All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyyy awsummm update,,,,,,luv it,,,,,,,pm me plzzz😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesome update
gosh kriya ko yeh blne ki kya zaroorat thi dat rahul is her bf
aur yeh taani😡
eagerly wating for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
happy dat every1 acceptd kriya...
taani rey ki gf... yuck...2
just hope dat everythg cms alrite bwn KR...
nyc upd8...
btw, kriya hugging sharon was nyc...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome update...loved it very much
kria back in mumbai and that taani ahhh i will surely kill that stalker some day...
awesome concept...loved it
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
chapter 1 is awsome dear
bt smriti is no more dat soo sad
n wht kriya ne rahul ko bf khe kr greet kia...nw wht hpn
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i guess am late...
sorry 4 that n angel it was awesome
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow . . . Nyce concept . . . 👍🏼

I always wanted to read abt such situation . . . . As i'm expecting the same as well in D3 too... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
heyyy hi ... luved the update.. do pm me ven u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳😆😆hey guys firstly thank u so so so much for liking it...i m glad u all loved it...so now itx party time...
just before starting luk at the vm...
sorry nams i m using it without permission but i m in love with this vm...
this vm will show wat they felt after meeting once again they memories coming in their minds...
and now...
this Kria's dress...wat she wears in party...ones more thing about kria's look her hairs are straight now she dont curl its so she look enen more beautiful..😆
party is in Atrium but Kria dont knows about it she just its catual party just among weaklings and dazlings...
Kria ix with Neha with her eyes closed by a band...
Kria:Neha tum yeh kya krahi ho...hum kahan ja rahe hain..
Neha:waiting Kria...u know it very soon...
they entered in and Neha opened Kria's eyes but it was dark everywhere..
Kria:Neha yahan itna andhera kyun hai...
but no reply
Kria:Neha..Neha...ab yeh kahan gai..
she entered in and banged into some1 and light comes...
every1 out there SURPRISE...(yeah was not only dazling and weakling but nearly whole college was there to welcome Kria)
and the person Kria banged was none other than Rey...so they didn't looked here and there they were in there LLHH setion...(Tani saw this and got angry with this and went to Rey)
Tani came to Rey and both of them got back into senses...Tani holds Rey's arm...and said..
Tani:hey Kria welcum...
Kria:ahem..haan ...wo ...thanx...
in that time very1 came to Kria and greeted her ..she got buzy with them...and Tani was still angry and wanted to show every1 that she' better than Kria...
Swayam, Kria and Sharon were standing together ang looking to all the gana who were dancing like pagals...
Kria:in sab ko kya hogaya hai aaj...😆
Swayam: haaan ...pagal hogaye hai...😆
Sharon: haan pagal hogaye hain...
And here Swaron LLHH setion started ...
Kria looked this and smiled and said...
Kria:Ahem.. Ahem...
swaron came back into sense ...and smiled looking at eachother...
Kria: i m so very much happy for u guys...but tum ne btaya nhe yeh sa kese ...
Swayam:he told the whole story(End of the Chapter and beggining of new one)...😆
Kria: awww so sweeet...
Sharon: u guys just talk i just get a drink...
both noded and smiled ..sharon was blushing yes she was...😳
in the mean time some1 on stage announcing something ...yeah it was tani...
Tani: hey! guys..
Rey thinking wat she is doing...Sharon came with a drink...and asked (just by expression)wat..
swayam noded like he dont know...
Tani: hm..jese k aj hamare college ki purani student wapas ayi hai...so i just wanted to ask her..
Kria i wanted to dance with you...??(she wanted to prove she'z a better dancer than Kria)
Rey cudn't understand wat was she up to...Swaron luking at each first and then looked at Kria...
rest were shouting yeah ...come on Kria yeah...
Kria: thankx Tani...but i m sorry ...i've left dance...main ab dance nhe karti...
dazling and weakling were bit shocked about what she says but as the whole coll was there so they didn't react much...
Rey in his mind: jis dance k liye ix ne itna kuch kiya...wo ix ne itni asani se chor diya...😲
every 1 : come one Kria u can do it..come on..
Kria: no guys mene pichle aik saal se aik b step nhe kiya...
she moved backward and turned...
Tani: to tum dar gau mjhse...
every 1 was just silent..like wat she iz saying...swayam just moved to stop her but sharon holds his arm and noded like no.. not now...
kria stoped...turned ...(akhir hai yo baatcutter aise kese kisi ki b baat sun le...)moved forward and said...
Kria: i will...
both came in the centre and every1 moved backward to give them space...
Tani fastened her ghunghurooox...Kria wax not luking at any 1she closed her eyes and started remebering all her memories )
(watch this and then u'll understand how it was but remember tani with ghuroox so ghunghroo ka muxic khud he imagine karlo😆)
both were in centre...song started and tani started it first she did 1 step with her ghunghuroos music...and pointed towards Kria...Kria started with full of passion ..it was not Kria who was dancing it was her pains who were leting her dance...she pointed towards Tani...she did her bhoomi chakars and kria was in centre...all the memories were going through her mind...(Her first dance in college ,her makings for team weakling ,her first dance with Rey,weakling winning footloose, the first Kriyaansh hug) now it was her turn to dance ...she was happy by remembereing all happy thoughts she dances with a smile on her face...and pointed towards tani...and she stoped...(remembering wat her mother said to when she saw kriyaansh together,how she behaved with rey on VL day,she left dnace,she left Rey,her mother left her alone,the truth why she was not letting her dance and now the Tarey truth all the bad memories were going through her mind her eyes became red full of tears)now she started dancing ..she started turn ..Tani in the middle cud not understand wat she so...so fast turns kria taking ...and tani came aside with kria and both started dancing together but Kria moved were so fast and passionate that Tani cud not match up to that and finally stoped but kria kept on dancing with so much pain ,passion the urge of everything she lost...like this image...she wanted happy memories but not at the cost of her love her friendz...
Finally Tani moved backward but Kria didn't stop ...she expresses herself with dance ...she was expressing her pain...and she kept on dancing...
Sharon:Swayam kuch karo ise roko ...pichle 20 min she is dancing..
Swayam: nhe Sharon ab wo mjhse ya tmse ya kisi aur se nhe ruke g...aj ...wo apne aap ko nhe rok payi...
Sharon: matlab...
Swayam: i dont know but her eyes there is pain in her eyes...she says she is happy but ...
Rey was listening this...
Vish: come on guys kuch karo ...
atlast Rey started moving towards her...he knew somewhere that the only person who can stop Kria is he himself...Kria was taking fast turns...Rey moving towards her...Kria still in her turn...
Rey moved closer and Kria into him ...her hand hit his chest and she looks in his eyes...and he look in her eyes and a tear escaped from her eye...she removed it but he saw that and was really confused..
and clapping started for her...and both of t hem moved away...but Rey carried hudredz of ques with him...
Precap...
kya...jungle main picnic...haan😆
ignore typo errrors didn't re check..
so thats it for today hope u liked it...really worked hard on it...
for pms add Angel56
"Life is not about getting, it is also about giving and making sacrifices for the ones you love. Just like someone rightly said, "If equal affections cannot be, let the more loving one be me! "
Love is not about reciprocation. It is a feeling wherein you should set your love free. If it comes back to you then it is yours forever.
Love is about accepting your lover the way they are and loving them for what they are. Instead of bringing changes in them, its better to make small sacrifices at your end so that the relationship is a successful love story."
"Yeh Bhi Acha Hai Sirf Sunta Hai ..
DIL Agar Boltaa To Qayamat Hooti .."


Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayy 1st to comment 😃

Awesome update 👏

Luvd it very much 😊

Hate dis taani 😡

Interesting precap 😳

Waiting for d next part 😳
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago

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