All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
thank u guys ..here ur update. its realyy inspires me alot...look down😉

Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
😆😆😆so guys mjhse control nhe horaha i m updating menebuht si cheezen soch k rakhi is ss k baare so i want just disclose it but ahista ahista...😆
so here we go...
life is just passing as it was passing one day in morning princi came in class...all the louians were there ...so guys i have a surprise for u...
every1 like kya hai...wat sir ...
princi asked some1 to cum in ...come in gal...
a gal came in slowly ...yeah it was Kria ...every1 was just shocked to see her ...
so students Kria ne hamein phir se join karliya hai...
Tani was like ab yeah kyun ayi h ...Rey was not there...swaron were in bit trauma...while rest of weaklings came and hugged Kria...she was very happy that she 'z back after such problems...all of them moved towards rehearsal hall...
vish: Oh man mene tumhen kitna miss kiya...tum hunsab se milry bina chali gai...
Neha: yes Neha not likng it y u dont tell us...haaan...
Kria:arey bus baki baatein bad main pehle m sab s mil to lun...
she moved towardx swayam and hugged he hugged him tooo...
kria:swayam mene tumhe kitna miss kiya...app sab ki bohut yaaad ayi...
she moved towards sharon and hugged her too..
Kria:mene nhe socha that yeh main aapse kahun g..but app ki fights ki ab aadat hogai h us k bina maza nhe aata...
Neha:you know swayam and sharon finally swaron ban gaye...
Kria: kya???? sach main...awww...congratz...
in the mean time Tani came in ...she moved towards Kria and said...
Tani: Hi!!!
Kria: Hey!!!
Vish: Kria meet Tani she is our sixth dancer of out weakling team...
Kria moved her hand forward...and said hey Kria ..Kria Ghai...
Tani:hey m Tani ...Rey ki gf...(and pointed towards door throw her eyes)
(kria was gone numb ...she felt dead at that moment ...her eyes were full of tearsss...sumtime before these eyes eyes were searching for sum1 speacial and now they r full of tears...but she controlled herself for h is sake and turned bak towards the door)
Rey saw Kria and kria saw Rey ...(at first look he thought his life is bak he smiled but at very another moment he remembered all the thoughts wat Kria said to him)
Kria moved towards him and said congratz...both of them hesitated ..in the mean time a guys entered ...luking for Kria...hey Kria tum kahan thi main kb se tumhe dhundh raha hun...
Neha moved forward and said who is he Kria..
the guys replied i m her frn...kria interupted in between and holds his arm and said..
Kria:ummm...he is Rahul my bf...(Rey was luking all these things and he thought she really dumbed him)
all the louians were shocked...even Rahul him selp was shocked...but kria said her to do as she say...
Bhara: arey..Kria...tera bf...
Kria: haan kyun nhe hosakta...
Simmi: nhe hosakta ha but...
Rahul interupted in b/t and said i m sorry guys main asie yahan agya ...mjhe bus kria se kuch kaam tha...so...kria cud u plz cum wid me ...she nodded and both went towards aside ..he asked her wats going on ,she said plz abhi tum jao ..i'll tell u everthing later plz...he did so ..
Rahul:guys mjhe abhi urgent kahin jana h...so ..bye cya all bye he gave kria a side hug(dont b confused Rahul is kria frnd in dehradun he just came mumbai to drop her...but at the nick of momant kria thjought if she wudn't say this rey might have not believed her that she ditched him ,he has a very small role)
so thats Rahul...😆
Swayam:hey Kria smriti aunty kesi hain...
kria looked down...when she luked up she had tears in her eyes...
Sharon: wat happened...
Kria: she is ...she is... no more...
every 1 together ...WAT?
Neha hugged her ...and asked how she said smiriti met a road accident...
Kria: come on guys maa hamesha khush rahe kerti thi isiliye m b unhe khush hokar yaad krti hoon...
Sway: tumne hamein btaya...nhe...tumhare sabse tough time main tumhare frndz tumhare saath nhe the...
Kria:nhe swayam sab itna jaldi hua...that i was in shock...par ab theek hai sab...
Vicky:guys to kria ki aane ki khushi main aj raat ko party...yeahhh every1 shouted...
Kria smiled...but Tani was not happy...Rey cud see sumthing unusual in Kria's eyes ...the innocent Kria is ruined sumwhere..this Kria is mature...who faced sumthing terrible in life..he wanted to go to her console her ..but that Tani just roaminf here and there so that Kriyaansh cud not meet...
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Precap:
Tani and Kria aamne saamne...aik taf ghunghuroo ki jhankaar and aik taraf passion hai dumdarrr...😆😆
the part is gonna b awsumm i m telling u dont miss that ..
for pm Add Angel56..
i'll update tomoorow morning ...mjhse wait nhe hota...😆
"Sacrifice is a part of life. It's supposed to be. It's not something to regret. It's something to aspire to."

Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
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unres

Awsm update dear

Thanx for pm

BTW whats ur name?

And ya update soon by tomorrow morning only 😆
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...rahul.kriya ka boy friend... waiting 4 nxt part...ab morning kab ayega...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

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unres

Awsm update dear

Thanx for pm

BTW whats ur name?

And ya update soon by tomorrow morning only 😆

hey m Angel hi...yeah tommorow by 11 to 12...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update 😊

Kria back 😃

Luvd it very much 😃
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rhu90

nice update...rahul.kriya ka boy friend... waiting 4 nxt part...ab morning kab ayega...

noo boyfrnd nhee just frnd...😆..kal ayegi subah.subah hone na de ...😆
Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey awesome intro and more awesome 1st part...unique and simple...loved how the weaklings again accepted kria...even sharon-kria's lil convo was bang on...rey and kria meeting...the emotions overflowing...u rocked it buddy...as for taani-i wud kil dat despo now...the last part stole my heart wen rey understood dat his innocent kria was lost and this was a new kria...waiting eagerly for it...plz pm me also//////...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

hey awesome intro and more awesome 1st part...unique and simple...loved how the weaklings again accepted kria...even sharon-kria's lil convo was bang on...rey and kria meeting...the emotions overflowing...u rocked it buddy...as for taani-i wud kil dat despo now...the last part stole my heart wen rey understood dat his innocent kria was lost and this was a new kria...waiting eagerly for it...plz pm me also//////...

thank y so so so much yeh to kuch nhe wait for kal subah ...that party ix gonna b mind blasting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

i loved it... do pm me...

thanx for pm do add me😆

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