KumSum SS ~Saawariya~Last Part/Part4 @ PG37 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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as me promised dears... here is the intro part..hope u guys like...

 
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Introduction Part:
 

A 10-12 Years girls rudely pulled her heir by a 50-52 years man'.

G: "Baba ..Mujhe sadhi nehi karni hai'Baba..mujhe chodiye Baba'."sobbed poorly.. "Mujhe nehi jana.."

M: "Tere iss sadhi ke badle Mujhe kitne sare payse mile'tere Maa ne marne pahle yea ek accha kam kiya jo tujhe jinda rakkha kam se kam mujhe 2000 to mil raha hai..main iss main acche se rah sakta hoon..nakhre mat dikha chal jaldi'"

It is the story behind of our society..after brutally killing Female uterus on her mother womb'there the ratio of 1000 male much less female'.in that village the ratio was too worse as the ratio was 1000:200 so men were didn't get woman for marriage 'as they purchase women for marriage..and u guys guess'

The Man went to Temple with that Lil girl'she was too scared to see lots of men there as she knew what was meant of that..she was sold then to them..none can save her..one man came forward among them'

M: "Chal chandu shadhi ki rasam puri karte hai'"

Chandu father of that Lil Girl'

C:"Haaanji jaroor'Kumkum Chal der mat kar jayda'"

Kumkum said nothing'.just looked at her father with teary eyes'one Lil boy 7-8 came running .n pulling Kumkum's FIL's kurta'

B: "Bapu kya ho raha hai'???"

M: "Shadhi'"

B: "Kiski bhaiya ki???"

M: "Haan'"

B: "Bapu Mian karu shadhi'mujhe karni hai'"

M: "Thik hai chal..shadhi kisise bhi hoo kya farak padta hai'"

The Boy gave Kumkum a sweet cheeky smile..n Sat beside her'

B: "Tum ro kyu rahe hoon'??"

Her wiped her tear.. 1st time in her life someone did that'she gave him a weak smile'

K: "App ka naam kya hai???"

B: "Meri naam sumit hai'Ma ne rakkha' sab ka meet'"

She just smiled'

M: "Sumit lugayi se jayda baat nehi karte ..sirf kam karwa te hai'."

His face fell down'but she put her hand on his shoulder...and gave him a smile'he also return back her a smile'

He put sindoor and tied Mangalshutra on her neck'later they didn't wait 4 anything just gave her father money n came back to their house'She knew this was New beginning of her life or The END'

 

plz forgive me...4 any spelling mistake.. next part'll be next monday not this one...πŸ˜†
 
plzzz

 

lov,❀️

Tama

Edited by sukklover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
suspence wating for for 1st part  and chracters names  seems interesting  
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
i like your teaser and Intro plzz contuied soon plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
liked.. it

do cont soon
maheen55 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
   serious issue  waitng for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
what..?😲 SK got married as kids itself..?😲
Nice story btw..!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Will b waiting to read abt.. K's bidaaii n grih-pravish part..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Very nice concept πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ I loved it. Teaser was really interesting. Awesome start😊 Please,try to do continue soon. Thanks for the PM.
Edited by Joseph_A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Good start dear
cnt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
nice keep it going 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awesome super gr8 work Tama  πŸ€— πŸ€—