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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

GUYS I'LL TRY TO UPDATE IN THE EVENING...IF NOT TO NIGHT PAKKA OK I WILL UPDATE AT 9 PM..
GUYS IAM SOO HAPPY I SCORED 80%MARKS IN MY GRADUATION IST YEAR


congrats dear
and keep it up and try to score more in span of 3 or 4 years depending upon what ur doing
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Posted: 13 years ago


2 minutes darling😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLZ ADD "monachweetie" TO UR BUDDY LIST IF U WANT PM'S ROM ME
MY SOUL MATE






guys iam very happy today my results are out and i scored 80%
@divya,@abinash-thanks for ur wishes dearies😃

and all the very best to tamanna di for ur exam

PART-14

guys past will be ending in this update n we enter present too..from now only present...

Maan is in deep thinking ..he is feeling restless and don't know why but he is feeling that he is gonna meet her soon…why iam feeling like this??i want to stay away from her na..iam preparing myself then why these new hopes are created in me??why??muje aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kuch hone wala hai…his thoughts were disturbed with a phone call..he attended it n is shocked to hear what the other person said..


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"maan….maan" aadi's continous calling brought maan back from his trance…he then realised that they reached KM…he didn't even realise when they left handa palace n started to KM…maan was too lost in recollecting what had happened in past when he saw geet's questioning eyes which were searching for answers…








he nodded negatively when aadi raised his eyebrows as if asking what he is thinking…both shared a smile n entered inside…maan sat for sometime in living room where daadi,pinky n aadi had some casual talk…maan just sat there but his mind n heart is somewhere…after some time daadi asked maan to relax as he looked tired…maan straight went to his room n laid on bed remembering geet n her questioning eyes…he smiled remembering the day when he felt that he is gonna meet his geet soon,the same day when he received a phone call…







" I attended the call n was shocked to hear that daadi is in hospital..she suffered an attack…I was already in so much pain becoz my geet was in pain…it doubled when aadi informed that daadi n he came to know about my cancer..she could not be able to tolerate it n ended up in hospital….aadi asked me to come back soon….i tried to contact dev who left for a meeting in scotland but failed…without wasting a second I rushed to india…






aadi came to airport to receive me..i shot numerous questions about daadi's health but failed to understand pain in his eyes,tears of pain…I was so tensed about daadi n my mind stopped working to think about anything…aadi just informed that daadi is fine now but she'll be in hospital for 2 more days n she wants to meet him..that's it he didn't even spoke a single word than those three sentences…




our drive was silent..i didn't realise the fact that aadi too know about cancer n even I forgot about my cancer or reason for daadi's ill health but I was worried only for her.."


"we reached the hospital finally..i rushed to meet daadi who is still unconscious..i just sat with her for few hours..cried a lot,pleaded her to open her eyes…daadi is the one who took care of me n dev after our parent's death..she is not less than a mother to me…I already lost my parents n was not ready to loose her too..







i was relieved when doctors informed me that she is fine but needs little rest…when I went to meet doctor he said that daadi's attack is due to sudden shock which is un bearable to her..




that's when maan realised that daadi knows about cancer n he is responsible for her condition today..not only daadi but also aadi knows about his disease now…oh god that's the reason for aadi's silence..i thought and moved out just to find aadi sitting there all alone with crossed arms..there were some tears in his eyes but he didn't let them come out n maintained serious face…







I can see pain in his eyes..when I was approaching him aadi had a look at me n turned back ignoring me…iam sure now he is angry on me for hiding the truth but I didn't want to see my friend in pain…I know he'll burst on me but I was at mistake which seemed right to me at that moment…maan finally reached him n placed his hand on aadi's shoulder..




Aadi instantly snapped it n got up to move but I stopped him holding his wrist..iam really very sorry aadi..i didn't intend to hurt u….i thought….


Aadi:u thought that he is a stranger n why I should share my pain with that fool... right maan?..he asked..his voice is not that loud but pain is clearly visible in it…



Maan:no aadi not like that…he tried to explain…



Aadi:then what maan??then what??if u really think iam ur friend iam ur beloved one then why did u hide the biggest yet dangerous truth from me ha..bolo..answer me maan…



Maan:no aadi…plz don't say like that..i was in dilemma to decide what to do n what not to do…I was so shocked to know that suddenly..i thought u people cant take it..mein dar gaya tha..i was scared to see the pain in ur eyes…




Aadi:oh tumhe kya lagtha hai..iam happy now…maan ur stupidity gave me more pain than the truth..how could u think to hide this from ur best friend??maan... friend is not only to share ur happiness but also ur every pain..he turned to maan who was side facing him...he held maan's arms n said..




iam here to share ur every pain n stand for u…maan... u r such an idiot…how could u think to hide from me...



aadi nodded his head in disappointment n turned other side..maan could see the tears flowing down his cheeks…he placed his hand on aadi's shoulder..that's it he instantly turned n hugged maan tightly…






he sobbed silently hugging his best friend also estimating how he would have felt when he came to know about his cancer..how hard it was for him to stay away from them…how painful it was to endure it alone without anyone's support….





maan closed his eyes in pain…he felt guilty as his behaviour gave pain to aadi n daadi…aadi broke the hug n smiled at him for which maan smiled back…he took maan's hands in his and said.."don't worry mera dost…we are there for u..we'll throw away ur cancer somewhere very far n it could not even touch ur shadow..tera dost tere saath hai..dont worry..everything will be ok"





Maan smiled while tears formed in his eyes..he was surprised to see aadi in such a way..he thought that this truth breaks them completely but aadi surprised him..both shared a hug again..


Maan:aadi daadi ke saath ye sab kese???





Aadi:maan when I came back from hyderabad I didn't found u either in office or at home..i was confused..i enquired daadi n pinky but none had ur information..i very well knew that there is no meeting anywhere..i suspected pinky's strange behaviour but shrugged it for few days..i even called london office but the great msk managed dev also to lie..(aadi glared while telling this for which maan smiled)..





finally I catched pinky crying oneday..i enquired the reason but she said some silly thing..how can I fail to understand my wifey…I somewhere had a doubt that she knew about your where abouts…after insisting a lot pinky spit out the truth that u have cancer…unfortunately daadi who was worried for u,who came to enquire some info about u overheard our conversation..she could not take it n shock ki wajah se attack"aadi took a sigh after completing this….





"daadi came back to home after 2 days..she cried a lot for me but she too surprised me showing her stronger side..i very well knew that they both are broken from inside n I can see that but showing me that they are strong n they want me to be brave n face the situation which iam doing already…





daadi didn't even leave me for a second..she took extra care of me n they insisted me to stay there with her in KM…..mein daadi ke baat ko kese taal saktha tha..when she is doing this much for me,supressing her tears,her pain n acting normal for me..i agreed n stayed there..





even when iam in the same city where my jaan,my geet lives I never dared to go infront of her becoz I know I cant control myself now..i'll definitely crush her in my embrace n spit out the fact that I love her which I don't want…she too will confront me when she find me..so i ignored to visit her or even have a glance of her…it is not less than a death for but i determined to stay away from her…



"it was not easy for me to do that..as always I ended up in hurting myself which is not at all tolerable to daadi..she even saw that I always stayed depressed n pain was clearly visible in my eyes..my detective daadi finally found the truth behind it…the truth that I love geet more than anyone even my life n that was the reason why I left for london..





she loves me soo much that she even failed to think that her decision gonna ruin a girl's life if any thing happens to me..she very well knew that pammi handa is a greedy lady..so she offered a project in return of geet…not becoz she want to ruin geet's life but she want to see her grandson happy which is only n only with geet…at that moment my happiness was her priority..so failed to think about geet's future...



One day she gave me a shock of my life saying about her deal with pammi n the reason she made it…she requested me to marry geet as my hapiness is only with her but I was adamant…I already know the fact which everyone except me is unware and that is there are less chances for my disease to get cured…i didn't say to anyone but continued with treatment for others when i myself was not sure about my survival in future…




he simply denied daadi's plea n proclaimed that he is not gonna marry geet n he don't want to ruin her life…he asked her to inform his decision to pammi handa before she could inform it to geet..




Aadi managed everything in office but there was meeting where his presence is important as he is the MD of khurana constructions..so he is on the way to home after completion of the meeting and found pinky walking on road..she's trying to control her tears n wiping them which are coming out continously..maan sensed something wrong n stopped the car…he took pinky with him to home n enquired the reason…





Pinky:bhai geet ki halat bahut kharab hai …I cant see her like this..can u believe her devil mom is torturing her there…she is beating her..pata hai kyun becoz geet refused to marry..she fixed geet's marriage without her knowledge n declared that she is gonna get engaged with some unknown person…she will not allow to complete her studies now…bhai geet's dream gonna fulfilled now..she just have to attend the exams n her wicked mom….





"kya??"maan said in anger…that's when pinky realised that she said everything to maan which she don't want..she don't want him to know about her as he himself is in pain but maan now knows everything…



"mein aisa hone nahi doonga...meri wajah se...no i have to inform pammi that iam not gonna marry geet"maan said n picked his mobile..pinky is shocked to hear that he is the one who is gonna marry geet..she felt happy but maan's decision disappointed her but she kept mum as knew maan's reason...





"I thought I will stop this wedding at any cost now..iam already responsible for her condition,her melancholy..now I don't want to ruin her dream too…I phoned myself to pammi to inform her that iam not ready for wedding n want to cancel the deal made by daadi…but when I heard their convo when pammi forgot to disconnect the call n started abusing her(refer ist n 2nd parts)..i came to know how geet is living her life…she is actually living in that hell…I decided to bring her out of that hell n I could see only one option that is to marry her becoz pammi never let her go that easily...…





She may feel deceived after their wedding or when she comes to know about his cancer but only thing he thought is to bring her out of that hell away from her devil mom,her helpless dad who is only living for name…she atleast can complete her dream now..





I know I may leave her at any time becoz I know I may die oneday but my daadi is there for her to love her,to take care of her..i decided to give her all the love as long as iam alive..so I took the decision to marry her n now she is officially mine..samjo o us narak se bahar hai…

[uff past ended]



"but how can I face her now??i saw thousands of questions in her eyes??her sudden shock to find me back…how she'll react now??i don't have courage to face her after giving so much of pain but I have too…she may hate me and iam ready to bear her hatred…ek taraf se accha hi hai….he thought…




But his heart is not ready to receive her hatred..he wants to hold her in his embrace n protect from this cruel world..spend every second with her but he don't have courage to face her..he even picked his mobile to talk to her but took back…"sorry geet..iam hiding the biggest truth of my life..i know iam deceiving u but I don't find any option now..i want to free u from that hell before anything could happen to me…but geet iam doing all this becoz I love u"maan said n kissed her pic which is his wall paper…




He is about to put down his mobile but it rang.."ha pinky"maan said as he saw the caller id..



Pinky:bhai geet aapse milne waha aayi hai kya??


Maa is tensed to listen this but replied no…"what???bhai geet is nowhere at home..i searched everywhere but she is now where..i even enquired nakul but he don't know anything…bhai pata nahi o kaha chali gayi"pinky said worriedly…



Maan is shocked now…many questions roamed in his mind..where she must have gone???she must be not ready for this wedding…did she leave the house for this reason???oh god no I hope she don't take any wrong step..maan prayed to protect her..



"pinky don't worry..i'll search for her..u call all ur friends and enquire them whether they know anything and all places where she could go.."maan said while stepping inside his car…he disconnected the call n drove as fast as he can…

"geet kaha ho tum??"maan said while driving….

Precap:

Geet's monologue n most awaited confession😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
edited~~


me first me first... 🥳
awesome update mona dear..
loved it...
ahhh so thats the reason maan came back...
ohh dadi and adi came to know the truth... dadi is shocked and she got attack...
feeling bad for dadi..
loved the convo between maan and adi... love their friendship but its emotional...
their hug was oh god... 😭
pammi is torturing geet and maan came to know that and he agreed for marriage...
atleast she can out of that hell...
dadi is too good yaar... she found that maan loves geet...
now where is geet...
worried for her... but precap is cool...

their confession...
eagerly waiting for that...
CONGRATULATIONS SWEET HEART... U DID IT... 👍🏼
ALL THE BEST...
😃
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for ending the past...
nice updt ...
wtng for nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT
AWSOME
FINALLY Y MAAN CAME BACK IS OUT


ND MAAN O KUCH MAT HONE DENA
WARNA I WILL KILL U
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Posted: 13 years ago


LOVELY UPDATE..LOVED IT SO MUCH...MAAN'S POV WAS EXCELLENT...VERY TOUCHING...GEET HEARD WAT MAAN WAS TALKING...OH NO...NOW CONFESSION ...IM WAITING FOR GEET'S POV...
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Posted: 13 years ago
this part was tuff to understand at first.. as it was a monologue .. but later understood it.. and awesomly written...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesm updt
n high on emotions
waiting for d present 2 unravel

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