IPKKND FFLove or just lust?Epilogue page 152

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At first, I want to wish our fav show 'Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon'A very very happy birthday!!! 😊😊😊 .Consider this FF as a piece of cake for the celebration.The FF is slightly influenced by TVD but it'll have my own twist and turns, trust me.I'm posting the character sketch and the prologue here..Plz comment and like and give me your feedback!!!

Characters-

1.Khushi Gupta-A 22 year old girl.Beautiful, intelligent and friendly.Lost her parents young and was adopted by her aunt Garima.She lives with her uncle Shashi,Aunt Garima and Cousin Payal.She is in a relationship with Dhruv.

2.Dhruv Singh Raizada-He's 23..Free-minded, smart, goodlooking.He's been in a relationship with Khushi for 2 years..however is reluctant to discuss his family history with anyone, even Khushi.

3.Arnav Singh Raizada-A total mystery.Dhruv's elder brother.When Khushi and he first meet,Khushi feels a strong attraction to him.

other characters will be introduced with next chapters.Here's the prologue-

Prologue

Khushi couldn't believe herself...What was wrong with her? She just met him.But what was the killing urge to kiss him? She has never felt like this before...never ever.She remembers his piercing eyes,his smell, his smirk.Was I really going to kiss him? Khushi thought.God knows who he was...wait!! Was she really going to kiss a total stranger?

Suddenly she was taken aback by a touch on her shoulder.It was Dhruv.'Khushi, I want to introduce you to someone'He said.'Here's my brother Arnav Singh Raizada' .'Hello Khushi' that mysterious guy said wuth a smirk.

How's it? give me your feedback.I'll try to write part1 soon.Do comment becz it motivates a writer to write better.Thank u!!!
~~~~ INdex~~~

Part 1-First Meeting -Page 1.
Part 2-Unknown Desires--Page 5
Part 3---Tell Me about your Past--Page 10
Part4(a)---Revealing the Past--Page 14
Part4(b)--When there;s no one for you---page 18
Part 5--I'm only me when I'm with You---Page 22.
Part6--Bonding--page 28
Part7--Want You Back--page 32
Part8--Burning in Jealousy--page 36
Part9--Suddenly Engaged--Page 39.
Part 10--When heart burns desire collides with logic page 44
Part 11-Some Questions don't have answers Page 50
Part 12-Bound To someone else Page 56.
Part 13--Going Back in time page 60
Page 14--confrontation page 66
page15--Awkwardness--page 73
Part 16--Why Do you care??? page 80
Page 17-Being A Best Friend--Page 87
Page 18-Mission-making your best friend realise of his love-- page 93.
part 19--Plan No 1-page 100
Part20-Back Together page 108
Part 21(a)-Plan no2 (Make them Jealous) Page 113
Part 21(b)-Answer my questions or lose me.Page 120
Part 22-Best Friends talk -Page 126
Part23-Questions and Answers-Page 134
Part24-Hearts Break Again-Page 140
Part25-The End and the beginning-Page 146
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Vish1435 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start waiting for updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY NICE START..
PLZ DO CONTINUE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a really good prologue! Do continue and please pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting=]
wonder wah guna happen with them three now
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Thank you for the responses of the prologue.Here's part 1 Enjoy!!
Part 1-First Meeting

khushi was getting ready for the party.It was Dhruv's birthday party.Dhruv and Khushi has been in a relationship with for last two years.Dhruv was the dream boy of any girl.Handsome, goodlooking and intelligent.They used to study in the same college and they liked each other since the first meeting.Becoming friends and eventually they started having a relationship.This year Dhruv was throwing a party at his house.He was an orphan like her..lives with his uncle and his cousin Akash. Khushi didn't know much about her family as it wasn't his most fav subject to talk about and Khushi didn't pressurize him to talk either.

She wore a pretty red colour dress.She had long waist length black hair, deep brown eyes and rosy lips.She was one of the most popular girl of their college and she didn't even have to try to be so.Every guy was attracted to her but before Dhruv, she never had any relationship.Not becz she didn't believe in love, just becz she didn't like any one that way.Giving a last satisfactory glance at the mirror,she went to her car..to attend the party.Khushi knew the Raizada mansion very well.She has been here a numerous times.Dhruv's uncle was a great man and Akash has already become a friend of her.She entered the party when she saw Dhruv talking with other guests.He looked dashing in that cream colourd suit.She asked a waiter to tell him that she is waiting for him in the terrace.She wanted to give him a surprise gift alone.

Khushi went to the terrace.And it was dark there.She was happy to see it so becz it would help her surprise.Suddenly she heard a footstep behind her.She didn't turn yet but started talikng-'Ok...so I've a surprise for you.I've been planning this for last 2 months..do you wanna guess what it is?' .'Sorry, but i'm really bad at guessing.'A husky voice repiled which of course wasn't Dhruv's .She turned back to see who that was and she was literally stunned to see him.

He was a man of about 25.He had deep chocolate brown eyes in which any girl would want to sink in..the face of a greek god and a smirk on his face.He was wearing a black Armani suit.And above all he was standing really close to her, he could literally touch her lips if he wanted to.Khushi was mesmerised by his beauty.Suddenly she felt a killing urge to kiss hip.His lips...she juat wanted to sink in those lips.It took all of her to remain in her senses.He was smirking as if being aware of the thoughts she was having.Suddenly a familiar voice surprised him.'Khushi..' Dhruv called.They both turned back at him who was looking at them with shocking eyes.Finally the stranger spoke again.'Hello brother...long time no see..I just happened to stop by at India..after all, I couldn't miss my brother's 23rd bday'. 'Brother?'Khushi asked Dhruv giving him a questioning look.Dhruv took a deep breath and said.'Khushi..meet my elder brother Arnav Singh Raizada.' 'Hello Khushi...'The stranger said giving her an amused look with his famous smirk.

How's it?Plz hit like and comment.Send me a buddy req if you want PMS.Thank you!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dats interesting
why u stopped der?
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really gud!!
continue pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i totally loved it!

what an entry by ASR 😃😆
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interesting beginning - do continue soon

n thnx for the PM 🤗

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