare you!" Geet got scared hearing his strong manly yell. Geet steps back. He turned into something different. Anger was filled in his eyes.
"Maan meri baat suniye!"
"Geet! Maine tumhe pehle din se kaha tha ke meri Di ke baare main tumne kuch ulta kaha to main yeh bilkul bardasht nahin keroon ga!"
"P-per Maan.."
"Get out." These words shook Geet inside out. Did she heard him right?
"Kya?"
"I said Get out of my house!" Geet just stood there dumbfound. His life is in danger, how can she leave? Maan saw her not moving, so he went to her room, to pack her stuff. He couldn't stand her here any longer. How dare she? And what was I thinking?? Liking her? What a big fool! All she wanted was money! And now she's going to go to an extend blaming his Di? He couldn't take it!
He opened the door in rage, slamming the suitcase down and throwing whatever he could get his hands on. Meanwhile, Geet stood there, tears flowing down her cheeks. Not because he told her to leave but because she's having hard time saving his life. Suddenly, a sudden force was pulling her towards the door. She look up, seeing Maan with her suitcase, pulling her.
"Maan.. Maan! Please meri aik dafa baat suniye! Please!" Maan suddenly stops, turning around with anger.
"What?! What's there more to talk about! Tumne to aaj sari hadein paar ker din! Ab koun sa ilzam lagana baki reh gaya hai??"
Suddenly Geet found the proof.
"Mere paas proof hai! I can show it to u!" Maan rolled his eyes and sighed.
"Haan Maan I have a proof. Mere paas evidence hai! Kahan rakh diya maine? Oh right! Di ke room main. Aain main aap ko dikhati hoon."
She took Maan's arm in her hand and pulled him towards Nayantara's room. She went near the closet where she left the file, but nothing was there. She looked all over the place. She was pretty sure that she left it here when she had went to the living room to call Maan.
"Kahan chala gaya? Idher hi to tha.."
"Stop it Geet. Just stop! Apne jhoot ko cover kerne ki koshish na kero! What?! Meri life ko Di se khatra hai? Cause woh meri property laina chahti hain?! How lame!"
Geet was so lost in her thoughts. Trying to put the pieces together of the puzzle. Where did the file go?
"Geet. Is se pehle main kuch keroon, get out! Now! Woh raha darwaza, yeh raha bag, Get out!"
"Nahin." She couldn't just leave.
"Kya?"
"Main nahin jaon gi." Maan closed his eyes and took in a deep breath.
"Aur yeh tumhe kis ne kaha?" Maan was trying really hard to keep in his anger. But this girl was testing his patience.
"Maan.. Main aap ko is situation mai nahin chod ke ja sakti. Especially when I know ke aap ki zindagi ko khatra hai."
"Enough! Enough with your lies! Mujhe tumhari true intentions ka pata chal gaya hai! Ander se kuch aur bahar se kuch aur!"
"True intentions?"
"Haan! Tum pehle din se meri property ke peeche thi na. And now you went to an extend, blaming my Di for your wrongdoings. Tumhare dil mai chor hai Geet. Oh now I get it, Is liye mere kareeb aati rehti thi! Tumhare liye to koi problem nahin ho gi na! Tumse shaadi ho gayi hai, tumhara husband hoon! Yehi to golden chance hai na tumhara! Mujhe batao! Mujhe batao tumhe kitne paise chahiye meri zindagi se jaane ke liye! Main tumhe doon ga!!" He blurted everything out that he was holding in. Geet's heart broke into million of pieces. How could he? How dare he? So this is what he thinks of me?!
"Kya?"
"Tumhe yeh sab kerne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai! Main tumhe paise daita hoon aur dafa ho jao yahan se! Chali jao meri aur meri Di ki zindagi se!"
"Maan!" That was it! No matter how much she wanted to stay here and protect him, he has hurt her pride! How can she stay now.
"Kya huwa Geet? Sach hamesha kadwa lagta hai."
"Mujhe nahin rukna ab yahan pe! Main to bas aap ki madat ker rahi thi!"
Though she was limping the whole time because of the wound she got from the vase earlier but she still didn't stay back. Her foot was still bleeding. But amidst all of this, she had forgotten about her wound. The wound he had given her was greater than this one. Maan saw her limping and his heart skipped a beat. As if he wanted to stop her, heal her. But he stood there, watching her leave. Before exiting the house, Geet stops.
"Meri baat yaad rakhiye ga. Main is dafa gayi to kabhi wapis nahin aaon gi. Aur jab aap ko yeh sach pata chal jaaye na to mujhe na dhoodna.." Before leaving, she prays for Maan's safety in her heart. And she exits.
"Koun kis ko dhoonde ga?" Maan chuckles, but from inside he knew he was dying. She was leaving and he didn't want her to go. But she had crossed the limits. Going so much against his Di? How can she say something like that? Maan, it's time to forget her! Maan leaves to his room. Meanwhile, Nayantara comes out of the bathroom, holding the file in her hands and smirking.
"Chchch. Bichari Geet. Chali thi mera pardafash kerne. Huh. Khair aik kaanta to nikal gaya. Bas doosre ki bari hai."
-The End-

Part 22: Page 32

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Edited by sara_06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional update geet maan ko nayantara ka such batane ki koshish karti hai par maan uski baat manta nahi hai.geet ko jate huwe dekh kar maan dukhi to hota hai par use rokta nahi hai...ab kya hoga? Maan ko jaldi sab pata chal jaye aur nayantara ka parda faas ho jaye...
Waiting for next
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superb update
geet shouldn't leave that file in NT's room
n maan throw her out of d house but he is going to regret this decision later

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