All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome
finally rey aur kria ki friendship shuru toh hogayi
par woh taani naani banke bahut irritated karrahi hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kriya n rey frnds . . . 😃
but ye taani ko jab dekho beech me aana zarur hota hai . . . Chipko 😔
haww . . . Zarur iss taani ko pata hoga is song ke bare me,,,, vaise bhi to kriya ko copy karti rehti hai šŸ˜†
awww . . . My kriya . . . . Beautiful voice . . . & this song- i'm falling in love wid it. . . . šŸ˜
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!!
loved it
arrghh taani😔
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!! pretty cool update
i really luved it :)

specially kriya's song
wow ... awesome

n tani singing the same song
ehhh
i ill kill her

do update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u guys for liking it and sorry kuch zyaada hi jaldi update karti hoon na main ...šŸ˜†
chalo baaki baatein baad m pehle update...
every 1 got off the bus...Swayam gave his hand to Sharon to step down...similarly Vicky gave his hand to Neha ...Rey gave hand to Tani ,and then he was going then just saw kria had a bag in his han so he stopped and gave hand to Kria as welll...😳
Tani saw this and got angrey and jeolous and said in heart..
Tani: is Kria ka to kuch karna parega...
RDX: so guys ...WELCUM TO JUNGLE...first off all hemein tents lagane honge ...
All of them got busy in fitting the tents...
so at the end it looked like this...
RDX: boys and girls alag alag camp main rehen g...
Vicky: aisa kyun sair????😭
Neha: chup...shhh...šŸ˜†
Swayam looked at Sharon and smiled she smiled too...
Tani was holding Rey's arm...looked at him...he gave a fake smile too...
RDX: to tum log apna saman rakh do is k baad hum jungle k andar jayen...
Nil: andar ...kyun ...
RDX: tumhen sher dikhana h na..
NIl: SHER...nheee...
every 1 laughed...
RDX: hum paas hi aik jheel tak jayen g... aj yahee baki kaam kal s shuru hoga kyun k abhi shaam hogai h and raat ko jungle kafi dangerous hosakta h..kuch instructions tum log sun lo..jahan b jao do log saath jana ...and akele idhar udhar mat ghoomne..nhe to sher kha lega ..kyun Nilesh...
every 1 laughed...
so thori der yahan rukte u guys freshen up us k baad move karte h...
All the boys and girls moved towsrds their respective tents...Kria took her diary and went outside and found apeaceful place where she cud share her feelings to her diary...(cuz a book is comething which never expects and never demand)
A girl with sunset on the mountain in silhouette Stock Photo - 10292640
just like this she sat and wrote out her feelings...
she wrote...
"This lie's become a part of me
For months, I've played this game
Acting like it doesn't hurt
Each time I hear his name

Ignoring what's inside of me
Pretending I've moved on
As if the feelings I once had
For him are somehow gone

Spending each and every day
With happiness and laughs
Forgetting all our memories
Avoiding photographs

But last night when I saw him
For the first time since he left
My heart stopped for a moment...
I couldn't catch my breath

When suddenly it hit me
As the tears started to flow
That even after all this time...
I just can't let him go"

and she wrote
"Walking around with a great big smile
This girl with such a "great" lifestyle
It seems like nothing could go wrong
For this girl who seems so strong

She's labeled lucky everyday
"You're so perfect," her friends say
Oh but if they only knew
That these words are far from true

For she's crying deep inside
The teardrops that she has to hide
The heart inside that always breaks
All behind this smile she fakes

And no one sees the hidden tears
That she's held back all these years
The secrets that she must contain
Behind the laugh that hides the pain"
she closed her diary and looked at this words and Tarey with tears...
in that Time Swaron were together...
Sharon: Swayam kya baat hai ...mje tum kuch dinon s thore ooried lag rahe ho..
Swayam: kuch nhe...bus..
Sharon looked at him and he said ok...bata ta hun...
Swayam: i m just thinking about Kria...
Sharon: Kria k baare m kya...
Swayam: haan shayad wo apni maa ki death ko le k buht disturbed h...
Sharon: its obvious Swayam...wo uski maa thi...
Swayam: haan ..par ab wo tumhare saath h na..tum us ka dhyaan rakhna...
Sharon: tumhari dost meri dost hai...i 'll take care of her...
Swayam gave him a kisss on forhead...and blinked his eyes like thank u...
and here Tarey were together...
Tani: hum yahan buht maza karenge...aur ghoome g...Rey..Rey...
Rey: came back to sense ...haan bolo ...
Tani: Rey u love me????
Rey: yeh kesa sawal h???
Tani:nhe mjhe batao...
he thought for few sec and said..
Rey: haaan...
She hugged him...but he was disturbed y he took time to say yes...
RDX:come on guys chalo ...sab ajao ...we have to move...
Kria took her diary in her bag and went down to them ,swaron and Tarey also came...
RDX: so tum sab k bags tayar h..ux m sab zaroorat ki cheezein h...
All: yes sir...
RDX: so come on...
All all them started moving swaron were holding hand ..and swayam was supporting sharon cuz its was tough to move in jungle...Tarey were at the end and kria and Vish were just before them..viha were togther...
Neha: arey Vishaka idhar aana...yeh dekh kitna khussorat phoool h ..
Vishaka: haan cuming...m abhi ayi Kria...
them kria was alone and Tarey were behind her...
kria didn't looked at the rock and was to fall just than Rey holds her hand...and prevent her from falling ..
both of them stands properly...
Rey: r u ok...
Kria: yes...thanks to u..
both laughed...
Tani saw this and got jealous...and said..
Tani:chalen...
they reach near the lake...
every 1 shouted yeah...
RDX: so guys aj raaat yahan stay karenge...
every1 sat in round and had a bonfire...
every1 was talking playing...dance...
it was night now...
Rey was standing near the lake alone...
just than every1 callled him..come Rey ...
Rey: ya coming..
and went towards them...
Vicky:come on guys kuch khelte h...
Bharat: tu koi bacha ha jo ringa ringa rose khele ga...
Vicky:arey nhe rey...koi baron wali game...
Neha: baron wali game which haan...
Vishaka: hmmm..lets play truth or dare...
Nil: ya come i'll b fun...
simma: ya maza ayega...
every 1 sat down and got a bottle...
Rinni:i'll spin it...she spinned the bottle...
bottle spinned and its ---------- turn...
this dash will b filled in next update tab tak k parhne k liye dekhta rahe india forum...
hope u liked it...
ignore typo error didn't recheck...
For pmz add Angel56
"Whenever I cried he would always make me feel like he would change the world if he could so it couldn't hurt me anymore. But now I'm crying and he's not here"
Thank u...

Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update
nd i luv ur poems
ty fr da pm
update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
screw that taani part and da rest of the update was bang on...swaron's concern for kria...rey saving kria from falling...the lake ...everything was serene and blissful...the best part was kria's diary...wish that rey someday reads this...


BRILLIANT and PASSIONATE...😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
and yes u dont update fast...its a gud pace in fact...jeep up...cz its fun reading...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

awosm update...yā¤ļø

thank u dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvcookie

awesum update

nd i luv ur poems
ty fr da pm
update soon 😊

thank u ..😳

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