Kriyaansh OS: She is leaving - Page 3

such a great os...

especially how u portrayed her dance and rey's feelings accordingly...

loved how u drew the parallel like outside she looked like she was only dancing but inside she was breaking with each step as she was leaving everything behind...

amazing

it was awesome...very beautifully written

a soulful update i may call it...bautifully written and heartily expressed each and every feeling of rey's ...the way he felt at each of her dance move...his reading her expressions thru her dance...it was all so perfect...even though the thought of kria leaving made me sad...but rey's motto to see his love achieve her dream was the best part...his sadness was evident yet his love for her soared new heights...i wish they wud have ended this way on the show...leave it...a beautiful os...by the way wen u planning to update TUJHE BHULA DIYA...i have been waiting for it...😃

firstt i wanna say ...You writee Damn beautifull!!!
i know u know it ..but really where did u get these words from huhhh??? Juzzz Beautifull!
nd updatee ..i luvdd itt!!
Amazingly Awesomee it was!!!:)
Thanxx for PM!!:)

resd😭 me last one

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preeenuu ...

aaa


it was just ...

out of this world ...
no words for this ...

* still not out of this *
phew ..

jaan
jhappies te pappies for u ...

innnaaa jaaadaaa achchaa tha na ye ...

me ab kuh nai boling ...!!

wowww

awww awsummm,,,,,,,,,gr8 os,,,,,,,,,,👏👏

Prenu meri jaan itne dino baad kuch padhne ko mila tere likha hua. Hayeee its so beautiful. The way u described kria's dance that too in rey's pov... Truely awesome. Aaj mein tere hath ko kisshi karing phirse muaaahhh