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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys i am back with another OS...yes i know i have to update my FF but trust me i got some ajr time and study issues...its been two weeks since i wrote anything so today felt like writing something and this came out...i started writing without a proper story line in mind and this is the out come i do not know how this is that's what you people will tell me...anyways here it is enjoy...

Siempre Tu

She stepped into the CD-shop with a soft smile playing on her lips. Her friends entered right behind her and she high fived one of the girls as she whispered something in her ears. Her personality was enchanting; every boy standing there would have been bewitched by the smile dancing on her lips. And every girl would have bee jealous of her beauty. She was not enjoying all the attention she was getting. She turned heads it was nothing new for her but right now she stood there with bored and somewhat worried expression on her face. Her hair was shoulder length which was half curled and she was wearing a baby pink knee length dress with 6 inch stilettos. She looked as if God himself had carved her to remind people the definition of "beauty"

"hey Sharon!...I am going over there it'll take two minutes only I promise why don't u go and buy some CDs for urself" said rey while pointing towards a stack of CDs. Sharon passed him a smile and nodded then she herself walked towards a stack of CDs. She walked by few stacks and then stopped in front of one huge stack. She looked upwards and it was labeled "Bollywood Hits." She looked on her left side and then on her right side and after making sure that no one was looking she took out a CD and then read the list of sings written on the back. A smile formed on her lips and her eyes sparkled as she continued to go through the list clearly the signs that the CD was indeed one of her favorites. Then suddenly she heard one of her friends call out her name and she hastily tried to stuff the CD back in which caused some CDs to fall down and quickly bent down annoyed at herself to pick them up. She grabbed as many as she could at a time and then when she moved back upwards she saw two pairs of breathtaking eyes staring in her own through the vacant space created by the falling CDs. She was not able to look away. She couldn't help but stare in the pairs of gorgeous chocolate brown eyes. His gaze was playing havoc on her senses and she couldn't help but adore the pool of innocence in them. She had never seen anything so beautiful before. She felt like melting in his eyes as an alien feeling slowly crept in her body and her heart did an unusual dance. She didn't want to look away it was as if the world around her had slowly vanished in thin air and all there was left were these gorgeous pairs of eyes for her to stare. She had surrendered even before putting up a fight, all the walls that she had built around her heart, came crashing down and she became captive of this unknown person's gaze.

The time for her had stopped and she seemed to be in another world. She was brought back to reality when her friend yelled "SHARON!!...it's 12 o'clock….ur parents will be home any time and if they found out that u sneaked out to party with us then they are gonna like ground u for forever." Her own eyes now widened in shock and the CD she was holding in her left hand fell down along with the number of CDs she was holding in her right hand. Without wasting anymore second and looking behind she ran outside. While someone walked towards the CDs lying on the floor and bent down to pick them up. He moved his hand forward and picked up a specific CD lying there, after that he left.

6 months later…..

"OMG sharon I am so glad u finally made it to the party!" said Simmi happily and gave her a side hug while continuing "and OMG Sharon you look absolutely fabulous….I really love ur Juliet costume…no one could have carried it the way u do" Sharon smiled at her. She was wearing a beautiful white full length frock which hugged her delicate body outlining her perfect figure and her face was covered with a matching white colored mask. rinni said "hope u will find ur Romeo here" Sharon shook her head at rinni and couldn't help but remember the man with those marvelous eyes. She had spent hours thinking how handsome the man himself will be if his eyes were so beautiful. She hadn't realized that rinni and simmi had already left with Amar and Nilesh and she was standing alone now. She turned around to see where everyone is but couldn't find anyone. She turned back and then the magical moment happened and she found herself starring back in those gorgeous pair of eyes

He heard some people laughing as he continued to read the list of songs on the back of CD. He didn't bother and continued searching for the right CD but when he saw almost everyone turning their heads at least once in a particular direction. So curiosity got the best of him and he also turned his head in that direction, then he was not able to turn his head back. He saw what he can describe in words. There stood a girl no less than an angel. He was not the one who would waste his time starring at random girl but there was something different about this girl. Something he had never seen before. He heart was suddenly beating wildly in his chest and he didn't know why but his lips curved into a smile seeing the smile dancing on her lips. Then he heard her friend call her name "hey Sharon!...I am going over there it'll take two minutes only I promise why don't u go and buy some CDs for urself" so the angel's name was Sharon. He quietly walked with her keeping his distance sketching an unforgettable memory of her each and every move. He followed to the stand where all the bollywood CDs were kept making sure she does not see him. he stood on opposite side of the stand and kept looking at her. They way she looked here and there and made sure no one sees her in front of this sand clearly told him that she liked bollywood stuff was supposed to be a secret. He smiled at her as she excitedly looked at the CD and then someone again called her and she tried shoving the CD back in but instead more CDs fell down and she bent down. She suddenly vanished in front of his eyes and his feet involuntary moved forward to again catch a glimpse of her and the next thing he knew he was being held hostage by her gaze. He was only able to see her eyes throw the gap created by the falling CDs and it was most pure thing he had ever seen. Her eyes held the purity in them which told how beautiful her soul will be. He knew he could never get enough of her so he just kept starring in her eyes for as long as it was written in his fate. Then suddenly her friend called her and she ran away from him. Though he took a few steps forward to stop her he knew he won't be able to stop her she was already gone. So he just picked up the CD which had earlier won her heart.

This time she didn't lose the opportunity and looked at his face too noticing each and every detail. He was wearing a black dress which clearly told that he was the Romeo of the party. His own face was covered with a black mask and his eyes held her yet again captive of them. He moved his hand forward asking her hand for dance saying "I am swayam, can I have the pleasure of having this dance with u?" she under a spell casted by him and gave her hand in his without thinking twice saying "I am Sharon and yes u can" he smiled and pecked her hand. His lips made contact with her skin and she felt a shiver run down her spine. The same alien feeling knocked on the window of her heart.

The music started playing and their bodies moved in synchronization with each other. If she was the queen of dancing then he was no less than the king of dancing. Their bodies kept moving together along the music and they soon forgot the world around. Their dance was graceful, calm and passionate at the same time. Both were dancing so flawlessly and comfortably with each other that it seemed as if they were made to dance with each other. Then the song ended and they realized that everyone else had stopped dancing and they were the centre of attention now. Everyone clapped for them and soon she was surrounded by her friends while he disappeared into the crowd.

She excused herself and went to look for him. Then she came outside and spotted him standing on the gazebo with her back facing him. She slowly walked towards him and he knew the moment she stepped in the gazebo that she was here. She was wearing the same perfume. The fragrance which made him dislike all the other fragrances in the world how could he forget it. He turned around even before she could say anything and they stood there for a moment lost in each other's presence. There was no light outside just the moonlight which was doing its work effectively. She moved towards him and stopped only a few steps from him. Then she took of her mask and her hair which was held in his place due to the mask started floating in air as the wind played with it. His breath was stuck on his throat he could not believe his eyes or the fact that anyone could be so inhumanely beautiful. She slowly extended her hands forward and grabbed the mask which hid his face from her. She gently took it off and he closed his eyes. After removing it she took as step back to catch full view of him and he gently opened his gorgeous eyes again. She drew in a deep breath as she starred shamelessly at the most beautiful human she had ever laid her eyes on. She was not able to do or say anything but simply take in his each and every feature. He slowly took a step towards her and tucked a strand of her lose hair behind her ear and then gently stroked her cheek. While asked him "what have you done to me?" he smiled at her and replied "I don't know…maybe something similar to what you have done to me!" she smiled at him and he smiled back at her as they locked their gaze once again. That was it, they did not need any more words to talk. Their eyes had been doing the talking ever since they met and allowed them to continue.

P.S: Siempre tu means "always you" n Spanish...why did name..i was listening to the song named "siempre tu" so decided to make this the title as i couldn't think of anything else😆 ...so hope it was not boring and you guys enjoyed reading it...do leave ur feedback and hit the button..it means alot.

thanks

-Baz

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have no words.. this is going down as my favourite OS n its gonna take some brilliant out-of-this-world writing to tk this crown away.. cant even begin to say how much i loved this.. n if this is the outcome when u dont hv a proper storyline in mind i wish u nvr hv one whenevr u start an OS henceforth.. :P :D thanks for the amazing past 10mins!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Baz this was just so simple... elegant... and beautiful... loved it and enjoyed sooo much while reading it ... and please update ur FF when time allows...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super awesome os baz !!
beautifully written 😊 totally loved it .
its amazing how swaron first met at a cd shop and then at a party dressed as romeo-juliet 😳 DESTINY .
fantasti piece of writing 😃
thanks for the pm.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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its beautiful...yess they dont need words...their eyes says it all...totally lost into it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u left me speechless
this os was mesmerizing no doubt the best i ever read
no hug no kiss but still i felt the love and passion
amazing storyline
the scene where they danced i can totally visualize it
u nailed it
i can keep on blabbering but still not tell how much i like this os
exceptionally beautiful writing👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

tight hugs 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was a pleasure reading this. Loved it.
Very simple yet magnificent in every way.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I got an SMS someday back which aptly goes for this OS - A heart beat is excited more when eyes start looking at someone silently but life seems to be more exciting when someone start reading those eyes silently. Awesome OS Baz. Simple yet magical.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I was really really missing ur writing so that in itself was a thrill for reading this OS...u make even simple things sound so enormous & magnificient thru ur writings...the wordplay that u indulge in ... the event that u make out of simple incidents...the ease with which u make romance sound so passionate...the way u make Swaron the most beautiful couple in the world ...that makes ur writing a league of its own 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was amazingly beautiful baz...loved it...loved the way you explained each and every moment...it was just super awesome...

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