IPKKND FF: Trial by fire Part 33 updated on Pg 84 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Yay! The babies are safe!
Arnav sounds really happy. I hope things get better between him and Khushi.
And I absolutely love this Anjali!
Lovely update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant update.loved it...sorry my like button isnt working😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Waiting for your update. Am sure Khushi is going to give him a hard time now. Would love to see Arnav make it up to her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
this is fab!
pm me when you update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8 - Trial by fire
Dr. Kulkarni made her way back to the small group huddled together and said, "Its now almost 6PM. I would suggest that a couple of you stay here with Khushi while the rest can go home. Visiting hours will close in a couple of hours any way. She has not yet regained consciousness. Our night shift doctor will be looking in on her and we have hooked her up to all the monitors. People here will call me directly in case there is any change. We need to keep her in for a week until we are sure her infection is gone and her bleeding has stopped. It looks like she is on her 13th week of pregnancy now. After that, I would advise bedrest at home atleast until her 17th week. Around that time, we will do a series of tests to make sure that the babies are not having any birth defects - The bleeding worries me a little. But chances are low since you both do not have any family history of disabilities. Let us keep our fingers crossed."

"Chotey, dont look so worried, its no use worrying about things you dont know. The babies will be okay. Lets focus on Khushi now.", Anjali linked her hands with Arnav and consoled. It was decided that Akash would drop Maami ji and Anjali ji at Shaantivan, pick up Naani ji and the Guptas to bring them back to the hospital before close of visiting hours. Payal and Arnav sat down on each side of Khushi and started the long wait for her to stir, to make some kind of movements. In the face of Arnav's devastation, it was left to Payal to be the stronger person, consoling him that Khushi was going to be okay.

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Naaniji, Mama ji were shocked and not too happy that they had not been informed immediately...But they understood that the priority at that time was Khushi. They immediately got ready to leave to pick up the Guptas on the way.

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"Maamiji, I was supposed to meet Kamala ji to hand over some money to her at 7 pm today near the Gurudwara. I want you to meet her instead of me so that in case I have to go into the hospital early for baby, you can be Kamalaji's point of contact. She would trust another woman.", Anjali asked, taking charge immediately. Maami agreed checking off a checklist to change and remove all her usual fancy jewelry, "Who knows how people's minds change seeing all our riches! So detective Mano"roma" goink undercover!" Manorama said blowing off the smoke from an imaginary pistol. "Trust maamiji to always bounce back, great coping mechanism", thought Anjali with a small smile.

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Anjali had given maami ji a cell phone specifically for use in Operation Black Knight (reference to Shyam!). Mami ji called Kamala's number that had been pre-programmed into the phone and arranged to meet her near an abandoned house in the gallis (streets) behind the Gurudwara. Mami had some difficulties getting to the meeting point, and when she reached there, she was to receive another shock of her life. She quickly hid herself behind a wall. She saw a lady who she figured was Kamala arguing with someone in the falling darkness. She thought she heard Shyam's voice, wasnt sure and hence peeked out. "I swear, I just got here because I got some call. I thought it was you asking me to meet you here. There was some man and I thought it was you.", Kamala gasped...Her hand was caught in a vice-like grip by Shyam. "Well I am here, and I did not call you. So, who is the other person? I have been having my doubts about you for some time now and today's client loss proves it." There was a scuffle and then a long drawn-out moan. Maami peeked again and was shocked, she could just make out the gleaming knife in Shyam's hand that he had just plunged into Kamala and drawn back out. In the darkness, maami had great presence of mind to turn on the phone and take a series of pictures. Thankfully, the silent phone didnt make a peep and just stored all the pictures for future use.

Part 9


Short episode - Forgive me. But more interesting things yet to come. So , stay tuned.

I see that more than 5000+ views but only 100 comments. People please - It doesnt take long to put in a comment or two ...Bouquets / brickbats are welcome and it shows that my writing did make a difference and entertained you. Yes, I write for my pleasure...But it helps to know that it gives someone else pleasure too.
Edited by vishkhush - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Vill u update today gal...

Pls pls do

*edited*

So I become d first one to comment
Yay 😃

Lovely it was,though short and lil bit of arhi...
Update sooner

Luv
Dhwani
Edited by DhwaniKS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Hey the babies are ok
anjali is outstandng but the great ASR turned a real dumb
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
lovely update...

quick suggestion, i think some people may not be commenting because they think that this FF is not being updated???

if you just include the latest chapter you update in the title section every time you update for example: IPKKND FF: Trial by fire (Part 8:Page13) then this would alert your regular readers :)))

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update. Why don't you update your subject line. Because we don't know if you have added a new chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thxx fr ur nyc update...

khushi still not regain consciousness...i hope the babies r fine..they r not having in problem..whole family members worried fr khushi..in tension fr tht bloody shyam..a tight slap on his face...Arnav misunderstood khushi..but the pay back is gonna huge..as nw arnav worried fr his wife n baby...so arnav n payal on hospital...i really waiting fr khushi's regain and her reaction towards arnav...

next part update soon...

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