SS- Chura Lo Na Dil - (part6,pg 15) 25th july

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys ! I am die heart fan of kmh & arjuhi like you.. SILENT reader of this forum for long time ! I have read almost all the master pieces present here ! all the brilliant writers here are source of my inspiration and also my Best Best Buddy !! yes my buddy MAHII.
We are BEST FRIENDS.She was forcing me to be active on IF. just thought to pen down my talent .HOPE YOU LIKE.DO COMMENTS.


It had just stopped raining and now the sun rays were pridely touching the breath taking and heavenly nature down on the earth. after the downpour, a sense of joy was sensed everywhere. this was the scene on the earth where everyone was busy enjoying the blessing but somewhere above in the sky, the destiny was smiling proudly, becoz in a few moments , whatever was written for THEM was going to come true.

THEY , who had their own lives, their own roads were about to travel in the same train of life which would lead them to their DESTINATION. Yeah THEY. =) ARJUN AND AROHI.

It was the city of Mumbai, where the union of rain and happiness had taken place and now it was the time for the union of two beautiful souls.

after enjoying the rain, in the afternoon All the people were now upto their afternoon nap now. the hustle bustle of the city died down. The streets had become empty now.

IN a street of mumbai, there was a house where it was very peaceful. the family was a perfect ne and they had everythng. a perfect family bonding,free from all the xtra worldly tentions, a prosperous house, all the modern household accesories, in short they had everythng they lnged for, be it the material thngs or the emotional bonding. in the afternoon after enjoying the lunch in rainy weather, the head of the family siddharth Ahluwalia and his wife geet headed towards their room for some rest. their 20 year old young son Sanchit was off to gym and their elder 21 year old daughter Arohi went to kitchen to wash the lunch dishes and do some household chores. Just as she was about to finish of washing the dishes , she heard door bell ring. she kept the dishes in the basin and turned out of the kitchen to open the door. usually she used to peek through the eye piece hole to see who it was but dont know why today she just went humming her fav song towards the main door and without thinking she opened the door.

As she opened the door , what she saw were two tall men standing, Their faces hidden behind black masks, only their eyes were visible. one of them had black eyes, And the other had deep brown chocolate coloured eyes. both of them were holding gun in their hand. Arohi wasnt able to figure out what was happening when the man wid brown eyes took hold of her hand and pushed her inside the house covering her mouth wid the other hand. the other man followed him inside. Arohi was struggling hard under him but his grip was too tight to let her go. Arohi bit his hand with her Sharp teeth and he let her go wid an OUCH. "kaun...kaun ho tm? kia chahiyai tmhain?" the other man " ai larki , chup chap hamain tijori ki chabiyon ka pata bata?" Arohi:" tijori ?" the other man "ziada ban mat ab . hamain sb pata hai k tere baap nai teri shadi aur tere bhai ki parhai k liye jo pesa bachaya hai woh us tijori main hai. " Arohi got frightened remembering about which "tijori" they were speaking. she quickly turned around to go to her room and call the police when her hand got caught by the men and he turned her around roughly towards him. she got collided with the hard wall. an ocean on chocolate eyes were trying to drown her within the storm which was producing within them. the brown eyes looked in her eyes wid rage. Arohi had never in her life seen anythng like this. Arohi " kia kr rahai ho? choro mera hath. mai... main police ko bulaonge...". he" bula lo" Arohi " main ... main chil.launge bht zoor sai , choro mera hath". he " chil.la lo". "jo krna hai karo ARJUN kisi sai nahe darta"...

HEaring the noises outside , sidhart and geet woke up and came out of their room, they were surprised to see the two masked man, one of which was holding their daughter's hand. sidhart came shouting towards arjun but was interupted by the other man. geet helplessly cried on the situation. Arjun to the other man " michael is budhay aur iski biwi dono k hath bandh do. " watching his hand where Arohi had bit him, he said "tmhain tou main baad main daikh lunga , pehlai mjhai tijori tak le chalo. " with that he let go of her. Arohi watched her tied down parents. tears which were an evidence of the feeling that she could do nothing now. her father who had spent almost half of his life working to secure his chidren's future was now going to get robbed. She felt like a helpless creature. what to do. where to get help from... but wait she was ,Arohi Ahluwalia, the one who is not used to of giving up so easily. the one who can come across any difficulty for her family. she couldnt give up. she thought about many ways which could get them out of this helpless situation. Arjun voice stopped her train of thoughts " ab tm chal rahe ho or else?" with that he pointed his gun towards her parents..Arohi :" tijori upar walai room main hai, likin aik baat yad rakhna agar mere parents ko kuch hua tou ..." Arjun eyes darkened. no one ever dared to threaten arjun and here a girl, a girl was threatening him. he leaned closer to her and in a deceptively calm voice he said" aur agar tmnai chalaki dikhai tou ... " with that he skimmed his fingers alongside her face. Arohi looked at him wid disgust. "michael tm in dono pai nazar rakho, main ata hun" ...with that Arjun put his gun on Arohi's right arm and Arohi walked and took him upstairs. they went to the first right room. it was a girly room which left no doubt to Arjun that it was Arohi's room. 'iskai kamrai mai tijori? iskai?" Arohi was actually trying to fool arjun by bringing him to wrong room . but she didnt hav idea whom she was fooling. "tijori kahan hai?" "woh, woh us cupboard main hai" "cupboard ki chaabi? " "yeh lo" Arohi handed the keys to Arjun and he turned to the cupboard. Arohi got a chance, she ran grabbed a vase from the side table and was about to hit Arjun when he turned around, got hold of her wrists and backed her against the wall. "kaha tha na main nai. koi chalaki nahe ". "choro mjhai. plz chalai jao merai ghar se" with that she started struggling against him. she hit him everywhere she could. on his face on his chest. then suddenly everythng happened so quickly, her hands came up to his face and she pulled of his mask. Arjun never expected her to do this. with one strong jerk he pulled Arohi towards him but he couldnt maintain the balance so both of them fell down on floor with Arjun on top of Arohi.


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AAKMH2 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me 1st 😉

hv commented...scroll pg. down 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcum 2 our forum!!! coming bck 2 d ss.. it was jst brilliantly written.. jst lovd d concept.. is arjun a gunda? bt dese gundas vil nvr make a mistake f telin der names in 4rnt f othrs.. it seems lyk a mystery.. plz add me in ur pm list.. update asap..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Freaking awesome start!!

You proved you're mahi's friend! Haha!!

Welcome to our Forum!!

Btw.. your name? :D

i'm Varshini! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting to listen what happened next...

as Varshi said u proved ur self as Mahi's friend with first part itself..now next you need to update as frequently as Mahi's 😉, no one can beat her in that
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome my angel 🤗

hello my buddies.. as she already gave her intro..she is my special friend. no classmate,no busmate, v r kmh mate. buht lambi story hai will tell u later 😆 ❤️


she iz da biggest lazy here..1 year hogya phr bhi newbie...

welcome her warmly... she iz so creative & adorable friend u will surely love her & her work ❤️




oops meri jaan bhi hai.. i forgt 😆


what a story...m in love wid it <3

aage kya hoga 😲

do jaldii updt jali

luv u my ash
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Posted: 13 years ago
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whoaaa mahi's frnd!!!!You sure hav provd dat!!!!!I jst read d cmmnts till nw and already can c hw brilliant u are!!!!I am gonna read it nw and tel u hw is it!!!!And btw welcum 2 d forum dear!!!!
Omg Mahi she is a newbie since 1 year😲matlab actually i am newer dan her😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -vrshn-

Freaking awesome start!!

You proved you're mahi's friend! Haha!!

Welcome to our Forum!!

Btw.. your name? :D

i'm Varshini! :)



lolx... i never told my friends about my writing. she iz da one who guess herslf

she iz ash 😊

menr tumhari itni baatien ki hai us se..she knw u 😉 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: piamist

waiting to listen what happened next...


as Varshi said u proved ur self as Mahi's friend with first part itself..now next you need to update as frequently as Mahi's😉, no one can beat her in that



yup me toi waiting 😉

haha... gud u r challengng her. she iz so lazy 😆

chli adh v will see now 😆

thanks 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

whoaaa mahi's frnd!!!!You sure hav provd dat!!!!!I jst read d cmmnts till nw and already can c hw brilliant u are!!!!I am gonna read it nw and tel u hw is it!!!!And btw welcum 2 d forum dear!!!!
Omg Mahi she is a newbie since 1 year😲matlab actually i am newer dan her😆




m too so happy 😊

kb se bool rhi thi ab ja kr meri baat mani hai...

haha.. sb ko lg rha hai phr to sch men kuch similar hoga..bt swear i dnt knw about dis at all.
its all her creation 👏

yup sge uz.. also she was silent reader of my work... us ko pta hi nhi tha it was me 😆

bt phr bhi us ne guess kr lya tha.. 😛

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