*KR* OS~ Love - Hell /Heaven ? Update 4 @ page 33

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"* Love - Hell / Heaven ?? *"

S U R P R I S E EEE...

This OS is written by me and special help thanks to pasto darling(upasna_mishti). Luv ya darls..🤗

Without you this OS wouldn't be possible...😳

Yeah people all heard me right !😃
It's a Surprise OS for u all and that to exclusively on *kriyaansh*...😳

This OS is strictly of two parts...😈

In this OS,you all will find interesting as it's a horror one and full on suspenses.(as am great at giving suspenses..Lollx).😆

Ummm...and this is my 3rd work here !!!
Hope,the way you all liked my last two works,you will like this one too !!!😳

On the spot likh ri hun so pls spelling mistakes ko ignore krein...

So,enjoy reading guyyyz !!!😃

Points to be seen :-

-> Say No To *RES* Statements.😡
-> Sorry if this title was used before.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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DATE :30th October

Rey-No...This is not good ! Not at all good...
Suggest something extra-ordinary,something thrilling and Amazing !!!

Lauren-But sir...Yeh title will be really good for ur upcoming movie...
Romantic and serene...!!! It will be just like ur other movies...
And trust me sir,you will again rock with the romantic movie as all the youngsters and youth are a big fan of ur writing skills as well as ur deadly looks..
U are among the best romantic script writers of 21st century ! *grinning*

Rey-Lauren...*holding him by his shoulders*
Listen to me very carefully boy.! You are not seeing and exploring the way i am doing...I will not say that ur idea is bad .or ur dedication and the buttering part instead i want something new this time...something dhamakedar...nd that's why i want to experiment on something totally different concept...that will be beyond imagination...
Nd vaise bhi Reyaansh Kapoor [Lollx...kapoor gives filmy touch.] humesha se hi alag krte aaya hai and aage jaakr bhi alag krega...
My style is always unique and turns out to be Fab !!!
Ohk !! *patting his cheeks*

Lauren-Yes sir ! *wiping his sweat beads,forming on his forehead*

Rey-Good !! So people,ur suggestions ...

Saloni-Sirrr...what abt a love triangle ??

Rey-*coming towards her* No sweety ! Think of some more..*gently poking her nose*

John-Ummm...What abt revenge and love saath mein sir ..???

Rey-No !!

Lauren to John-Dekh ladkiyon se kitna flirt krta hai...
That is why youth esp girls iske peeche bhagti hai and aur kabhi flirt krna nai bhulta...Tabhi toh itne tickets bikte hain..Mr Show off !!!

Rey-Yess..Ideas openly discuss ho rhe hai and not in groups i guess...
So,jo bhi bolna hai sabke saamne bolo ...and not ek-dusre se chipkr...
Btw leave it !
John i guess revenge is nice...and love saath mein is great...
And to give it a great touch i'll put it as a horror movie...
Wat's say ??

Saloni-Woww Sir..You are Amazing !!! kitna achcha concept hai...*drooling*

Rey-Thanks darls...
Well main yeh story khandala mein likhunga...apne farm house par...so that no one can disturb me...not even media !!!
And in the mean time,Lauren koi bhi call aaye toh bol dena ki am on a holiday..kissi ko bhi pata nai chalna chahiye ki am off for writing stories...Tell them am off for 3 days...

Lauren-Ohk sir !! Done ..

Rey-Jab tak i'll be back tum log layouts tayar rakhna ..nd media ko kahabar bhi nai lagni chahiye ki am out for story writing...
kay..bye guyyz !!!
Cya all later !!!

Saying this he leaves for khandala which is 6 hrs from mumbai [I don noe if i am right abt the place but still assume.]

He drives on his brand new BMW all by himself..
Turning the loudspeakers to the maximum volume,he enjoys his ride with his krusher and french fries..[Personally i love the combination.]

Rey*self*-Hahaha...aaj toh sab ke sab namune dikhenge...
Halloween jo hai..

*After some time *

It was just 2 hours left to reach khandala when he saw a girl standing on the foothpath,confused and irritated..She was standing there for lift.
Getting closer,he examined her carefully from top to bottom...
She was wearing hot pants and cropped top and a transparent jacket with melbourne stilletos...

Rey *self *-Sexy figure.. It will me amazing if i drop her to her place...
Nd vaise bhi i was getting bored,...so better if i could fetch a company..

Rey stops his black BMW in front of her and slides the window down as to ask her about her problem.

Rey-Hey ! Any problem *drooling*

Gal-Umm...ya i wanted a lift till khandala...

Rey-Well hop in in that case...
*self*-Gosh ! kitni beautiful hai,her curly hairs till shoulders,hazel orbs,smooth honey soaked skin..velvet voice...attitude...she's different...
She's stunning !!!

Gal-Hey are you the famous script writer Reyaansh Kapoor ????

Rey-I guess so... *biting his lips*

Gal-Wow !!! Glad to meet you...you noe wat i haven't missed any of ur films ...i love them all..Infact am more interested in you..

Rey-*raising his eyebrows*

Gal-I mean i love ur your movies than actors in it !!
U are my inspiration.. *blushing*

Rey-Well first get in,...then we can talk non-stop !

Gal-yeah...sorry !!!

Rey-Glad to hear that u like my movies...
btw ur name ??

Gal-Ohhh sorry...Am Kriya..Kriya Ghai !

Rey-Hey kriya..nice name *shaking hands*

Kriya-Thank you ! Btw why are you going to khandala ??
And that to at halloween..?

Rey-Ummm...I am going there to write my next story...as i need a calm environment to write...

Kriya-Ohhh wow !!! All the best !
Well what are you writing this time ??
I mean anything you have thought of ??

Rey-Yeahhh something horror and thrilling + lovestory ka tadka...

Kriya-Well...well Nice concept !! *evil smile*

Lost...

Rey-Ummm...kriya ??
Lost somewhere ?!

Kriya-Umm...ya...U noe i have seen all ur movies till now and i really love each and every one..Specially Madhubala.

Rey-Ohhh...wat about khushi aur Gham ??My latest release...

Kriya-Ummm...i haven't watched the movie..*Calm tone*

Rey-But u said ki u have seen all my movies...?!

Kriya-yeahhh i did say but actually when ur film got released i purchased the ticket but unfortunately couldn't watch it...
See..i have the ticket with me *showing the ticket*

Rey-Unfortunately..??
Now the car was getting into the tunnel..

Kriya-Yeaahh...actually i was going through this road,exact in this tunnel when my car slipped due to ice and i met with an accident and on the spot i was dead...
That's why now whenever anyone passer-by from this road goes to khandala i ask for lift and kill that person...

Rey-*Looking a little scared * huh !?

Kriya-Hahahahahah...tum toh easily dar gye rey...
I was toh just mockin u...You noe main toh yaha ke environment ko thora scary bana rhi thi...u noe it will help u to think more hreat ideas...*winking*

Rey-Right !! Pheewww..u scared the hell out of me...
Btw not bad...
Ummm...will u mind helping me in writing the script..?

Kriya-Yeahhh sure..no probs !!!
I would love to help *evil smile*
Nd vaise bhi i ws going there for spending my holidays...but now i'll get to do some work...so that's cool for me !!!!

Rey-Thanks a tonnn dear...


******1st part over********


Thanks for reading !!!
-) Pasto(upasna_mishti) nd me(mEgical_arsha).

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Edited by mEgical_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*

**Unres**


SSeriously u killed me wid dis..


Im dead seeing ur writing skills..


Esp. wen she tells she was dead in d same road...my heartbeat stopped!!


This is wat I call a horror story...amazing!!


Sweets Im sure dis wil b rocking..


Gr8 story both of you...keep going!!

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow now thats what i call as horror par mujhe eisa kyun lag raha hain ki kriya bhoot hain actually dont wanna think about it as i love surprises (evil smile) when will u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome 1 sweets!!

i lovd it!!
rey a script writer or film maker dats sumthing new & diffrent!!

& our kria giving evil smiles , God if what she said abt dat accident & killing part may b true i feel!!

u hav built a gud scary atmosphre!!

gud job!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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update the next part asap yaar...

loved it...

pakka she is a real ghost...

waiting for it.,...


updating jaldi se...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing surprise
Freak u scared me..
Wen kria told her story i was like WTH
awesomee start
Update nxt 1 soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome shailu n upiii!!!!!!
loved whole concept
wow yaar love+thriller+horror
n kriya ka tunnel wala to mindblowing tha
gr8 strt waiting 4 nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres
awesome update and awesome concept...
i love the horror stories...
rey script writer and kriya giving evil smiles..love it...
waiting for the second part...
Edited by dildostidance19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazingg sweets...

wow..kria n evil smiles...gosh!! kahi vo accident n killing sach toh nahi...
nxt part jaldi updt karna plz...!!!!

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