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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: farroo

i just read ur all the updates ur awesome wrtiter girl and nice intro nice chaps everything is nice keep it up



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

abhiya beach part ws amazing...continue soonn thnx 4 d pm



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Posted: 13 years ago

hii i m back with another chapter...as i said i'll give pia POV in this chapter...sorry to disappoint you the story has not progressed in this chapter...its like pia telling u the story so far from her POV...this will help to understand her character better...just imagine pia is having heart to heart convo with you..



CHAPTER 10 PIA'S POV

Hi I am Piyali Dobriyal as in your pia.😊 I know till now you all have known me very well but still I want you to listen it from my POV. I have the best family of the world. Loving n caring parents n my little bratty, naughty and cute sister shonali. You must have understood now that I and shona share lovely bonding. She is not just my sister but my friend also and some time my partner in crime when we tease mom.šŸ˜†

You must be thinking that how lucky I am I have everything a girl should have. No, there is still something or should I say someone is missing...yes you are right I am talking about love of my life. Like any other girl I also had dreams of my prince charming. I had also made his image in my mind and I always believed that when i'll meet him I'll recognize him immediately without any doubt. But when I actually met him in reality (yes...I am talking about abhay)...you know na ...what happened😳...I was so hell confused about our relationship. šŸ˜•

You must be thinking what kind of girl I am???šŸ˜• I have lovely family who brought me up in caring n protective environment. I am educated, smart 21st century girl then how can I be so skeptic, so confused, so reluctant. But what to do...this is how I am.šŸ˜’ Since my birth my parents have given me so much love and care that I sometimes feel like I am a crystal doll which they have handled with care.šŸ˜† Anyways they have brought me up in the dreamland of happiness n protected me from the evil eyes of world but I wonder till when I will stay with them. One day I have to fly at my own leaving behind my parents protective nest. Somewhere I fear this thing. I have to deal with lots of different types of people during my journey so I am afraid that whether I'll be able to adjust according to the need of today's cruel, mean and selfish world. And that's why I can't trust people easily as everyone is not like my family...they will try to take advantage of my weakness and innocence hence I always feel the need to remain extra careful. I guess due to this nature it took me so long to realize my feelings towards abhay.

I still remember when I first met him in the partyšŸ˜..I was totally blown away by his looks😳...but what made me more crazy was his blue eyes. They were deep and calm like an ocean, as soon as they met my brown eyes I almost shivered at my place. They were looking me with so much intensity as if seeing through my soul and pulling me towards them, I feared that I'll get drown in them. And as I always believed I recognized my prince charming then n there only...but my skeptic nature got better of me n I restrained myself from getting close n friendly with him.šŸ˜’

When he introduced himself I checked him out upside down, admiring his greek god type looks.šŸ˜‰ I have seen many handsome guys but he definitely has some charm which can make any girl go weak in her knees. When I came to know that he knew my name already I was so hell shocked...I mean how on earth he knows my name when I am meeting him first time...i know you will laugh when I will say this but the truth is that for a seconds I thought that he is really an angel send by god just for me thats why he knows everything about me. But when he explained the reason...I was speechless...the way he said it...his words still buzz in my ears..."you were looking gorgeous"...I felt that I am the most beautiful girl in the whole world.šŸ˜šŸ˜³

Then our dance...our first dance😳...oh it was like a fairytale and I felt as if I was cindrella. šŸ˜The moment he pulled me closer...current ran down my spine...its not that I never mingled with boys but they were just my friends. Some of them liked me also but I never thought anything beyond friendship with them as none of them fitted to the image of prince charming I have carved out in my heart...i am not among those who makes relationships on trial n error basis. I never felt the need of BF just for time pass. I believe in love as it was used to be in the olden times...so pure...so intense...away from the pomp n show of today's world...ok ok ..i know people like me are rarely found these daysšŸ˜†...but that the way I am. That's how I never involved in any relationship previously.

I also felt jealous...first time...when he hugged alina...It was all new for me...everything was going so fast...n I couldn't believe... abhay...he is so naughty...he pulled me closer in parking lot n blatantly asked me about our next meeting...this added to my doubt about his character...you know na...london return types rich guys...girls drooling over them.šŸ˜† I dodged his flirting attempt by leaving the meeting on our destiny.

But I didn't expect I'll meet him so soon...that meeting in the liftšŸ˜...oh I still get Goosebumps remembering that encounter😳 ...we were so closeā˜ŗļø...I was lost in his arms..breathing his fragrance...I felt so secured , so warm in his embrace...I didn't want to go away from him...but as I came out of the trance I felt so embarrassed ...how could I do that..i couldn't believe myself...i almost ran away from him. But as usual my savior, my gyan guru, my love guru...shona the gr8 helped me in accepting my feelings n persuaded me to go on date with him.šŸ˜‰ And destiny played another game, he chose shona for his band n somewhere I also felt for the first time that yes...we definitely have some sort of invisible connection which brings us face to face every time even when we avoid each other.

I can never forget our first date😳...shona...I didn't know when she feed him about my likes n dislikes...she is getting naughtier day by day. Abhay took me to my favourite restaurant...he told me about himself. When I came to know that he is lying to his parents I immediately wanted to shout at him that I hate liars but told him politely that its not good to lie. But after listening to his answer I sympathized with him😭...poor guy his dad doesn't understand him at all. We shared many beautiful moments that day. For me, most beautiful n memorable among them is when he sang for me...it was such a lovely song...and first time I noticed he really sings well...i mean he has such an awesome voice...sweet but sexy.😊 And the next moment I will not forget in my whole life. We kissedā˜ŗļø. I don't know about him but it was my first kiss. He saw lovingly in my eyes n slowly kissed all over my face n then my lips...his lips felt so gentle n warm on my lips...I felt as if I have touched the fire n soon I will melt down under its heat...i can't explain the feeling..It was so beautiful...I have no words...it can never be explained...the very first kiss...its something which one can understand only if he/she has experienced it...right!!!!šŸ˜‰

After that day whenever I thought about him I felt volcano of emotions erupting inside me...the feeling were so intense that I could no longer hide them or run away from them...i had to accept that he has definitely stole my heart. But still there was something due to which I was holding back my love...I don't know why but...i was still reluctant to accept this relationship.šŸ˜’

One day in the office I came to know that chand uncle was taking extra profit from the company without dad's knowledge...i was so angry.😔 But when I told dad about this he brushed it off like its not important for him. He said that he had no problem with it. Even I had no problem with the money thing but...i was worried because its kinda cheating... But dad convinced me not to make an issue about it nevertheless I asked dad to be careful. But this whole incident occupied my mind for whole day...I just couldn't let it go so easily...i always complained dad that why our share is only 40% when most of the hard work is done by dad. In fact it was my dad because of whom this company came into existence. He did all the research, project work, planning etc. its just that my dad hasn't had enough money at that time so he went to chand uncle for finance n he agreed to finance it after demanding 60% share. Now also chand uncle have so many other companies to look after but my dad has only this...he gives all his time to it unlike chand uncle who come to attend important meetings only..its because of my dad's hard work that raichand pharmacy has become most profitable company of raichand group...then also chand uncle doing this to us...it was so unfair.😔

I was so affected by this incident that for few seconds I also thought about re considering my relationship with abhay...but my heart was not permitting this. Then I cooled down a little bit when I remember dad's word, "chand is shrewd but good at heart...he will not do any such thing to me", I also thought that my dad is very important for him n his company...he can't do any big cheating with my dad..probably I am over reacting on petty issue...if dad has no problem then i should not trouble my mind thinking about it...but was getting a weird feeling...my dad is very kind hearted ...hope chand uncle will not take advantage of dad's trust over him.

I was in deep thought when I my phone rang n I saw abhay's name...immediately my troubled mind felt relief n I smiled. But he sounded very disturbed...he wanted to meet me. Though it was very late but then also I couldn't say no to him. How strange na...few minutes ago I was thinking of re considering my relationship with him n getting angry in his dad's act but when he needed me I went to meet him on just one call from himšŸ˜•. He told me the whole thing...he was very sad...I didn't like it at all I could see the pain in his eyes n unknowingly my eyes became teary...I couldn't bear it...he was looking so vulnerable that I wanted to take away his pain...i hugged him tightly, consoling him...finally when he smiled I felt some relief...that day I understood...that his pain is my pain..I can't see him sad...yet another proof that I am falling in love with him.😳

We went on few more dates and shared quality time with each other...our bond grew stronger meeting after meeting...not only mine but I could easily say that his feelings also became stronger for me day after day . He shared almost all the things in his life with me..whether it was about his parents fights...to his London life...to his dreams... the deal he made with uncle...all things...the more I get to know about him the more I fell in love with him...finally shaking off all my fears n worries I have accepted to myself that I am madly in love with him...i was sure he loves me too.

Tomorrow is a big day for him, n shona also...they are going to give the audition for the show. I am confident that they will get through it. When we met this time he told me about his sister...i couldn't stop my tears...he has suffered a lot...he never get to know the love n care of family...he was so alone all the time😭...he could easily turned towards wrong way...could have been in depression ...but he fought bravely with the circumstances...he is so optimistic about life, have strong determination in his eyes to fulfill his dreams😊...i feel so proud on him...n I am proud of being a part of his life. He said he feels complete because of me...wanted me to promise him that I'll never leave him. There was so much of love in his eyesā¤ļø...how could I even think of leaving him when I myself will die without him. So I promised him that'll be there for him...always. This was the first promise of our love. He sealed it with kiss making me forget everything...all I could feel at that time was him...my heart was beating to the rhythm of his name. 😳

Although we both knew by now that we are insanely in love with each other but the none of us has confessed it officially. We didn't feel the need of it as our eyes have already said it n our hearts have understood it but...i mean... I sometimes feet that how nice it would be if he give words to his feelings by confessing it to me. And after that I could tell my parents about him..as I haven't yet...n I don't like hiding things from them. May be he is waiting for right time...i hope it'll come soon.šŸ˜

I don't know why but from the beginning I knew that this relationship isn't going to be easy. Till now I have this fearšŸ˜•...i guess that's why people say that-

" ye ishq nahi asaan bas itna samajh lijiye, ek aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai..."

ok ok ...mujhe pata hai mein shona ki tarah kuch jyada hi filmy ho gayišŸ˜†šŸ˜†..but...I am scared at the thought of going away from him...i fight with this unknown fear everyday ...but I have come a long way now...its too late to back off...I m head over heels in love with him n I get courage from this love only...whenever I look into his eyes they pulls me in the ocean of love flowing in them n I forget all my fears...i don't know what future holds for us...but I will fight for my love...when he is with me I ready to face any problem.😊


precap- first test(first round of audition)

Edited by anjali0111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update yaar...

I loved it...

U described piya's pov beautifully..
Though the story didn't go ahead but it helped us to understand piya's character more nicely.
U are a awesome writer, continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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It was beautifully written!!! Loved the way you described Pia's feelings for every moment that has passed so far... it showed clearly how she started to fall in love with Abhay. Eagerly waiting for your next part... cont soon n thx for the pm😊
Edited by .tanu. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update
piya's pov was very nice !
Eagerly waiting for abhiya's official confession...
Continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update yar
loved the way u described the piya feeling
she has fear of her relation with abhay
hpe nobody separate them
like the piya thinking of abhay god then sexy voice
like the each and every part of this update
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesuum update anji...šŸ‘ brilliant...šŸ‘
your depiction of pia's pov was wonderful...ā­ļø
her fear,first feelings,pessimism..everything was shown nicely ā­ļøand had their respective reasons too...😊 really anji..everytime i read ur update i feel awe of ur writing skills... šŸ‘šŸ¼ everytime u amaze me with ur brilliant piece of work!! ā­ļøbravo...šŸ‘
the secure world in which she was born n brought up n the harsh world she was afraid of facing n dealing with was again magnificiently potrayed!! šŸ‘
p.s. her fear and the uneasy feeling she has gives a faint hint i guess,that something very bad is going to happen..regarding the profit matter n arnab's excessive trust on chand!!!
thanks for the pm dear..n tak..care..😊
p.s. extremly sorry for unresing so late...
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brillant update
every single feeling described so beautifull.her relutance to accept the relationship...
Thnxx for pm

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